Hmmm the idea is somewhat promising, however they're some notable problems, first a subterranean species would not have eyes, of they would be blind, in permanent darkness there is no need for their use. So I don't see how they've evolved, if you can shed some light on this that would good.
Secondly are the abilities natural or born from technology?
Thirdly you say that there is a major city underneath every major city on earth, at this current moment in time I'd say they're at least 700 cities on earth, and having another city underneath each one would must likely destabilise the earths crust and it'd probably never work.
And they many more flaws with this, I think it will work but unless you solve some issues that make this world of yours impossible to exist then people might start to appreciate it.
Sorry for the grief, but I'm trying to help.
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Hey, sorry that you've been having rotten luck with role plays, but when you say people can write books etc.
It isn't like that, if you apply to a roleplay that is in the casual/advanced level they expect good Grammar and spelling as well as detailed accounts because the better it is the better the mental picture is formed in your mind, hence making the roleplay successful.
You don't need to be good at Enlgish for that, it's merely putting the effort in, for instance if you can't be bothered to simply capitalise your I's then you probably won't get in because they will think that your not capable of sophisticated grammar and general English.
It isn't like that, if you apply to a roleplay that is in the casual/advanced level they expect good Grammar and spelling as well as detailed accounts because the better it is the better the mental picture is formed in your mind, hence making the roleplay successful.
You don't need to be good at Enlgish for that, it's merely putting the effort in, for instance if you can't be bothered to simply capitalise your I's then you probably won't get in because they will think that your not capable of sophisticated grammar and general English.
Yup I'm up for this one, I'll start on my character soon.
Probs have it up by tomorrow.
Probs have it up by tomorrow.
Sorry about that, I've added the modifications.
Would you like me to have another character?
Would you like me to have another character?
No offence or anything but this is awfully cliché.
I hope very thing is A-okay with my sign up, that's if I'm allowed to sign up...
Anyway if I am let me know if anything needs modifying, and I'll get right on it.
Anyway if I am let me know if anything needs modifying, and I'll get right on it.
Name: Stravon Dridis
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Stravon dons a very unique armour which is incredibly similar to a Turians natural body form, this was born from an obsession he has with the race itself, he thinks them by far the superior race and wears this armour to mark that love of their shape, the only difference being is that the legs are bipedal, not reverse jointed.
It's essentially an Exo-suit.
It covers every Inch of the body and over this he wears a long, dark brown, leather coat that reaches down to his knees; scarred and weather beaten this coat is obviously very old and a personal favourite item of his.
The armour itself is onyx black in colour and is made of Corotsis, a material that is incredibly rare and durable, as well as fairly light.
All of the makings of a good armour.
Personality: Cold, surgical, ambitious, honourable and treats every thing in life as if it were life or death. These are the main traits of his personality, he will stop at nothing to achieve his own goals, or the aims/missions given to him.
He treats people below him, or those he is in command of as merely a means to an end, they are nothing to him other than pieces in a game of chess and will not hesitate to sacrifice them all if it means he achieves his end objective.
Faction: Works solely for the Illusive man (Please let me know if this is possible?)
Rank: N/A
Gear: Carries a very unique blade; crafted by himself. It is a blade that is forged and bonded down to the atomic level, meaning that the blade would take incredible damage without so much as a separation in the molecules. It is a blade made from Corotisis and can be that crossed against a lightsaber. But the iniquity of it doesn't end there.
It also doubles up as long range high calibre rifle that takes heat injection clips, much akin to the Mass effect universe basic weaponry.
The way it does this is by unlocking something similar to a safety switch near the base of the hilt, when it does the hilt of the gun blade will become movable and when it is turned at a 45 degree angle it will lock in place and become a long ranged rifle, it takes roughly half a second for this switch to take place, making this weapon incredibly versatile.
Skills: Has an aptitude in Vanguard specific Biotics, so Biotic charge, lash and Nova.
Nova has been modified however to become the skill known as Supernova, the basic mechanic of it is the same however when it occurs it basically crushes all of the hydrogen atoms that was caught in the epicentre creating an incredibly powerful blast that can effectively destroy anything in a 125 meter radius and create an EMP effect for a short amount of time within in a 500 meter radius.
His only other skill is his incredible skill in tactics and strategy, but he wouldn't call that a skill rather something he has worked at tirelessly.
Flaws: He has difficulty operating with humans (strange based on his affiliation) but the reason for this is he feels that humans are incomplete, and that Cerberus can make them whole. Tensions can grow with anyone under his command due to his way of of using them as nothing but pawns, and fails to treat them as men/ women.
But the greatest flaw is his sense of honourability, for instance if he is faced with a single well known adversary then he will treat combat as if it has a strict set of guide lines attached with it, so he has great difficulty dealing with enemies that fight dirty.
Bio: (bio will be explained later)
Other:He likes classical music... Just in case that pops at one point :3
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Appearance: Stravon dons a very unique armour which is incredibly similar to a Turians natural body form, this was born from an obsession he has with the race itself, he thinks them by far the superior race and wears this armour to mark that love of their shape, the only difference being is that the legs are bipedal, not reverse jointed.
It's essentially an Exo-suit.
It covers every Inch of the body and over this he wears a long, dark brown, leather coat that reaches down to his knees; scarred and weather beaten this coat is obviously very old and a personal favourite item of his.
The armour itself is onyx black in colour and is made of Corotsis, a material that is incredibly rare and durable, as well as fairly light.
All of the makings of a good armour.
Personality: Cold, surgical, ambitious, honourable and treats every thing in life as if it were life or death. These are the main traits of his personality, he will stop at nothing to achieve his own goals, or the aims/missions given to him.
He treats people below him, or those he is in command of as merely a means to an end, they are nothing to him other than pieces in a game of chess and will not hesitate to sacrifice them all if it means he achieves his end objective.
Faction: Works solely for the Illusive man (Please let me know if this is possible?)
Rank: N/A
Gear: Carries a very unique blade; crafted by himself. It is a blade that is forged and bonded down to the atomic level, meaning that the blade would take incredible damage without so much as a separation in the molecules. It is a blade made from Corotisis and can be that crossed against a lightsaber. But the iniquity of it doesn't end there.
It also doubles up as long range high calibre rifle that takes heat injection clips, much akin to the Mass effect universe basic weaponry.
The way it does this is by unlocking something similar to a safety switch near the base of the hilt, when it does the hilt of the gun blade will become movable and when it is turned at a 45 degree angle it will lock in place and become a long ranged rifle, it takes roughly half a second for this switch to take place, making this weapon incredibly versatile.
Skills: Has an aptitude in Vanguard specific Biotics, so Biotic charge, lash and Nova.
Nova has been modified however to become the skill known as Supernova, the basic mechanic of it is the same however when it occurs it basically crushes all of the hydrogen atoms that was caught in the epicentre creating an incredibly powerful blast that can effectively destroy anything in a 125 meter radius and create an EMP effect for a short amount of time within in a 500 meter radius.
His only other skill is his incredible skill in tactics and strategy, but he wouldn't call that a skill rather something he has worked at tirelessly.
Flaws: He has difficulty operating with humans (strange based on his affiliation) but the reason for this is he feels that humans are incomplete, and that Cerberus can make them whole. Tensions can grow with anyone under his command due to his way of of using them as nothing but pawns, and fails to treat them as men/ women.
But the greatest flaw is his sense of honourability, for instance if he is faced with a single well known adversary then he will treat combat as if it has a strict set of guide lines attached with it, so he has great difficulty dealing with enemies that fight dirty.
Bio: (bio will be explained later)
Other:He likes classical music... Just in case that pops at one point :3
I'm interested in this, hopefully I'm not too late. And I'm an avid player of both Fallout and Metro so that should help a bit :P
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