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Oh, just a clean up then. That's alright.
Sorry; I got confused. All I saw was the character sheet thread; there wasn't a separate link for accepted ones and applications, so that was a tad unclear.
It's okay though. At some point either someone will flake or you'll decide to expand, and I'm patient.

Also, in what way does the character "leave much to be desired"? If you want me to alter or improve it, I'll need you to at least be specific as to how.
I posted my thing on the character sheets page. Let me know if it's okay.
Name: Pandora Agent "Jack Smith", Agent #[REDACTED]

Race: Human

Appearance:

Age: 28.

Gender: Male

Bio: Jack is a no nonsense, level headed member of the same Organization that created the Supernatural Extermination Squad. His primary objective is to observe and report on squad members, compiling as much data as possible on their physiology and psychology, regularly engaging members in regular conversation and interviews, and if they consent, physical examinations. His second primary objective is to accompany them in the field, providing support as deemed necessary. Jack is the guy who calls in cleanup crews and scientists to collect the bodies of whatever's dead or crippled. His secondary objective is to keep as much of the team as alive an intact as possible.
Naturally, his primary objective means living at the Pandora Complex in close proximity to beings that may or may not be able to make Jack explode with a casual thought. This does not please Jack.

Skills/Powers: Despite only having physical abilities of an athletic human, Jack is a skilled marksman, demoman, and emergency medic, with notable observational skills.
Additionally, he has a sizable budget and some degree of R&D access. As a human, it's necessary for him to plan fights and use highly specialized gear picked out in advance. Plastic explosives are shipped to the Complex fairly regularly.

Other Things of Interest: Despite the necessity of a wide arsenal, Jack has one constant companion: a handgun resembling a bulkier 1911A1, designed to fire specialized armor piercing, explosive incendiary rounds, capable of punching a hole in a human torso the size of a cantaloupe. Jack's still not entirely sure it's enough to injure the tougher beings.
This looks like a thing I will join. Give me a minute.
Jangel13 said
then understand this, is not a personal attack. leave, your not joining this roleplay


But why?
TheMM00s3 said
........ Seriously?... Just go away. You're not accepted so go harass someone else.


This isn't even harassment. I'm asking legitimate questions as to the nature and setting of the game, and offering critique and advice on how to make it more sound.

Harassment would be if I just spammed scat porn or gore.
Jangel13 said
diamond was our last accepted cs and even if not im not going to let invisible in because he harassed this entire rp simply to keep his character the same. This rp is closed


First off, it's IncredibleBee.
Second, I haven't even harassed anyone. I simply asked for a legitimate reason why there was an arbitrary age limit, which then led to questions on the setting in general. You shouldn't take inquiries into the setting as personal attacks; it's poor form.
TheMM00s3 said
Well neither I nor Jangel have approved him, but I'm pretty sure we are closed after Diamond had joined.


Actually you closed after Kilo, and let Diamond in because... I'm not entirely sure why.
Okay it is altered for whatever reason.

Name - Toramaru

Age - 20 years

Looks - Toramaru's physique is very imposing, and taut with corded muscle. His hair is long and wild, and his eyes are wild-looking. Typically, he wears a Hawaiian shirt, and sports tape around his hands and knuckles.

Personality - Toramaru is brash and headstrong, possessing a strong will and fierce aggression. This is tempered by a strong understanding of loyalty, camaraderie, and honor. That said, he's still a rowdy, violent type. His hobbies are Pachinko, sightseeing, and push-ups.

History - A hot-headed delinquent, Toramaru spent most of his days in Satsuma, playing Pachinko and on many occasions, beating the tar out of other delinquents, sometimes pompadoured, others less so. That changed when, while delivering flowers to his sister's grave, found a group of errant Dragon goons defacing it. Enraged, Toramaru has traveled to Tokyo to attack the enemy head-on, starting his tale of vengeance.

Fighting style - Brawling.

Strengths - Nigh-inhuman strength and toughness, and an indomitable fighting spirit

Weaknesses - He's more of a punch first, ask questions to whoever's still conscious kind of guy. Additionally, he has qualms over fighting young women.

Master - None; Toramaru is self-taught.
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