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So I set that up, pretty cleanly in my opinion, for Bree to remind Ethan that the only reason the boss of the mob (whatever his name might be) isn't behind bars right now is because Ethan killed their lead witness. But if you think Bree'd take it in a different direction, feel free.
Bree took the picture, and Ethan turned away from her. And, even as he took his first step, he did his best to ignore the numbers that told him there was no way he was going to be able to just leave like that. The human mind was fickle. If he timed it just right, maybe...

But then she called to him, begged him to stay, and he found his feet halting, and then turning him back towards her. He listened to her words numbly, and the numbers concurred with everything she said. In his mind he saw an imaginary clock, ticking away to the almost unavoidable deadline for the boy’s death. A deadline that Bree didn’t even know about. And he was just going to walk away, and leave that little boy to rot?

Finally the situation ripped a hole in his emotional barrier, and everything came slipping out. It let out the sadness, and the pity, but it also let out the flood of indignation against Bree that had built up while she was talking, and that was what had to come out first.

“Have you gone mad?” Ethan spat, only barely managing to keep his voice in check so as to not draw the attention of passersby. “What are you going to do, waltz me into the FBI office and say ‘Here! This man, who we just went to a whole lot of effort to prove is completely unconnected to the mob, can help us find Jacob. I can’t tell you how, but I promise he can.’ Or, even better yet, ‘He’s psychic,’ or whatever term you want to use, ‘and can direct us right to the doorstep where the kid’s being held’?

“You are asking me to destroy my alibi with the American government, throw away everything I’ve built and everything I love, risk getting imprisoned, or worse, captured and studied to find out how my brain works, all because the FBI is incapable of doing its job!”
They all have a hive mentality? I can see that with the Uetie, because I specifically said they did, and kind of with the Syastin, kind of, but may I ask how you got that from the Vollori and the Arak'un? I don't see them as being much different from a human's loyalty to a country, albeit a bit more strictly enforced in some cases.

Oh! Yes, each planet does have an individual ruling body. I suppose those would qualify... Now I feel a bit foolish. I didn't really think I specifically addressed any of them. I guess it is because I was pretty focused on the empire as a whole, and didn't really feel that I specifically addressed any of the individual ruling bodies that I said they aren't really there. I meant that I didn't think they were in a position to be discussed, I guess. But if you have something you want to say about each, by all means!

Thank you! It took me a little while, because I always believed that it would be impossible for a single government to control something as vast as a galaxy, but I'm glad I've made it work.

As far as the breaking of the "Prime Directive," that isn't done just on a whim, but is rather done through the councils. Think of it like drilling for oil in a national park. Normally it would never be allowed, but if the state of Texas would go into complete economic collapse if they didn't get that oil, and there was no other oil anywhere else, the Federal Government might allow Texas to drill in one of their National Parks. But before they would do that they'd try and find other oil, or bargain for oil from another country. The Empire wouldn't want to break their rule of protection, but they would to preserve one of the governments within their body if there was absolutely no other alternative. Does that make more sense?

Thank you very much for being willing to do this. Do you want to move on to a different area, or have you got anything else to say right now for this?
Sure. Some beasts people haven't tried to tame. In fact, I would say the majority of them are that way, especially since the beasts get more and more wild the further from human civilization, and there are probably many beasts people didn't know about.

I'm really imagining this world as being highly fortified but highly isolated cities, in the middle of wild territory filled to the brim with wild beasts and strange plants. The cities are ancient, originally built upon crossing ley lines of safety that prevent the most absurd of the beasts from drawing close with harmful intentions. That is why it is such a massive undertaking for your character to leave the city and try and go somewhere else.

I think just humans would probably be for the best.

The way I'm kind of seeing magic in this world is as specific traits that are linked to individual species, rather than having some aether pool that anyone or anything can draw from and shape in any way. So, since humans don't have any of those specific traits, they probably wouldn't really believe in magic, although I could see superstition running rampant.
Lets go with the more fantasy one. I'm in the mood for some funky beasts.
There aren't really individual ruling bodies in this, just the council. So I guess the "Empire" as a cumulative idea.
How could all of his illusions be shattered in such a short moment?

When the numbers had finally forced the awareness of Bree’s drawing presence into his conscious mind Ethan had stood petrified, like a deer in the headlights. Every muscle had become frozen and he prayed, vacant eyed, that their being drawn into the same area once again was nothing more than a coincidence. The United States wasn’t such a large area that it was impossible for two people who traveled frequently to find each other once every couple of months.

Right?

That was, at least, until he felt a presence by his right shoulder, something warm and electric and so frustratingly familiar. This was no coincidence. Or perhaps it was a coincidence, just the next one in the line of impossible coincidences that surrounded the two of them.

Ethan didn’t even look over at her and asked him not to run. He was frozen, and that probably was the only thing that kept him from disappearing right now. He was waiting for his beautiful belief that he had any control over his own life to come back, to remind him that he was not just some absurd toy for the universe.

Did he look calm? He hoped he looked calm. He hoped he didn’t look as though the floor had faded away from underneath him like it never was, and he was now falling into an infinite blackness.

But, after the faintest moment of hesitation, his hand took the photograph with an almost unnoticeable tremor. He was here and she was here, he might as well listen to what she had to say. But he only looked at the photograph for a split second, just enough to catch a glimpse of a childlike face, a hint of a smile, before he looked away, casting his gaze out to the ocean once more.

But it didn’t matter if he didn’t look at the photograph close enough to connect a person to the poor missing boy, because there was no way he was going to be able to unhear the quiet desperation in Bree’s voice. In that moment it finally occurred to him exactly how dire the situation must be for Bree to turn away from the police work that had guided her whole adult life, and request aid from something that must to her seem so supernatural. What would any of her colleagues say if they knew she was here?

The numbers turned slowly to focus on the boy... Jacob. The least he could do was give her the answers to her questions, for the sake of this boy, and the sake of his family. A family that undoubtedly loved him.

“He’s alive,” Ethan said, a faint trace of relief entering his voice. “And whoever has him isn’t intending to kill him yet. The chances he’ll be dead within the next couple of days are so small as to be insignificant.” He didn’t add that, in just over a week’s time, the probability rose suddenly to just under 50. For whatever reason they had taken this boy and kept him alive, it would all come to a head in eight days.

Concealing a shudder, Ethan turned his attention to location. Alabama, Alaska, Arizona... He went through the list almost as quickly as he could think, needing nothing more than a brief flash to see that the child wasn’t in the state. Finally, though, one rang true.

“Massachusetts.” He told Bree, fully turning to look at her for the first time. “He’s in Massachusetts. Not in Boston proper, at least not right now, but near it.” He glanced down at the picture one last time before trying to hand it back to Bree.

“I should go now,” he said. “And you’ve got a boy to find.”
Okay, good enough.

Go ahead and start with the government, since that is probably the most significant to me.
Dankeschön!

Now I just need to figure out how I want to respond. *headache*

Probably tomorrow. Today's already over.
I'm not sure what you are trying to offer for it. Are you telling me the things that... don't make sense? Or are you trying to tell me modifications it needs to be more playable? Or just what you'd do with it if it was your idea?
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