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Rtron said Your CS


Dervs and I, over a discussion about your character found a few things still to be desired.

My first concern- Does the character have to be a Naga to work? This will be the central concern from which all others spring.

For one, Dervish and I found your personality a bit mixed up. This man is a killer going through an everlasting existential crisis that has turned him basically into what Rustin Cohle would call a metapsychotic. In your quest to make a Nietzschean ubermensch-minded, Beyond Good and Evil, Boethiah inspired independent assassin, you kind of got lost along the way and made Riddick the Freudian-Metapsychotic Naga Argonian. Sorry. Try researching what Boethiah is all about.

I would suggest looking at this for the Boethian angle you're going for or what I assumed you were going for.

To elaborate on the personality, he's a psychotic who has a modus operandi akin to a serial killer but he's kind and laid back. That's what we got from it. I can understand how being in the equivalent of a sensory deprivation chamber for a few months without breaks could fuck with someone's head, but they would be anything but nice and laid back. They'd be what you see on street corners today, wrapped in ragged clothing and sleeping under newspapers. Anything that makes you question reality that hard seriously fucks with you. I've seen it firsthand from someone who only spent hours in a similar situation to Zaskar and it ain't pretty. Two years ago and he still gets after-shocks from time to time. That's a story for a different time though.

That being said, if you change the personality, you'll have to change a good part of the backstory. That's the way things are. As it stands, Dervish brought up that he feels a lot of what happened to your character was made just to justify having those RIddick-like abilities.

We also caught something else, which was that he's an 8 foot tall lizard-man who specializes in stealth. I advise you change that. 8 foot tall things are rarely, if ever, stealthy.

And then, well, there's this. Dervs and I found this odd, and I kind of got disappointed knowing that this particular section came from someone who was involved, albeit for a very short time, with the first RP in this series to show such lack of research. Here it is.

Rtron said It was pure bad luck that found him in *insert name of Hammerfell city we’re in* when the Dwemer conquered it.


Look at the last few pages or posts. You don't even have to read it, just skim. It's easy, man. It starts with an H.

Also, some useful things to read when reading over my psycho-babble.

The medical definition of psychosis: "a symptom or feature of mental illness typically characterized by radical changes in personality, impaired functioning, and a distorted or nonexistent sense of objective reality."

Your character sounds like he's psychotic. Of course, that much was obvious already. I don't have to tell you this. But people with psychosis, as with many other psychological disorders or things of the same vein, like PTSD, come in varying degrees. For your character to want to kill people to reaffirm his existence while maintaining a "HO HO, TOP OF THE MORNING, PEEPS" kind of attitude is just something not found. He wouldn't be happy in the sense that you and I are happy when we beat that one fucking boss or find out our high school crush is willing to swap spit in the bathroom at prom. No. Oh no, he'd be manic if he felt any sort of happiness at all.

Put yourself in Zaskar's shoes. Imagine being stuck in a hole and reduced to nothing but a vague awareness, something that existed in a vacuum. The only something that existed in a void of nothing for months. A few months stuck in that whole could be very well be a thousand years, because that's what it feels like when you're in that state. It's terrifying, and then it comes, that point where you just accept it, the event horizon where you shed any memory of your existence in the flesh-shell that was you, or Zaskar. Then imagine the jarring transition into something you came to believe was a faded illusion at most. Furthermore, you feel you need to kill to know you exist. Most liekly, this would not be his reasoning. His reasoning may very well be, "This is fake. All of it. So why not do it? Nothing is real."

He would be anything but "a fairly friendly and laid back individual." He'd be depressed and racked with doubt about everything at best, unable to trust anyone and the simplest slip-up with reality could send him into a panic attack. It's terrible and terrifying.

A list of effects of your character's experiences. You should take these into account and you'll know why the character concept when applied with realism like how Dervs and I like is along the same lines as lycanthropy and vampirism. Fantasy universe or no, criminally psychotic is criminally psychotic.

Depersonalization: "Depersonalization (or depersonalisation) is an anomaly of self-awareness. It consists of a feeling of watching oneself act, while having no control over a situation.[1] Subjects feel they have changed, and the world has become vague, dreamlike, less real, or lacking in significance. It can be a disturbing experience, since many feel that, indeed, they are living in a "dream". Chronic depersonalization refers to depersonalization disorder, which is classified by the DSM-IV as a dissociative disorder."

Emotional Detachment: "Emotional detachment, in psychology, can mean two different things. In the first meaning, it refers to an "inability to connect" with others emotionally, as well as a means of dealing with anxiety by preventing certain situations that trigger it; it is often described as "emotional numbing" or dissociation, depersonalization or in its chronic form depersonalization disorder. In the second sense, it is a decision to avoid engaging emotional connections, rather than an inability or difficulty in doing so, typically for personal, social, or other reasons. In this sense it can allow people to maintain boundaries, psychic integrity and avoid undesired impact by or upon others, related to emotional demands."
Dusk said
Gonna have to possibly put that "Aye sir" activity-wise on hold, my grandfather passed today and it's going to take quite a bit for the pieces to be remotely picked up around here.I'll check in and stuff, but writing...not so much.


Hey, Fallout, just remember Dervs and I are here if you need to talk with anyone. I'll respect your privacy and just know we'll be here when you get back. Go and do what you need to.
Francis woke up. That was good, he guessed. He waited a few moments, listening outside for anything, the sounds of birds, wind, the people outside of the mosque. Oddly, it was quiet outside. He payed it no mind, opening his eyes and propping himself up against the wall. He rubbed his face with his hands, feeling the stubble and reminding himself to shave soon. Vendel snored softly beside him, curled in the corner about his sword. Wiping the sleep from his eyes and getting to his sore legs, the need to relieve himself grew. He looked about the room, seeing Qara'sion, Elayna, Zainat. Blade had not wandered in and he caught himself looking for Gorzath before he remembered the news. Gods-damned shame. He shook his head. He sniffed and cleared his throat, stepping around a few bodies to get to the door of the place. Moving aside one of the slabs of wood, he stepped outside, closing his eyes and shielding them from the morning sun. Undoing his pants, he wet the wall and sighed. He didn't want to think about the past day's events before feeling something poke against the back of his head.

He re-did his pants, an eternity of silence ensued as he stood there. If he was going to die, he'd be dead already, so whatever was against the back of his head must be leverage. The problem with that being after dying twice already, he cared a fleck of stray piss about leverage. He slowly turned around, greeted by the pale gray face of a dwemer and one of his friends. Behind him, there looked to be a full team, complete with one of the giant crabs. He gritted his teeth.

"By the authority of the Dwemer High Government, you are being arrested for insighting insurrection, destruction of property, aiding enemies of the sta-" Francis ducked to the side, putting all of his weight into shoulder-checking one of the dwemer and running back inside, throwing himself to the ground as the cracks of dwemer weaponry resounded outside. He got to one knee and shouted for the others to wake up before a section of the wall blew away with a deafening explosion that staggered Francis.

The chaos that followed shook the Mosque to its foundations and the blast detonated a hole in the East wall the size of a large table, jetting cracks snaked out from the now gaping hole and the early morning sunlight began to pour in, as if aiding in the fury. Plaster and dust crumbled from the ceiling as the foundation took a beating, and those inside were needless to say rudely awoken.

One of the rebel leaders in the Mosque, a woman named Leah, a Breton-Redguard mix, hurried to get the late-wakers to their feet. "Come on! They're going to bring the roof down on top of us!" she urged, hurrying to a window to take stock of the scene outside. How in Oblivion had the dwemer discovered the Mosque, she wondered, and mustered enough forces to flatten it? She could see dozens of heavily armoured soldiers, a quarter of whom were in the dreaded powered armour, and several stern, perhaps hateful faces gazed upon the centuries old structure as if willing it to die, consuming its occupents in its death throes. What had happened? She looked around, noticing Francis was missing, cursing. She called out his name.

Francis heard his name being called as he got to his feet. Vendel awoke in the corner and Francis waved him over before looking for whoever called his name. Seeing a stray blade sticking up out of the ruined wall's tumbled parts, he took the hilt in hand and returned to his search for the one who called his name. He looked around, seeing a woman who didn't quite look as Redguard as most he'd seen waving to him. He ran to her, "What is it?"

"Oh, I don't know, it couldn't be that there's a dwemer garrison standing outside bombarding us while you were nowhere to be seen. You look unhurt, which is fortunate." Leah said bitingly, looking out the window again, noticing that soul gems were being affixed to pedestals outside and several rifles were being leveled at the windows. "You must know that we cannot withstand the assault, we'll all be killed. You need to gather the others and get to the hidden passage beneath the floor; I know not where it leads to, but it was made years ago by the old Imams ((I'll have to check this to see if it's spelled correctly)) in case invaders like the Akaviiri or even the mer came down upon Hegathe and sacked it. They must know of you and the others, the so-called Heroes. You are an image they wish to have erased. You must know this city is no longer safe for your faces."

Francis sneered at her biting attitude. Only the first few seconds of them knowing each other and she was already snapping at him. Usually it would take until the morning after and they'd be asking about the lack of pay when he tried to sneak away. Francis shook his head at her piece about not being welcome here, "I learned that the first few days in this city, miss. I have no want of being erased either. You can count on me."

With that, he sprang into action. He wasn't quite sure how he would rally the men and women and absolutely no idea where the secret passage was, which he reckoned was the point of it anyway. Thankfully, one of the older insurgents opened it and was waving his boys through before flinching in pain after some of the cracks outside and fell through the hole. The men continued funneling into it, but the dwemer were rapidly advancing. Francis was filled with no small amount of fright, knowing that there were no fancy healers to fix sucking chest wounds or cut arteries. He could die here, forever this time. More of the insurgents fell after the dwemer rose their staves and he felt angry. Angry at them for not saving themselves and trying to fight, but he knew and reminded himself why after a moment's thinking. They did it for the ones hopping down the trapdoor next to him. He remembered the Mausoleum, what he did, or more accurately didn't and failed to do. He remembered it all, from the yesterday's riots to the Wayrest alley, the knife dripping blood and the body laying before him. Crumpled about its wounds.

He thought of Gorzath, pushed the image of Blade's cadaver from his mind, hoped he didn't hear Elayna's death screams among the battle's ruckus. He stood, white-knuckle gripping the hilt of the redguard scimitar and stepped forward before a big hand clamped itself around his shoulder. He looked to see it was Vendel. The two shared a moment of understanding and he knew what he saw in Vendel's eyes, the same thing that was in his. The loyalty to a brother. He wouldn't let him be the one to do the saving this time. He owed it to everyone on the Isle of N'Gasta. "Get in the fucking hole, Vendel."

Vendel simply shook his head, "Rally them, I'll see you again."

With that, he pushed Francis away, stumbling to his arse and bounded away with the insurgents, beyond Francis's view, beyond the wall. Cracks resounded, more insurgents fell, but he knew his task. He saw movement in one of the insurgents hit from one of the attacks from the dwemer staves and rushed to him, hooking his arms under the insurgent's armpits and dragging him towards the hole and handing him off to another insurgent. He saw some of the others, Zainat, Elayna, Qara'sion, and he waved them over, hoping for them to get to him and hoping ten-fold they wouldn't drop trying to get to him and the passageway.

The onslaught was finally reaching the apex of it's fury as the rifles thundred in a rolling volley and the crab automata continued its lethal barrage against the foundations of the Mosque, each blast removing precious cover from those taking refuge inside and obliterating years of history in the process. While most of the casualties weren't caused by the ballista itself, several of the insurgents were pelted by collapsing rubble with various degrees of lethality. When the Mosque doors caved inward from the force of a blast, the Captain signaled for the crab to cease fire and gestured to the first of the vanguard to make their assault. "Lieutenant, how fares the search for the tunnels?"

"My team is searching dilligently, sir. So far, nothing has been observed. The city has changed much since the maps and tomes were drawn and written. We suspect some of the entrances might have been built over."

"Continue the seach. If these rats find their way back into their nests, we may lose them. Let us hope it won't be necessary. Take what men you need, we should be done here shortly." the Captain said, turning back to the doors and impassively watching as the first of the hulking suits of armour made their way into the passage beyond to hunt down their quarry.
Hey, guys, can I get a roll call up in here? Everyone who's still here say, "Aye."
It had been a long day.

It was true. Francis had never fought like that before, nothing he’d experienced, bar the Mausoleum, was ever so hellish. How many men had he killed today? Three? One of those three was his first as well. A young man told to put down the riots and maintain peace. Peace, Francis thought, What would it all be like if the peace was kept? It was a thought. Perhaps Francis would be in Wayrest with a warm bed and a woman. He’d be home with his sister and Vendel would be making merry with the locals. There was Old Jean, who always made sure to pay for his drinks but would always slide the cup back to the barkeep with an extra coin under it so no one would swipe it before Anneliese could find it hidden away for her. Old Jean was a good man, old, just like his name told, old enough to remember a time where Wayrest wasn’t a refuge for outcasts and criminals. Even when the city changed for the worse, he didn’t let it change him.

Francis smiled as he remembered and for a moment, he was back in the tavern with Anneliese serving drinks, Vendel keeping the rabble out and he would always be chatting with Brunhilde. She was a Nord lass, strong, but beautiful. Shocking blue eyes like the Ice Fields of Northern Skyrim, blonde hair like sunrays. When he finally steps foot back on that dock in Wayrest, he’d chat with her some more. Maybe hold down a job, save up, and get an amulet of Mara. Who knows, maybe she’d say yes to someone who was more of a man than when he left. Maybe she’d say yes to someone who’d met a Hero, stood against a Necromancer, fought an army of tyrants and traveled to lands most never get to travel to and only hear the stories that merchants tell. Maybe he’d be a man worth calling friend, and a brother worth hugging and trusting to protect his sister.

Francis looked at Vendel. The big Nord was asleep, his head sagging to one side and his bear’s shoulders drooping. Even with the burly shoulders, barrel chest and warrior’s beard he’d been growing since Stros M’kai, Francis knew him as a man much more than just frightening in a scrap or a giant to be ogled. Francis got himself to his feet and looked around the room. He saw Elayna and figured he should talk to her. Something to get his mind off of today, at least. He crossed the room and stood before her, “Miss Elayna, I believe I owe you an apology for spoiling your experience at the market stalls.” He offered an apologetic smile.

Zainat paused outside the Mosque, a look of worry etched across his rough but handsome (By Dunmer Standards) Ashlander face. Would the others think him a coward for not taking part in the assassination of the guard captain? "<Fucking bastard outlanders.>" He muttered under his breath in Dunmeris as he remembered what had waylaid him.

He had... 'overslept' by a while, the only thing that cued him in was the sounds of the riot, and while he had enough time to catch up to Blades if he hurried, and he was. As he was leaving Methra's home, he came face to face with six of the criminals that Zaveed had released - Obviously these people weren't political prisoners, as they seemed to be intent on taking advantage of the distracted guards and committing more of the crimes that had gotten them imprisoned in the first place. One of them as known to Zainat - Last time he had been in the city a redguard of his description was caught after murdering close to twenty people - Zainat himself had almost been slain by the n'wah when he tried collecting the bounty on him.

It had been a brutal fight - The redguard was a superiorly trained former Aliki'r and his friends were no cowards either. He had taken quite a few injuries during the fight (Thankfully, Methra had given him a few Potions of Healing as he was leaving), and by the time he had killed the six of them and had made it to the Captain's barracks, it was too late.

Zainat inhaled sharply, and then entered the Mosque, muttering under his breath in Dunmeris. <"You are the Gulakhan of the Urshilaku, direct decendant of Sul-Matuul. You will face this dishonor with pride."> His eyes were lowered, and he continued to walk forwards, ,uttering under his breath until he accidentally walked right into someone. "Apologies, friend, I a-..." He trailed off as he saw who he had bumped into: The heretically ignorant Breton from the market stalls.

Elayna looked up from her formula, which she had returned to after her short introspection. A familiar voice spoke her name, though not one she had exactly enjoyed hearing. Not because of its owner, but because of the memories that stuck to every word, like rotting flesh. Her jade eyes met his, and she could see the pain of the day writhing in them. She offered him a ragged smile, understanding that pain. She was one of the few of that group still around that could. Gorzath was...gone. And Blade was yet to be seen. "Never mind that, Francis. Gave me a proper fright, for a moment, but it did serve it's purpose. Just glad to see that you and your friend made it." Elayna looked down at Toad in her lap, as he squirmed a bit, before looking back to Francis.

She could see beyond him slightly, and see someone enter the Mosque. The Breton couldn't tell who it was exactly at first, in the dimness, but as he grew closer, Elayna rolled her eyes, "Oh, by the Eight...Franc-" Elayna tried to warn, but it was too late. Zainat had bumped into the Breton man, and recognition had flickered in his dark eyes. "Zainat, how lovely to see you're alright!" The young woman calmly cheered, a bit forced, as she knew what was about to happen.

“Barely,” Francis smiled, scratching at his shirt, “I’m glad to know that you’ve made it as well. Of course, I never saw you at the riot. Were you the-” Francis stepped aside for whoever had bumped into his back.

“Pardon, my frie-” Francis’s polite, but haggard, smile melted away into an unbelieving visage.

Francis was not expecting to see the face he was looking at now. There was nothing going on around the room besides him and the Dunmer merchant, whose name escaped him. Francis, cursed himself for losing his sword, but remembered the dagger sheathed at the small of his back. It was the best he had to defend himself against this crazed merchant. He must have wanted to kill him badly if he followed him all the way to the mosque. Had he offended him that badly? Even so, apologies were given, none were accepted. After surviving today’s events, Francis was in no mood to die by the hands of some uppity merchant who was better at holding grudges than making sales.

“To what do I owe this meeting,” Elayna’s cheerful voice sounded from behind him, revealing the Dunmer’s name, “Zainat?”

A presence looming about him reassured him somewhat. The long shadow of Vendel, ready to draw three feet of cold, Nordic steel, cast itself over him. He hoped Vendel wouldn’t let his anger get the best of him. He knew the events of the riot already had him on edge but he did not want to have to fight anyone. Francis swallowed.

“I’ve never met a man or mer so yearning for death as to follow me and mine behind our backs-”

“Enough! Vendel, Zainat, none of us want or need a fight, no? Let us not have one. It has been a long day and I’ve died twice more than I’ve planned to in my life. What say you, Zainat,” Francis offered, “No fights.”

Zainat looked surprised for a long moment - Not expecting to bump into the two highky skilled men he had fought the day before. He gowered angrily at Francis, and began pulling his razor sharp chitin shortsowrd from its sheath - Before he heard Elayna speak to him. He stopped drawing the blade, but kept his hand on the hilt as a precaution. Even if Elayna seemed comfortable around the two men, they seemed to have developed a strange, almost stalker-ish tendency towards his friends - Meeting them two days in a row by chance was, in Zainat's mind, impossible. He had no intention in allowing them to follow Elayna, or any of his allies about.

He nodded at Elayna, and crossed his arms across his chest and gave a faint bow. "I am glad that you are alright as well, Serjo Elayna. I bring grave tidings, however." He said his voice holding no small measure of warmth, before turning his attention to Francis and his more friend who's name sounded suspiciously like 'vandal', something Zainat found rather apt, his hand once more going to the hilt of his sword.

"Ill favored fate and Ill luck is owed for this meeting, Breton." He said, his voice rather cold as he eyed the man, well aware that the last time he fought the two talented swordsmen that they worked well in tandem, keeping him from being able to focus on and kill them one at a time. "I hope that you have paid proper courtesy to Elayna." He said, referencing the strange way Ashlanders tended to act to outsiders and expect outsiders to act around them.

As the More awoke and rose, beginning to threaten Zainat, he quickly drew his blade from its sheath, his honor pricked. "Following you? You are the ones who seem to be following my friends, you milk-drinking snowberry."
However, after a moment, he put up his blade and nodded at Francis, his jaw squared. "No fights." He agreed, suddenly looking very tired. "I got caught by a few escaped convicts on my way to the Guard Captain's quarters. They were well trained." He said with a sigh. "From the look of you, you must be one of 'us' as well." With a shallow bow -not deep enough to be respectfull, but just enough to not be rude, he introduced himself.

" I am Zainat Ashurnasaddas of the Ushilaku tribe, son of Dutadalk Ashurnasaddas, Ashkhan of the Ushilaku." He said, distrust still evident in his eyes, but willing to speak plainly to them.

Elayna heaved a sigh of relief as the trio managed to, barely, hold back from ripping each other's throats out. She bowed slightly in return to Zainat, assuring him that she wasn't mistreated or disrespected in any way by Francis or Vendel. "These gentlemen are part of the reason I made it off Stros M'kai alive. I do trust them, Zainat." Elayna reinforced, wanting to at least somewhat lessen the tension if she could. Which, given the situation of the day, the current predicament, and everyone's moods, that was like asking Sanguine to put down the wine.

The bit about being caught by the guards worried her a bit. Could that have been what happened to Blade? He was a beast, and she'd seen his untamed carnage first-hand. The thought of the guards possibly taking him down was...unnerving, to say the least. After formal introductions had been exchanged, in the most neutral way he could, Elayna sat back down and turned to Francis. "You said you didn't see me at the riots? That'd be because I was with Zaveed and Reigenleif, freeing the guards' prisoners. Such open conflict isn't my strong suit." The Breton looked down, before glancing up at the three men, "...what happened?" She felt she had to ask, as they had been a ways away from the bulk of the riots.

"Death." Vendel grimly muttered, his voice a low bear's growl.

As Vendel very reluctantly removed his hand from the hilt of his sword, Francis turned to Elayna, "Many died, but moreso for the Guards. My being here is proof that we at least won by the skin off our brow." Francis smiled and chuckled, "Earned myself a few new scars too."

"And what of you, Zainat? Busy selling your rugs or were you hiding for the fights?" Vendel asked, a gruff laugh escaped past his lips.

Zainat nodded at Elayna. "If you trust them, then that is enough." Zainat said, with a wry grin, his blood tinted eyes peering at the two men before he sighed, and shook his head sadly. "I have a bad feeling about the raid - by the time I arrived there I was late, and the guards had locked down the area. I barely escaped without getting seen - I had to cut the throats of a few guards who were in the wrong place, blocking my exit." He furrowed his brow again, and glanced at Elayna. "Where is Blade? I don't see him around - Like I said, I have a bad feeling about it all."his tone betraying surprising concern for the Saxhleel warrior.

He blinked at Vendel's insulting comment, his brow furrowing in anger. "Are you as stupid as you look, Nord, or are you deaf? I said I was fighting criminals who escaped imprisonment during the raids who I ran into while I was on my way to assassinate the Captain of the Guard." He took a step towards Vendel, his hand on his blade, his shoulders squared, his honor slighted. He wasn't nearly as tall as Vendel, but Francis and the Nord would remember that Zainat was no easy fight - And they were tired from the earlier fighting, while Zainat was not.

"I could make you both, knife-ear. Come against me looking to take my life and you won't be walking away." Vendel growled, an animal smile curving his lips.

"You will do no such thing. There are dwemer in the streets looking to kill all of us in here. Let's not give them a helping hand." Francis looked at Zainat, noting his blade and his own lack of his own. It would be stupid to try to fight and he didn't want Vendel dragging him into one. "Stay away from him and he'll stay away from you. If you're killing the same men and mer as Vendel and I then we'll get along fine enough. I trust you're honorable enough for that."

Francis found the mer insufferable, to be honest. Concerned too much with his heathen Daedra and some notion of honor to see he and Vendel were not foes. Francis had never met a Dunmer before Zainat, but if they were all like that, he never wanted to again. High Rock never boasted much of a Dunmer population and not even Wayrest had many. Francis turned back to Elayna with words to speak.

"You freed the guards' prisoners? It doesn't seem Zaveed's style to let criminals run rampant through the streets."

Elayna solemnly stroked Toad's dirty fur, nodding her head. "Yes. Won by a hair...Gods rest their souls." She muttered under her breath, a half-assed condolence, she knew, but it was all that escaped her. They'd survived the massacre of the Imperial City, but this was yet another high pile of corpses. It had, unfortunately, been getting easier and easier to swallow for the young Alchemist, but there was still that cold stone of "barely" winning that sat in her stomach.

When Zainat and Vendel started going at it once more, she delivered them both as icy a glare as she could muster, pooling some frosty fog in her palms. "Bark at each other again, and I freeze your tongues solid. Got it?" She dispelled the small amount of mist, slouching once more. Elayna wasn't in the mood to revisit the market incident when Dwemer were looking for their heads. She looked back up to Francis afterward, nodding, "I'd usually agree. But they were part of the insurrection and were put away for it. Good men and women, at least the majority. I suppose we saved each other's lives."

Vendel looked to Francis at Elayna’s warning. He simply offered a nod, she would do it. He hoped Zainat would follow Elayna’s warning as well. After Elayna spoke her piece about the prison break, he spared a thought as to what she said. Even if they were part of the insurrection, what was stopping those who were former criminals from committing more crimes? If one of the Heroes was as short-sighted as the prison-break would have him believe, and the fact Zainat was accosted by suspected escaped prisoners, he wondered if he should even be throwing his lot in with this group. He had ties to Elayna though, and while his sister was far away and probably safe, he knew Gorzath was dead, Blade was nowhere to be found and Elayna was the only one here he knew for sure was alive that shared the bond of surviving horrors incomprehensible.

“A fast-forged alliance of necessity, eh? Not unlike the Mausoleum. Gorzath may be gone and Blade may be captured, but we are still here. I will be at your side, ready to fight, and maybe we can rescue another friend and ally from his fate at the hands of the Dwemer.” Francis spared a glance at the Dunmer next to him, wondering if he was with Blade, the big lizard would be with them now. It was no more use fighting over whose fault it was for Blade’s capture than it was complaining about the darkness at night. It was best to just light a torch, to do something about it.

With that, Francis had the inkling of an idea. A half-baked plan that may grow into something more ironclad, but things tended to go unexpectedly good when Francis found something to do. Sometimes. But doing something about Blade’s capture was something to do, after all. A smile spread across his lips and perhaps when Elayna and Zainat were better rested and things around the city had died down, he’d propose what he’d thought up. For now though, “I will let you both rest. Tensions are running high in the city and hopefully conversations will be more civil and fruitful when our heads clear. Elayna,” Francis bowed his head, “Zainat.” He said, bowing again. He and Vendel returned to their place at the far wall.
WittyReference said
I was blowing off steam from work (it's been a long day) and I ended up with a thing I think you guys might enjoy. He was white knuckle drunk with a fistful of swoon as he sauntered and stumbled from the Foxtail saloon. Meanwhile the Deputy slipped from his room at the Crimson Kiss with Miss Madame La Roux. The two ached toward each other 'neath the weight of High Noon, bound to cross paths as Fate's oft to do. Take's rot to know rot, and both knew what they'd do: a lead lined hello from a muzzled how do y'do? The Cowboy's gin grin sang its last whisky tune as it died on his lips, now stern as the tomb while the Deputy's iron, still warm from the womb, stood and delivered its deafening boom. But a drunk can't aim no more than a rake can woo, the Cowboy missed and the Deputy shot true. But here's the real kicker, that stray bullet that flew? There was a second misfire that day for poor Madame La Roux.


I like it! Tried my hand at poetry, not very good at it. Guess I'm more of a narrative/essayist type of guy. How boring right? I do applaud you with showing us how skilled you are at all this. Definitely makes me respect you as a writer as well as a player.
Rtron said
I had forgotten how much writing this required...


...Builds character!

WittyReference said
I was blowing off steam from work (it's been a long day) and I ended up with a thing I think you guys might enjoy. He was white knuckle drunk with a fistful of swoon as he sauntered and stumbled from the Foxtail saloon. Meanwhile the Deputy slipped from his room at the Crimson Kiss with Miss Madame La Roux. The two ached toward each other 'neath the weight of High Noon, bound to cross paths as Fate's oft to do. Take's rot to know rot, and both knew what they'd do: a lead lined hello from a muzzled how do y'do? The Cowboy's gin grin sang its last whisky tune as it died on his lips, now stern as the tomb while the Deputy's iron, still warm from the womb, stood and delivered its deafening boom. But a drunk can't aim no more than a rake can woo, the Cowboy missed and the Deputy shot true. But here's the real kicker, that stray bullet that flew? There was a second misfire that day for poor Madame La Roux.


I like it! Tried my hand at poetry, not very good at it. Guess I'm more of a narrative/essayist type of guy. How boring right? I do applaud you with showing us how skilled you are at all this. Definitely makes me respect you as a writer as well as a player.
Got a WIP for the bandit leader

What's the policy on multiple characters?

I was thinking of adding one more char to the townsfolk, but I would love to audition for the role of Bandit Leader.

Oh, also, what's the era the RP takes place in? I'm seeing mostly 18th Cent. character portraits.

Edit: Nevermind, read the OOC like I should've done and now I know.
Dervish said
Ball's in your court, Co-Pilot. :[


HOOO, sheeeit, surry
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