IVIasterJay

Naruto: Shinjitsu no Mon

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Tour de Kalos

I'll have my CS up shortly. I just need to dig up my original pokemon trainer CS and edit it a bit.

Edit: It's done now.

Name: Jay Rayne
Age: 24

Appearance:

Role/Position: Unova Ex-Champion, and holds the standing record for least amount of pokemon used to defeat the champion
Gender: Male
Region of origin: Icurrus, Unova
Current Region: Castellia, Unova

Back Story:

Jay Rayne grew up in Icirrus City, and at the time he was the only child his age in the city. Like any kid his age with no peers to play with, Jay was extremely lonely and bored. So what did he do? He explored the surrounding forests. While exploring in the wooded moors, the young Jay Rayne bumped into another child who'd had the same idea. Jay made his first friend that day: a young girl with long black hair and beautiful azure eyes. Ava. The two played and played, happy as two kids could be.

Because Jay was the only kid his age in the small city of Icirrus, his parents simply assumed that he'd made an imaginary friend, happy that he was finally having some fun for once. Ava and Jay explored every inch of the moors and surrounding forests, never tiring of the other's company for an instant. It was a while before Jay found out that Ava wasn't real. She didn't exist. She was just an illusion created by a lonely Zorua to keep a boy as lonely as herself company. But Jay didn't care what she was, so long as she was his friend. They continued to play together, Ava sometimes appearing as a girl and sometimes as a small black fox, right up until the day winter reared its ugly head. Once it started to snow, Ava told Jay that she was leaving the area with her family. He was sad that his one friend was leaving, but he knew there was nothing he could do to change the fact. He'd never met this family of hers, but from what she spoke of them, he didn't want to.

A few years passed, and Jay was now eight. His explorations had turned with time into hunts. He was going to be the best trainer in the world, so he practiced hunting and capturing pokemon, which wasn't as easy without any pokemon of his own, or even any pokeballs. On one particular hunt, just as Jay was about to pounce on an unsuspecting Vanillite, someone grabbed him from behind and pulled him backwards. Ready to yell at whoever had attacked him and let his quarry escape, he spun, and froze. "Ava?"

The two were inseparable, and this time Jay even convinced Ava to come into the city with him. Everyone, including his own parents, were surprised to say the least. And even Jay was surprised by her as well when she dropped her illusion for him. She had evolved during the time he hadn't seen her, into a dark and elegant Zoroark. She didn't leave him again, her evolution giving her freedom from her pack's control. When Jay turned ten, Ava became his first pokemon, his partner in crime for the long journey to come.

Jay and his partner rose through the ranks like a flaming arrow, incinerating all in their way to the top. Along the way, Jay assembled a team of pokemon. His team grew slowly, as Jay never just took a pokemon out of its natural habitat. It had to want to go with him. "Ava" the Zoroark was his queen, sweeping the competition with ease without letting any of jay's other pokemon get a chance to do anything. His second pokemon was a Tyranitar, nichnamed "Gula", raised from a Pupitar that had attacked him. Jay had been impressed with the creature's ferocity even then, and he'd asked it to join him. His third pokemon was given to him as an egg, which hatched into an Eevee. "Luxuria", or "Lux" is Ava's baby. Jay was hardly even allowed to hold her. Jay beat the Unova champion with just three pokemon, a record that still holds. For three years, Jay has won every battle that he's used Ava in. He was forced to allow trainers to battle him without Ava because there was some bad publicity after a challenger had a mental breakdown from what Ava showed him with her illusions, but a few weeks passed and still no one had beaten him.

One day as the champion was taking a walk through the same forested moors that he had explored as a child, Jay was challenged to a battle by a man seeking his title, and Jay couldn't refuse a battle. The man sent out a Gardevoir against the legendary Ava, and Jay forfeited the battle. He instead chose to beat the man's face in. Jay's sharp eye saw the signs. For what he had done to that pokemon, the man had deserved so much more than he had gotten. Jay was forced to resign from his position, and his advisors had him go to work at a pokemon rehabilitation center to wipe away some of the red marks on his record. The Gardevoir followed him, not willing to leave the man that had saved her. Jay renamed her "Solitaire" or "Sol". Besides Ava, she's the closest out of his pokemon to Jay's heart.

He's been working in the center for a few years now, just keeping his head down and acting like a model of good behavior. Two more have joined his ranks in that time: "Acedia" or "Ace" the Talonflame was the first of them. It was dropped off anonymously to a pokemon center, severely injured, one wing broken in three places, the other in two, and a gash across its head. The nurses at the center let Jay, or rather, Solitaire, heal the injured bird's injuries, and when it was fully healed, Jay asked it if it would like to take revenge on those who had done such a thing. That set Jay's team at five.

The other is a similar, if sadder, story. A Garchomp came in, carrying injuries unlike anything a pokemon battle could produce. It's side was completely shredded, as if it had taken the blast of a powerful explosive. What sort of person would have done something like this? He didn't know, and the Garchomp couldn't tell him. Jay asked the Garchomp if it hated the person who had hurt it, and it told him that it did. That was all Jay needed to hear. "Ira" became his sixth pokemon, and a day later, he died. Working at the center was suppoed to cool him down, stop him from lashing out, but it had the exact opposite effect. Jay saw what pokemon were forced to endure at the hands of their trainers, and now he'll punish anyone who mistreats a pokemon. All it took was one incident, an attack on an "innocent" trainer, and Jay was forced to leave Unova.

He's changed a lot from that lonely, happy, naive, little boy that Ava met so long ago. She will be with him to the end, no matter what he does with his life.

Pokemon:
(These are your six you will use in the tournament. Levels should be around 70 Max. Any request for Shiny pokemon must message me before hand with a reason why.)

Pokemon Name: Zoroark
Nickname: Ave Dominus Nox (Only she calls herself that though, everyone else just calls her Ava, or Ave if they want to be really polite.)
Level: 70 (0,000,000,000,000,000,000...)
Gender: F

Appearance:

Though usually it’s more like this:

Any other notable distinction:
Jay's first pokemon, and his lifelong partner. She passes for human most of the time. Ava is an absolute monster to cross. Her awesome physical strength strikes terror into the hearts of her partner's opponents, only second to the terror beheld in her illusions. She's usually fun-loving and kind, but that changes suddenly and without warning. Ava speaks and acts like a human when she uses her illusion to look like one. She acts as a translator between pokemon and Jay.

Pokemon Name: Tyranitar
Nickname: Gula
Level: 65
Gender: M

Appearance:

Any other notable distinction:
Gula doesn't care about doing anything. Nonsense and frivolity pisses him off. So basically, his emotions range from apathy to homicide and back again. He is the only one capable of matching Ava in brute strength, but he has none of her speed or planning. His normal strategy is to tank everything and end battles in one attack. You do not want to be on the receiving end of one of his Hyper Beam. You will die.

Pokemon Name: Vaporeon
Nickname: Luxuria "Lux"
Level: 55
Gender: F

Appearance:

Any other notable distinction:
Lux is a spoiled little brat. It's totally Ava's fault. She may be the weakest out of Jay's pokemon, but underestimate her and you lose. Jay developed the strategy she uses in battle, which he's dubbed "mist armor". Lux holds considerable power of Jay's other pokemon, as she is the only one who doesn't have to fear Ava's wrath.

Pokemon Name: Gardevoir
Nickname: Solitaire "Sol"
Level: 67
Gender: F

Appearance:

Any other notable distinction:
That image does not convey the crazy that is inside Solitaire. Sol is obsessed with Jay. She kind of got her original trainer, the person who bred and hatched and evolved her, nearly killed, and she felt all of his thoughts and emotions as it happened. And she enjoyed it. She could have stopped Jay, should have, but she didn't want to. Solitaire is good friends with Ava, but sees her as a romantic rival for Jay. Sol has only ever known love by what her old trainer taught her, so that's what she thinks will happen with Jay. Ava knows this but hasn't said anything to Jay. She wants to see what he does.

Pokemon Name: Talonflame
Nickname: Acedia "Ace"
Level:55
Gender: M

Appearance:

Any other notable distinction:
Yes, Jay has a flyer. Ace is his name, and speed is his game. Ace burns his opponents first, then uses his blinding speed to accumulate thousands of tiny attacks in seconds, there and gone before the opponent even has a chance to react. Instead of the normal way, Jay rides Ace by standing on his back in a way similar to a snowboard. A flaming, flying snowboard.

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Name: Kumori Yotsuki
Nickname/Alias: Leaky Kumo , Coo (like a dove call)
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 12, born on 2/14/464
Age Appearance: 11
Sexuality: Yes. He’s 12, how the heck should he know?

Parents: Father: Agini Hozuki | Mother: Koemi Yotsuki
Length and build 4’06” and wiry; small and thin yet having some muscle and good agility
Weight 79 lb
Favorite weather and season A winter morning with snow falling oh so lightly, just enough to fill the air and chill the face, but not enough to keep the sun’s light from making the entire world sparkle.



Village: Kumogakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: None

Clan/Bloodline: Yotsuki


Rank: Genin (D)

Chakra Nature: Cloud, though of the five basic nature transformations, his affinity is for Water.



Appearance:



Personality: Kumori is an open book, with nothing to hide, no secrets, and no duplicity of any kind. He feels things more powerfully than others, and he doesn’t hide his emotions, instead letting them pour out of him in bouts of rage, tears of joy, crushing depressions, and the most honest smile that has ever graced the world with its existence. Kumori loves with all his heart, and would sacrifice his entire being in an instant if it would help a friend.

To an outside observer, it would seem a lot like Kumori has pure sugar running through his veins because he is excited so easily. However, after the rush comes the crash, and boy does he crash. Kumori becomes fatigued incredibly fast, to the point of dozing off when he’s walking or standing upright. While he can keep himself aware through sheer willpower for a while, he is out like a light the second he lets himself relax. This odd phenomenon is due to his unique chakra nature that causes his body to constantly leak chakra, which makes it appear as if his body is "leaking" wispy clouds, hence the nickname “Leaky Kumo”.



History: Let’s start off with explaining who the Yotsuki clan is, or at least who they were. One of the oldest ninja clans in Kumogakure, the Yotsuki used to be powerful and a name known by all in the Land of Lightning. They controlled one of the few Kekkei Tota in existence: the Cloud Release. Lacking the sheer destructive power of its cousin, the Dust Release, the Cloud Release was responsible for some of the most potent support techniques the world had ever seen. Unfortunately, or fortunately if you choose to look at it that way, the Yotsuki clan slowly stopped producing children capable of using the clan’s Kekkei Tota. For some reason, their bloodline technique was fading away. The Yotsuki clan was no longer useful, so they were forgotten by most and faded into obscurity just like their treasured technique.

Enter Kumori’s mother, Koemi Yotsuki. As the clan had stopped producing ninja of any talent, they found themselves with the freedom to do whatever they wanted with their lives. Koemi decided to travel the world, and it was during her travels that she went to Kirigakure and met Agini Hozuki. The two got along great and loved each other deeply. They still do, more than a decade later.

Kumori was born nine months later, on a cold winter morning. The mists had let up that day, and snow fell gently through rays of sunlight. It was the most beautiful thing either had ever seen. It was quickly apparent that Kumori wasn’t normal. His fatigue and falling asleep in odd situations was the first sign, one all Yotsuki were taught to recognize. Koemi’s son had been born with the Cloud Release; the first child in more than a decade. Her clan ordered him return to Kumogakure immediately, which she did, and she brought with her her new husband, married on the boat in the waters between Kirigakure and Kumogakure.

Agini went to the Hozuki clan leader the day before he was scheduled to leave Kirigakure and told him that he was leaving and why, omitting who his soon-to-be wife was and why they were really leaving. The leader grudgingly agreed to let Agini go, with one condition. A sealing jutsu was applied to Agini’s back that will kill him instantly if he ever tries to speak of the Hozuki Hiden to a non-Hozuki or if he uses the Hiden. Stripped of name and Hiden, Agini left Kirigakure the happiest man alive.

Kumori was raised in a loving home, with a loving father and a terrifyingly loving mother, in a village where everyone adored him for what he was. The Yotsuki clan leader, the last remaining Cloud user, was supposed to teach Kumori how to use his techniques, but the leader was very old, and he died when Kumori was just five. That left Kumori’s parents to try and teach him, but they didn’t even know where to begin. Since his father couldn’t teach him Cloud Release, Agini has instead been teaching his son how to use water release, something he has some talent for due to being half Hozuki. Kumori is currently trying to convert the water techniques he’s learned into cloud techniques, but it isn’t working so far. He knows that it is possible in theory, but he doesn’t know that doing so is an incredibly difficult task that a Genin shouldn’t even be attempting. He can convert his cloud chakra into water and use it, but he just can't figure out how to used the cloud chakra on its own.

Theme Song:

Enigma

Weapons/Items[u][/u]:

Weapons or Items

Name of Weapon or Item: Just the basics: kunai, shuriken, caltrops, some explosive tags, and some wire.

Skills/Abilities

Contagious Emotions, Kumori can feel the emotions of those around him, and often empathizes with those emotions to the point where he feels the same way. This works in reverse as well; anyone who is absorbing his cloud chakra will feel Kumori’s emotions. It can become a really terrible feedback loop when Kumori becomes sad, but most of the time it just puts everyone around him in a good mood. This is actually a sensor-type trait of his Cloud chakra that he is completely unaware of.

Enhancement, jutsu used around Kumori absorb his leaked chakra to have slightly increased power. This is another support application of Cloud chakra that Kumori is completely clueless about. A powerful technique could actually pull cloud chakra right out of Kumori's body, which would be incredibly dangerous for Kumori.

Reaction Speed, Kumori feels an attack the instant before it connects, giving him supernatural reaction speed. This is actually a sensor-type trait of his Cloud chakra that he is unaware of. Because his body is constantly releasing cloud chakra, anything that enters the space around his body is felt in the wisps of Cloud chakra and then by Kumori. The full development of this trait is the most powerful of the Cloud Release sensory jutsu.

Terrible Chakra Control, Kumori has a stupidly difficult time controlling his cloud chakra. For one, it just keeps trying to drift off, and two, no one can tell him how to stop it from drifting off. Seriously, if no one else seems to have this problem, why does it keep happening to him? Kumori is working very hard on this point, probably putting in more time and energy into chakra control than any other ninja in his entire class. The problem is that he's trying to use the clouds like you would one of the basic chakra natures, which isn't how it is meant to be used. Once he has that epiphany moment of how to use the cloud chakra, he should have no trouble from then on.



Special Traits

As agile as a monkey, a very agile ninja monkey.

Negative attention span.

Nearly limitless energy and stamina, up until the second he crashes. Also, don’t tell him something is work, or all that energy will magically disappear.

He just won’t shut up!

When he wants something, he doesn’t give up until he gets it. This usually applies to food, but it carries over to him training himself.

Kekkei Genkai Kekkei Tota

Name of Kekkei Genkai Kekkei Tota: Cloud Release
Clan: Yotsuki
Description: The Cloud release is a combination of the Water, Fire, and Wind nature releases. While it does involve the literal creation of clouds (they have a slightly pink tinge, which Kumori enjoys), that isn’t the true power of the Kekkei Tota. Cloud Release is not meant to be used offensively. Cloud chakra harmonizes with other types of chakra, taking on the traits of that chakra, usually to increase their power. The strength of the resulting technique is increased by the amount of cloud chakra added, so if cloud chakra was added equal to the amount of chakra originally used in the technique, the combination would be two times the power. Inexperienced users, like Kumori, have no control over their chakra escaping their body or who absorbs it once it is in the air, but more experienced users can control how much is released and who receives it. Because the owner of the cloud chakra can still feel their chakra after it has left their body, the Yotsuki clan was renowned for their skill as sensors. As their chakra is absorbed by others, a skilled cloud sensor could tell things about the receiver based on how their body takes in the cloud chakra such as their their emotional state or the exact identity of the receiver if the user recognizes their chakra signature.



Jutsu:

Cannon Jutsu

Hiding in Mist Technique
Water Clone Technique
Water Release: Wild Water Wave

Custom Jutsu

Custom Jutsu

Name of Technique: Accidental Hiding in Clouds Technique
Type of Jutsu:Ninjutsu
Rank: F?
Range: About ten feet
Nature Type: Cloud
Handseals: None
Description: Kumori’s been trying to change his Hiding in Mist Technique to use Cloud chakra instead of Water. It hasn’t worked so far, but all of that training has had a hilarious side effect: Whenever Kumori sneezes, a large plume of clouds comes from his body.
Weakness: This is completely involuntary and quite disruptive, and Kumori has no clue how to stop it from happening. He’s… still working on it.

Summons

Summoning(s)

Nada

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@ Beta IWR might mean Impure World Resurrection.

Naruto: Shinjitsu no Mon

If Sinjun doesn't show up, I have a Kumogakure genin CS filled out for the other other Naruto RP that I could bring over here.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Gerontis, Shiro was edited and I made changes according to this post. His name was changed to Kumori because QT's character was named Shiro.

A Superpowered War

I'm going to have to withdraw my character from this. Good luck to you all though.

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QT said
Oh. I'm not saying I have a problem with it, I was just declaring an all out war between our characters that's all. Lol.

Bring it on! *crosses fingers and prays that it happens after he learns Cloud Release*

Also, I went through the entire CS and changed Shiro's name to Kumori (With a Chance of Meatballs).

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QT said
@IVIasterJay: If my Shiro meets your Shiro, I promise you a showdown. lol jk.

Oops, sorry 'bout that. I'll change his name to something else.