Griffintaur

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

Alrighty. It seems I've been accepted. Thank you all so much for your time and effort going through that wall of text. I've been told by many breaking down the long paragraphs into smaller ones would make things easier, but I find it difficult to do so with how much of a protectionist I can be at times.

Now , I presume I'm free to start wherever I please. Is there any place in particular I begin, or just wherever finds my interest?

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

Firstly, I apologize about the length assuming it's an issue. Having the character for nearly two years has allowed me to maximize his profile. Now, to answer your questions in order.

As it stands, Pride Empowerment is the source of his power to put it simply. After such a long time with the power, he has pretty much allowed it to consume it and pretty much relies on it, pridefully of course.

I'm happy to hear his array of powers is acceptable. I was contemplating removing all but the Pride Empowerment for the sake of simplicity, but I'm glad to know that may not be the case.

Finally, for his weapon. Inspired by the similarly shaped weapon from the Dynasty Warriors games (where I see you got those pictures from the wiki), Tharraleos' takes more inspiration from the latter. Specifically, it looks like this

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

Tharraleos Polemistis said
I seem to have been mistaken then. I presumed the strength and speed displayed in the respective tiers were a character's full potential. Since speed is not a large part of Tharraleos' abilities, I can reduce that down to a consistent 300 mph regardless of pride power. If the remaining abilities continue to present an issue, I can simply remove them no problemEditWith all that's been said, perhaps it would be a better and more sensible idea to put Tharraleos at tier 7. I'm aware he is overpowered to certain extents and I make all attempts to balance him out. I'll continue to do so even with him at tier 7, so I'll make that tiny adjustment to his profile.

So um, any response to this?

Monster and Supernatural Extermination Squad

IceHeart said
@ Tharraleos Polemistis: The problem I see about being part of a neutral alignment is that you'll kind of be stuck out of the loop quite often. You could still live at the Pandora Complex but refuse to be an 'agent' I suppose. Basically I just don't want you to make an outside neutral character and then feel like you have no one to interact with on a regular basis. I'll leave it up to you but I will say being affiliated with the squad would be your best bet.

Okay. I understand that completely. In that case, I'll make my character a reluctant member of the squad. Because i'm lazy and copying then pasting parts of the bio into your cs on a mobile device is almost impossible, would it be possible to give a link to his profile on here?

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/67112/posts/ooc

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

I seem to have been mistaken then. I presumed the strength and speed displayed in the respective tiers were a character's full potential. Since speed is not a large part of Tharraleos' abilities, I can reduce that down to a consistent 300 mph regardless of pride power. If the remaining abilities continue to present an issue, I can simply remove them no problem

Edit

With all that's been said, perhaps it would be a better and more sensible idea to put Tharraleos at tier 7. I'm aware he is overpowered to certain extents and I make all attempts to balance him out. I'll continue to do so even with him at tier 7, so I'll make that tiny adjustment to his profile.

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

I submitted a double post by mistake. I'm not even sure how it happened

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

Lalliman said
As for my commentary on Tharraleos:As Schradinger already said, there are no concrete levels of his abilities stated. I understand that they’re variable, so I propose this is how you fix it: state the lowest possible level of each ability, how it is when he feel particularly prideless, and state the highest level currently available (seeing as you limited him to tier 4). The things that you need to specify this way are:- Strength, speed and durability- The size, speed, fire rate and accuracy of his razor wind attack- The range and power of his breath attack- The power of his ground slam (in terms of what effect it has on people)- The speed at which he travels through the groundTwo more minor things:- You should probably put a range limit on telekinesis. Otherwise his telescope eyes allow him to use it from miles away. Then again, that probably won’t come up in this arena, so I can overlook it if you insist.- You mention the razor wind attack can cut metal, but metal is far too general of a term to be of use. Steel is probably what you mean.

Alrighty, I was going to edit the actual profile, but things are rather tedious with a mobile device. As such, could I simply list these prerequisites separately?

Maximum strength and speed are already accounted for with the tier 4, being 10 tons of force maximum (which can potentially tie in with durability as well) with mach 1 being the top speed. Minimum I'll say 500 pounds and 150 mph.

As for his air related abilities; the size and fire rate of the razor wind will stay consistent, in which they're 2 feet wide and can launch these once per 15 seconds. The speed can range from 200 mph minimum to 600 mph maximum. The range of the breath can range from a minimum of 15 feet to 150 feet maximum. The force of it can range from 50 pounds of force, to 200.

Onto the earth related abilities. The tremor has the same effect on people no matter what power level he's at. It always serves as a means to cause imbalance. That's not to say it can't destroy the area around him, but what happens then varies on the location. The speed at which he travels through the ground I'll make simple and simply state he travels at half the speed as normal.

Since putting a range on the Telekinesis doesn't seem to be mandatory, I'll leave it as is. I'll be sure not to overuse that ability nor overly exploit it.

And finally, yes, I did indeed mean steel instead of metal.

With all that, I believe it's everything. If any problems or concerns arise, feel free to let me know

Monster and Supernatural Extermination Squad

This seems pretty interesting. I shall definitely join this. I just have one question. I will be using an anthropomorphic Griffin as a character. Is it mandatory he be a part of the squad, or can he be of a neutral alignment? Meaning he's not with the humans, nor against them, just simply attempting to survive solo.

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

Okay. So it appears the only thing I need to do is specify the lowest and highest potential of a few abilities. Simple enough. I shall edit the profile when I can, perhaps during my time off of work tomorrow

The Everlasting Arena: Character Deposit

I mostly agree with you, Schradinger. In regards to the amount of martial arts mastery Tharraleos has access to, he would be tier 7. However, since I'm aware my Grffin is overpowered (somewhat reasonably at least), I was putting an unofficial limit on the pride power, meaning the limits presented in the tier 4 description will be applied to the character in an effort to balance him out somewhat.