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IVIasterJay said
How about he absorbs all fire, but only converts fire or heat that was created from another ninja's chakra into his chakra? He would retain immunity to being hurt by fire, but only enemy fire/heat would restore his chakra.I'll get on editing the genin again.

Hhmmm, Immune to a certain extent would be fine by me. I am against that he can absorb a high ranked fire technique or a special fire nature technique without any costs/risks.
IVIasterJay said
Changed to "Average".
Noticed. ^^

The hat is controlled using the contact version of her Mind Transfer False Body Animation jutsu. The inside is lined with her targeting tags, and it's being controlled by her mind. It "flies" similar to an umbrella flying in the wind, and it "eats people" by closing around their body.

Got it now. If you would please make that more clear in the CS that would avoid any more confusement about that. :)

Nope, she hasn't learned any Sensing Techniques yet. The application I'm imagining right now it to allow others to see through the eyes of her animated objects by touching her physical body. I guess that would fall under the Mind Body Transmission Technique though, so I'll just get rid of Sensing Transmission for now

It allows the person to sense what the sensor is sensing. A mix of both the Body Transmission and sensory mastery. I get what you mean, but that isn't that technique.

. I changed the first custom jutsu to merely be a condition of the second custom jutsu. And to understand how it works, just think of how a golem works. A piece of paper in the mouth bring it to life, and if it's removed the golem becomes inanimate.

This is way more clear :)


That said, your genin has my acceptance. I still have second doubts about your ANBU being able to absorb natural flames into chakra. That means he can just create a forest fire and have unlimited chakra. Would you mind to change that? Then you will have my acceptance on your ANBU as well.
Yumi Hasewaga
ANBU operative, Team 4


Yumi eyed Katsuko, who had entered the place. Not soon after him, Ryo entered the place. Yumi nodded at them both. She was wondering how they would feel about her being part of the team now. After all, their team was now a specialized ANBU auxiliary team. Meaning they were more or less used for more important missions that they were suitable for. Yumi wondered briefly how Tsubasa would lead them and on what kind of mission. ''Hi guys.'' Yumi reacted back. She tried to sound a bit cheerful, polite but it wasn't the effect she desired. Instead it sounded like her it was a bit of forced.

''So, now we are all here, what kind of mission do you have for us, Tsubasa?'' Yumi asked, eyeing her team leader. It had been so long since she had been part of a team. To view somebody as her leader, other than Hisoka, felt a bit odd. But she would just likely get used to the idea that Tsubasa would give her orders now. Besides, Tsubasa was a fine kunoichi. Her profile held a good record. About each of the members of the team. It made Yumi wonder about the present team 2. The team she had been in before becoming an apprentice in the ANBU corps. Trying to focus, Yumi would listen to what would be said.
Aiko Cho-Hon
Konohagakure leader of Team 8


Seemed that both Koike and Mamoru could get along. That was good. Taking a sip of her tea, Aiko smiled when Koike asked his question. ''For now it is just. Which makes me need to say that we need to head out. Seeing you're both experienced genin, I think I won't need to test your abilities.'' Aiko told them. Taking out some money to put it on the table, for the tea, she began to brief the two. ''We have get a report about some trouble in the east of the Fire union. We need to travel towards the Hot Spring country to search for signals of trouble and see if we can help the population in any way possible. Any questions before we head out?'' Aiko asked, looking at the two of them, with a warm smile.
Kimi Iomaski
Kirigakure ANBU.

On towards the Wolf Country!


Slowly the mask was put on her face. ''We're moving out.'' The serious voice said of the ANBU. The person was a woman, with short brown hair. The personal 'spymaster' of Rika Suzu. Kimi walked, wood making sounds as the boots of her and the retinue assigned to her were boarding a ship. It was a ship that looked like an ordinary Kirigakure vessel. Kimi was sure that nobody would find it strange that a ship from Kirigakure would travel towards the Honey country. From there, she would continue to head towards the Wolf Country. Hopefully, she could 'convince' the leader of the country to swear fealty to the Mizukage.

Soon she heard the commands of the captain as the ship would leave the docks. For a second, Kimi looked over her shoulder. The mist prevented sight over the Mizukage Office. But somehow, Kimi was very certain she knew that she was looking in the right direction. A light shiver ran down her spine. Rika had much faith in her. Maybe a bit too much? Kimi shrugged the thought off. For now they had to get to the Honey country. The country was already a vassal to the Mist, but it would be wise to go through it and make sure that no problem was present. With her group of nin, she was sure that it wouldn't be that much of a trouble. It was however the Wolf country that could present a trouble. It wasn't a poor country, so Kirigakure could use it as their vassal. But who said that Kumogakure hadn't gain the same idea? Kimi bite her lower lip.

If Kumogakure would be able to seize the Wolf Country as their vassal, that meant they had gained valuable ground. Sure, the Mist and Cloud weren't in a war or conflict. But if one got the upper hand over the other, it would mean that Kirigakure either could expand easier. Or that they had to turn to the South. Kimi wasn't sure what Rika would do in case Kumogakure would become a factor. ''Send a message to the Mizukage that we're leaving now... That she will get a rapport from me over two days. Regarding the Honey country.'' One of the men nodded as he would write down the note and then summon a hawk. The bird would bring the message towards the aviary that was near the Mizukage Office. Hopefully Rika wouldn't press more pressure on them as Kimi wanted to avoid rushing. ''Captain, make sure we reach the Honey country within a day.'' Kimi ordered, to which the captain laughed and told her that they were blessed with a good wind, so that was possible.

Blessed by a good wind? Kimi looked at the endless waves. I wish I could say the same... I wish I could. She thought as she leaned forward and kept staring at the waves of the sea.
AlterNathan said
I could use some help ya know


Ask it then? PM's are handy for ask/requesting help from a GM. We can't spot or see anything if we notice a bit of spam in the OOC.
@Masaki

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/15895/posts/ooc?page=11#post-425737

I am a bit wavering about the lighting resistance. I would prefer her to create a light resistance (so to C and lower) later if she becomes more experienced with handling Lightning release. You also spoke of a Mion Punch (damn Midori...), but I don't see the technique anywhere on the Cs. Mind putting it there?

Time for the next CS reviewing.
@IVIasterjay :

--- Your Ame ANBU :

I would lower the speed. He already has a technique that 'greaty' increases his speed. Combined with his S ranked Technique, I wouldn't like to add an 'incredible' speed to it. It causes the S ranked to become already kind of OP in my eyes, together with some other techniques. If you would be so kind to reduce it to average speed than it has my approval.

---- Your Konoha genin

I am not sure if the weapon/hat is a joke or such. But a floating hat that eats people (sorry, I am trying not to sound too serious about it.), but that is a no from me. Also, she has sensing transmission, but no sensory technique? If she has one, would you please set in the jutsu link together with a little detail about how far and such? Else she wouldn't have much with the sensory transmission technique.

The custom techniques are a bit hmmm. Well one can remove a tag, she can activated the jutsu on miles away. That needs to be toned down if its a D ranked technique. Not to mention that it sounds like an auto-hit technique (of course when the tag is planted, something that can't be done automatically ), but I am against auto-hitting technique. So if you would please change that please.
The last custom technique is a bit confusing. If it fails, it works? Sorry, but I can't work my head around that one.
@Sage

1.) By tanky, I merely meant he wouldn't shy away from pain and is more likely to charge than speculate whether he can handle te damage or not. The attack would damage him as much as it would anyone else, but his reaction to the damage is what makes him "tanky", it's just pain tolerance.

Mind changing it then to a high pain tolerance? That would clear it more out.

2.) For the chakra increase, that does not stack with the KG. It is caused by the KG which gives him chakra outside of his body. And the "high chakra" thing is relative. It doesn't mean I have more chakra than a Jounin (although your chakra levels can't really be increased by training...), it means for a genin he has more chakra than average. If that's not allowed, you're stating that all genin have exactly the same amount of chakra.

I am still against the added chakra. Even the way as : a LOT of chakra + chakra from the outside due the KG? That is still too high in my opinion. As for chakra levels, there are ways to increase it. If one has a hidden chakra potential, it means they can open it. We have seen this before, but it requires often the approval of several GM's. I am not stating that its not allowed to have more chakra than the average, but simply pointing that I am against the KG as well the way how the chakra reserves are put. A high chakra reserve is totally different than 'a LOT'. For most times we use a system where we pick words like 'Good', 'High', 'Very High' and so forth. It makes it less sounding OP, if that makes some sense.

Also, a custom KG that adds more than two features often is getting on my nerves. I would rather want it to be toned down.

3. For the clones, there was no change from the original character sheet from the first Generation. Actually, Kisheto was accepted in the first Generation because I explained that he doesn't have a good control over his chakra, so he uses clones to compensate by limiting his ninjutsu usage to clone Taijutsu and combos. Don't think of his chakra as "he can use more Jutsu in battle", but more like "he can use a stronger technique as a base technique", such as shadow clones. Because shadow clones is extremely draining, if he used it to the extent in which any genin used their "signature" or "fundamental" Jutsu, it would be even since their techniques would probably be proportional to their chakra levels.

This is still the same Generation, but when the crash came of RPG in Decemeber, we became a bit stricter. Characters from before who were reposted went to a review again and got some changes. I can understand that you weren't aware of that, but we want to make it more or less balanced than it already was. So please take that in consideration as we all from before went through a harsher review.
As for the shadow clones, I find it a bit weird that he has no good chakra control but still can create a lot of clones. Its more likely you need some good chakra control to create and maintain them than the other way around. I get it that the influence is from Naruto, the character, but I do want to make clear that Naruto, the character, was also a Jinchuriki that got Sage mode and eventually got power ups that weren't really logical in my opinion. But that is my opinion on the character.

I still say no again creating a lot of shadow clones. Creating a max of 5~ 10 is something I would accept, but more is impossible. Both for a genin as for somebody that doesn't have the chakra control and the chakra levels to back it up.
IVIasterJay said
Is it only genin spots available, or are there other positions as well. I have a second genin to submit, along with a jounin or anbu, depending on what you'd prefer, if at all.


If you see an open Jounin spot or such, you can apply for it. Kage assistant and Jounin commander need to be selected or having the approval of the person leading the village. :)
You can also make a chuunin, but I would advise against it for now.

Besides,

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