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The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Alright.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

This is an interesting design, I like it.

Question: What is the distance between the inner city wall and fortress wall at it's closest point? (That really narrow bit)

Word Syndrome [fantasy, mystery, modern, detective(?)]

I'm just rolling with what comes to mine really, and perhaps poking at what seems to stick out.

On that note, allow me to illustrate my concerns with point four once again. This is a city of eight million people. So, imagine, the Council passes a new law establishing a public health service, and creating the requirements for access to public health services. Understandably, they have things to do and can't afford for their personal offices to be inundated with applications for the public health service, so in the legislation they establish the "Oblak Health Administration" granting it a certain amount of funding, appointing it's leader(s), and giving it the authority to administrate and regulate the public health care system. That's what I meant when I said Federal Departments, even a city needs them when it's four times larger than Miami.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Ellri said
many characters, many voices, all speak.(why would that be a provocation?)Anyways, we're changing the terraces now. Current base number is 15m. A bit easier to make up transport between them with that.

With the position of the terraces, I may change the gate number on the Inner City wall. Which would require a post edit from me as well.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

The terraces are 50 meters tall? :o

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

Sep said
This is Ellri we're talking about. Likely they are more likely to make it really hard for their own invading forces and stuff up their own plan.

I know, I just felt obligated to mention.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CONTRA!!!

You know Miami well, I was born there but now I live about twenty miles north in Broward County.

The Relics (No Plot/Fantasy/Character Driven/Worthy of Skepticism)

@Ellri, don't feel the need to follow my word on this to the letter, since you're the one doing the designing. As long as you don't leave some drastic structural vulnerability.

Scarred for life in a good way

So I got to about 22 seconds, and yeah I'm not watching that until the sun is up tomorrow.

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8/10 For Genkutsuou, fabulous.