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"We could, all that remains to be seen is why you want to learn from me. To become stronger? Obviously. But for what purpose? I may be young, but I have millennia worth of knowledge to question these things."

Abaddon began to lead Lass to an exit out of the sewers.

"We'll teach you... but for now you should rest."
"You know what I mean," Abaddon responded. "The desire to kill and cause suffering to others to show the world you are not weak, or to get back at those you feel have wronged you. It's all natural, all that matters is how you harness that feeling."
Everything looks good now from here, you're in!
Abaddon grabbed Lass from behind, but did nothing else except bring him to his feet before releasing him.

"You have potential, as we thought. I don't need you tell me what it is you've gone through, it's apparent that it's related to family matters due to your young age. The time at which the murders you've commited also seemed to be around at random hours, meaning you have no parents or even guardians to look after you."

Abaddon assumed a normal stance, one that indicated the battle was over. Lass had done well in holding his own.

"And we understand the bloodlust. I had it too when I first became what I am, even killed a few suckers that didn't really need such a thing."
Abaddon hissed as the shadows entangled him. Seconds later, two blades began to fly towards him, prompting him to shift into his slithering form to escape them. He reformed behind Lass and swatted him with a set of tendrils.
So he was refusing to speak. Ok, Abaddon had a general idea of what may be going on anyway. With his age and feelings of rage and sadness... maybe familial problems... maybe he didn't even have a family at all. Such a shame, but sometimes the anger resulting from this could make for a truly capable meta. At least Lass was proving to be steadfast against such inquisitions, it wasn't uncommon for the virtuous heroes to try and reform Abaddon's style of behavior by bringing up personal matters.
S- Ok
H- Better
A- still needs a bit of improvement, it's bolderline invulnerability. All of the characters here are susceptible to injury from extended and massive physical damage. Additionally, the healing factor should be explained to see how capable it is. It is on the stature of Wolverine's healing, or is it a gradual healing that takes a while to repair wounds?
Z-Better, but the instant healing from the bolt might be a problem. Either choose between this healing or the Atlas healing.
A-Better
M-Ok. Just be sure not to misuse the powers.

Sorry if I seem to keep hounding you on the CS, I just want to make sure everything remains fair and balanced for everyone.
Abaddon snarled as he was hit by Lass's first shadow construct, flying backwards but managing to land and cling to a sewer wall. Tricky kid, slamming him against walls won't work as effectively.

"Then I'll say it again, tell us what you've supposedly suffer."

Abaddon said as he formed a blade from his arm to parry the shadow blade Lass had thrust towards him. Abaddon then proceeded to slam the back of the blade against Lass, speaking as he did so.
The tendrils on Abaddon back lashed backwards in an attempt to knock Lass away. They had enough force to send him flying back a few feet, but again, were not meant to wound grievously or impale.

"So tell us about yourself then. Why do you do what you do? For a greater purpose? Entertainment? We can teach you to do both...."

"#Teach you how to harness the hatred and anger inside of you. We feel it, we smell it. Sadness, anger, hate..."

"Kill in the name of vengeance, and merely terrorize those in guilt but undeserving of capital punishment... that is the first thing you must understand. We kill in the worst ways possible and enjoy doing it, but only those we feel deserve it..."

Abaddon sensed the vines of shadow coming for him. Predicted. Shadowbenders loved to attack from all directions, but Abaddon could produce just as many tendrils from himself to fend them off. He did so.
This RP needs more activity ;-;...
Yeah, weakening him is a good idea. Include an explanation of each power and its limits. Also, weaknesses.
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