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Sep said
For my Egyptian Folk. I have several images I like for certain purposes but the Capital will be in the more humid area near the sea. I got a good image for a trade hub in the desert (As a pit stop for people crossing the desert)


Do you have any specific features you're looking for in the capital?
Double post, while I've got it might as well suggest cities.



Ellri said
Relic: Power makes sense, but the fact that there's two parts kinda contradicts with all the other relics so far.


Don't we have other relics with more than one effect? Such as Echo's?

Sep said
Looking for images of the main city, pity most the ones I like people made on minecraft.


The main city of your Egyptian nation, or Amaryth?
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Ink-berry said
It won't be too much control, just with areas that have a high concentration of dust, and only if the parts are small enough. Like, fine / possibly dust that's almost powder-y. (He won't be able to control small pieces of rock, though.) I'm guessing his powers work best indoors, where dust gathers more easily. If the dust's made of the right material, then he could probably stir up a miniature sand / dust storm, mostly as a defense. For offense, I guess he could... make the dust get into his opponents' eyes...? I guess he'd be able to absorb some of it, as well, although that wouldn't be great for his health and probably make him all coughy for a while.


If he can move dust at the speed to create a sandstorm, he can force it down someones throat and into their lungs.
@Maki, Ellri did a good job of pointing out all of the faults in the character which I noticed when reading and you can treat their advice as mine when editing. Although I do not mind earring on a male character, that's just personal taste.
WilsonTurner said
How so? I don't know anything about Korean vets, just a bit about Afghan and Iraqi vets.


Just kidding, to be a Korean war vet I'd need to be in my 60s.
Ink-berry said
Blargh, one more question before I start finalizing things. Would the ability to control dust be too OP for a power?


It sounds like it can be used very opportunistically, how absolute is his control?
WilsonTurner said
I also declare myself the most skilled and/or experienced combat person of this roleplay, since I just killed a large 3-foot rattler [Diamondback] with a 30 pound steel homemade hammer, while keeping two very enthusiastic dogs away from it.

Adrenaline and fear can affect oneself strangely. Once Myth is completely out of danger, including the fire, then I'll give a bit of oh-god-oh-god-oh-god and he'll- yea it'll be a good post.


*cough*Korea veteran*cough*
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