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Current Just vanished for a while. Will explain myself soon. If anyone's watching, I WILL be contacting the RPs I've been in by 9/4/2015.

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Is dere gonna be a FITE?!
"You don't have one," the thuggish looking boy muttered, shoving his oversized cloak at the dwarfish young mage. His voice was shaky with nervousness - or fear? "I can give you this if you let me stay. There is nowhere else to go. I don't want to leave."

Sigh. Gabby didn't actually sigh, but her brain made that sound in her head. She eyed the offered cloak for a moment, then reached out to take it, feeling it over. It had certainly seen better days, and it would probably drag behind her unless she cut it... so she gave it back.

"Let's say you owe me a favor instead, hm?" Gabby said with a quirked eyebrow. "A favor is worth a bit of silence, I think. Of course, I doubt anyone will ask questions at all once we're on the road. Just try to be less..."

Less what?
she wondered. Less frightening? Less shady? Less like a killer on the run? In truth, she wasn't sure what to make of the boy now. He still seemed the very picture of a criminal, but he was very afraid - and probably desperate - of that she was sure. Of course, such fright could make someone kill another...

"Less of a mess," the mage settled for, throwing her hand up into the air as she couldn't find the right phrase. "Look: if you pop out of the wagon now they'll assume you're a stowaway. If you jump out later, they might assume you're a thief, bandit or worse. You should walk alongside the caravan with everyone el--"

"Alright, we're moving out!" shouted the sergeant-or-whatever with the scruffy face. Gabby named him Grouch. The wagons started moving immediately.

"They certainly don't waste any time," Gabby grumbled, stepping away from the wagon. "Don't do anything stupid, alright? If anyone in this motley bunch of nobodies is going to be handy in a scuffle, you're likely to be one."

Mostly because you're probably a killer on the run,
she thought to herself.

With the wagons moving, Gabby had to pick up her pace. It wasn't the sort of pace she liked; her short legs weren't built for striding. Still, it was better than being left behind...

She noticed another caravan guard - he seemed Grouch's equal in grouchiness - riding up to a trio of chatty individuals, snapping something to them about "not a social club." She took that as her cue to look very busy walking and glancing at the countryside. Yes, she was so busy and so very alert. Yes.

It was going to be a long day.


Free Workers of La Parranda



La Parranda, President's office - 10:00 p.m.


Martin was worn out, completely worn out. Though the walls around him were painted a soft green and the floor was made of good plastiwood - the city was, at least, recovering enough to start rebuilding that which was destroyed - his clean if plain surroundings did little to assuage his aching head. Though he had not been breaking ore from the walls as he did in the past, the talks with the officials of the government, with Marshal Asturias, and the preparations in the factories had been more than enough to make him wish there were more hours in the day so he could sleep.

But there was still so much to do. Wearily, he opened up the holovid monitor on his computer, watched it flare into life, and then began preparing a series of messages.







I like both those ideas. The first one is essentially what I was trying to say, but you worded it much more nicely. The second one... just fits, though, especially with them being historians.

I'll sleep on this and decide in the morning. Thanks for the advice.
1: I don't think we want the reason the Visha fell to be summed up in one app by one specific player's backstory.


I was trying to avoid that while saying "they were one of the many factors," just like all the other rebellions and all that. I should be able to change that. Basically, the point was that their "rebellion," while it didn't involve killing, was as serious as the other rebellions in the empire. Thoughts on how to keep that core concept while making the change?

Didn't realize they were normal sized. That won't be difficult to fix. I'll do that now.
Yep, that's the only person I know of that hasn't posted.

I'll just chew on the accent thing. But trust me, if I pick an accent, I'm not going to start doing something like dropping g's and replacing them with apostrophes, or gutting words to sound like... something else. It'll be more about word choice than anything.

Just... wanted to make sure nobody was afraid I'd do that.

(Though dropping g's is pretty chill for certain stories. I just don't see Gabby or Varyans in general doing that.)
Okay. So, I didn't write up a government section yet, and I may reorganize things a little, and I'd be okay with having the area I picked out trimmed down in size, BUT... I have the skeleton of an application ready to go. Here it is.

If anything doesn't jive well with the themes of this RP, let me know.

Two asides: first, I wound up dropping the "worship the Vishput as gods" idea. Secondly, I was listening to this the whole time: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IQ5xCl8lnl0

That background ambiance may have influenced my writing.

That answer works for me just fine. I know how to approach the final aspect of the race now, thanks.

The CS should be completed soon.
One thing I don't remember seeing talked about: magic. Does it exist? If so, can a species be born with the ability to wield it?

I hate to ask these sort of questions because it probably isn't giving the right impression, but I want to ask before I proceed. I'm deciding on something concerning this species, and whether magic exists is important.
I see, in Region 5... Going to read over the Regions again to get a better idea of things before I finish my sheet, thanks.
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