Jozarin

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Mana-Script Academy For The 'Gifted'

Name*: Damian Kenling
Photo: orig13.deviantart.net/0a61/f/2014/313/..
Age* 16:
Gender*: Male
Abilities*:
He is adept in the area of summoning spirits, angels, demons, and fairies, and binding, bargaining, or asking them to help.
He is good at ritual magic and alchemy.
He has knowledge about artifacts, and is excited to begin taking other classes.
How you could work in a team:
Support, trapping the opponents in magic circles, and providing potions and magic items for use; Attacking, by summoning more powerful demons - a risky business.
Personality*: Damian is a quiet type, keeping to the shadows. Because of his time spent in the company of immortals, he will take long whiles to consider things, and develops strong, steady emotions, that can last for days.
History: Damian was born in a small village in Ireland, just down the road from the ruins of a monastery. When exploring there, at the age of 7, he found a book of hermetic magic, written in Latin and Irish.

Young, Wild and Free

Shelly blinked once, then twice. God, was she not ready to wake up. And Missy wasn't there, having been woken, probably by those oafs next door, Maeson and that lot. She glanced at the calendar on the wall. Yep, that seemed right. Why couldn't they just let him sleep in? She would be willing to do the cooking on his days, if it meant that Miss would get the sleep She was due.

This was in no way a good start to the day for shelly chambers. Lonely, woken too early, and with pain in her wrists. She looked down at said wrists.

Rope burn. She would be wearing a long-sleeved shirt today.

She slipped into said shirt. A red one with a black collar, buttons, and cuffs. She buttoned it the whole way to the top, and slipped on a pair of black slim jeans. She slicked her hair back with care, and slipped into a pair of faded green sneakers, and set off to find Missy.

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@KnightsTemplar

OK. This is a bit of a nitpick, but it is annoying, and I would like more people to be aware of this:

Pronouns

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'I' is used to refer to yourself, acting in no extraordinary capacity.

'We' is used either to refer to a group you part of, or to refer to yourself, acting in a capacity as the head of a group.

'You' is used to formally refer to the person you are addressing, or informally refer to a stranger or distant acquaintance you are addressing.

'Thou' is used to informally refer to friends, family, close acquaintances you are addressing, and to formally or informally refer to children you are addressing.

'Ye' is used to formally or informally refer to a group of people you are addressing.

Him/Her/They/It is used to refer to someone or something else.

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P.S. You use 'whom' where 'who' is more correct.

Mana-Script Academy For The 'Gifted'

@JELDare, my character has been so revised.

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Caeling stood to the side of the proceedings, watching, and standing guard. So this was the victim of our diplomatic negotiation. She had a regal bearing, with the look about her of a dutiful queen. She would do quite well as ruler of Thirmos, and wife of his brother.

The people would be happy as well. They simply loved such proceedings quite well, with the grand appearances, and the fanfare. They would also take comfort in the possibility that Emilia's soft, womanly ways would temper her husband's aggressiveness.

Scanning the crowd for signs of trouble, he found none, but he did find someone doing the same thing. That must be the bastard. He had heard of him. A good enough fellow, to be sure, but with no respect. Regardless, he was the sort who you would want involved in a marriage involving Rowan.

He shifted in his armour. He would have to talk to the guard soon.

~~✶~Our Brightest Stars~✶~~

@WilsonTurner

You monster! How could you do that to Fluttershy?

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<Snipped quote by Jozarin>

Well i like the age gap of him being 19 cause it gives more credibility to Alarics have more time to have spending in raising Cael after 7 years of solidifying the Kingdom. But its up to you, I can work with which ever age you prefer.

@KnightsTemplar

I need to have spent some time as a knight, and 19 is only one year. I like 3-5 years, but I can push it down to 20, if you like, giving 6 years.

Young, Wild and Free

"Hey, guys, could you quiet down for just a few seconds? It's Saturday morning, and I need my beauty sleep."

The tall Jewish girl standing in the doorway wore a knee-length shift, and not much else. She rubbed her eyes, and her hair was wild in the morning. Missy had had a late night last night, and she wasn't the type of girl to take 'no' for an answer. She was also skilled at handling whips.

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@KnightsTemplar

I could maybe move my age down to 21. I originally made him 19, but then I did a bit more research, and decided that 23 makes more sense.