IVIasterJay

Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of the Void

Are you still accepting characters for this? I've got a mischievous Zorua that hasn't seen any action for too long.

Magi RP (IC)

Interested for sure. Magi is among the best anime I've watched in years.

Naruto: Shinjitsu no Mon

Chigetsu still has no history and no personality? ... Okaaay.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Summary of Team 5: "Boys, will you two please put your swords back in your pants? Hey, where'd Kumo go?"

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Kumori Yotsuki
Kumogakure Genin
Team 5

Kumo had a confused look on his face, thinking hard about something. Suddenly, he threw his hands up and fell backwards onto the ground. "Oh, I get it! He's the teacher! That means we have to catch him. Aw, that's boring, I want to be 'it'." Kumo turned his head around to watch his teammate trip over a wooden pole. "Wow, you must be stupid or something mister." Spinning his legs around, Kumo managed a perfect backflip off the ground to land on one foot, spinning around to face the direction their teacher had gone in the same fluid motion.

Taking on a parody of an old man's deep voice, Kumo clasped his hands behind him and, still facing away from the two older Genin, said, "Plan? Plans are for fools. In battle, chaos is the only plan you need." Kumo spread his arms wide. In a whisper he said, "No, no plan. Now men, is the time to..." Raising his voice to a high pitched battle cry, Kumo turned and winked at his teammates and finished with, "CHARGE!"

Whispering to himself under his breath, Kumo recited the handseals for the jutsu he knew. 'Dragon for power, tiger for flow, and hare for the rush." A jet of water came from Kumo's mouth, and he added the tiger seal to shape the water into a water copy of himself. The boy grabbed his much lighter water clone and threw it into the air, and with another blast of water he shot his clone, and the kunai it held - one in each hand and a third hidden inside its body, an explosive tag wrapped around the handle of the hidden one - through the air and across the field, right in the direction of the Jounin team leader. Kumo wasted no time and chasing after, as fast as his feet could carry him. If this was supposed to be a chance for each of the team five Genin to show what they were capable of, he wasn't going to hold anything back.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Lesli said
Hhmmm, Immune to a certain extent would be fine by me. I am against that he can absorb a high ranked fire technique or a special fire nature technique without any costs/risks.

So... get rid of his KG entirely?

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Lesli said
That said, your genin has my acceptance. I still have second doubts about your ANBU being able to absorb natural flames into chakra. That means he can just create a forest fire and have unlimited chakra. Would you mind to change that? Then you will have my acceptance on your ANBU as well.

How about he absorbs all fire, but only converts fire or heat that was created from another ninja's chakra into his chakra? He would retain immunity to being hurt by fire, but only enemy fire/heat would restore his chakra.

I'll get on editing the genin again.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Lesli said
@IVIasterjay :--- Your Ame ANBU :I would lower the speed. He already has a technique that 'greaty' increases his speed. Combined with his S ranked Technique, I wouldn't like to add an 'incredible' speed to it. It causes the S ranked to become already kind of OP in my eyes, together with some other techniques. If you would be so kind to reduce it to average speed than it has my approval.

Changed to "Average".

Your Konoha geninI am not sure if the weapon/hat is a joke or such. But a floating hat that eats people (sorry, I am trying not to sound too serious about it.), but that is a no from me.

The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body.

Also, she has sensing transmission, but no sensory technique? If she has one, would you please set in the jutsu link together with a little detail about how far and such? Else she wouldn't have much with the sensory transmission technique.

Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now.

The custom techniques are a bit hmmm. Well one can remove a tag, she can activated the jutsu on miles away. That needs to be toned down if its a D ranked technique. Not to mention that it sounds like an auto-hit technique (of course when the tag is planted, something that can't be done automatically ), but I am against auto-hitting technique. So if you would please change that please.The last custom technique is a bit confusing. If it fails, it works? Sorry, but I can't work my head around that one.

I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Kumori Yotsuki
Kumogakure Genin
Team 5

A man with violet eyes and hair as white as snow watched a boy with similar features. The man's soft eyes watched as his son meditated on a rock in the center of a shallow stream, running just a few feet from their home. A woman with dark brown eyes and hair wrapped an arm around his shoulders and whispered into his ear, "Agi, he's asleep again."

The man looked closer at his son, noticing how he was bent over slightly and beginning to tip to one side. Her sensing was as good as ever. Laughing, the man hugged his wife and said back, "So he is. Do we let him sleep? He's been at it for hours today, and it's only morning."

"He deserves it, but he can't today. In an hour he's supposed to meet with his new team leader and teammates." The woman made a handseal, and a wave of water came down the stream, knocking Kumori off his rock and into the cold water. "Don't want him to be late for an important day."

...

"I'm late I'm late I'm late!" Kumori raced down the steep slope at reckless speed, not wanting to be the last one to show up to meet his teammates. First impressions were important. The path took a sudden turn, following the edge of the cliff, and Kumo almost ran right off the edge. At the last second, he fell backwards, stabbed a kunai into the ground, and slingshotted around to follow the path. No way was he going to slow down, that wouldn't be as fun, or get him there as soon.

A minute later, a young boy with white hair and the violet eyes of his father burst into the clearing of the training field and, barring some amazing reaction speed, ran right into the only possible thing he could have run into: his new teammate who had arrived before him. "Hiya! Kumori Yotsuki is present!" Kumo waved energetically at his teammate, despite already being far inside his bubble of personal space. Kumo hadn't seen the young man sitting atop the rock nearby, so he assumed that the slightly older Genin before him was his teacher.

Naruto : The Rise of The New Generations

Haha, not surprising considering I wrote most of Taiyou at 3:00 in the morning. I'll go in and rewrite most of both characters in a bit. I forgot to include some things as well.