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Current Are you with me Dr. Wu? Are you really just a shadow of the man that I once knew? Are you crazy? Are you high? Or just an ordinary guy? Have you done all you can do? Are you with me doctor?
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It is the start of a new School Year and Imma keep writin' cause it's fun!
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Forneus - The Air of Positively 4th Street



Forneus, after his technique had been flawlessly and seemingly anticlimactically destroyed by DIO's teleportation he was grabbed by an invisible force. This must be the being, no doubt. It appears I have lost this, damn! If only my power was greater, the Abyss's power is still weak! Forneus thought to himself as he flew down three blocks of sugar coated goodness, as he did- Venge, sensing its master grow farther away rose out of the pavement and followed toward the direction of Forneus. Rrrgh. If only I had my power, my TRUE power. I could've shown him- wait. That's what all the humans say! Have I been reduced to nothing but a weak human!? No. That's not it. Sure you may be weak right now- but something else is definitely a factor. Venge rejoined its master as Forneus landed on a tall building overlooking Roanpur. He braced himself with his magic and landed feet first onto the hard concrete. As he got up slowly, a stream of thoughts poured into the lord's mind as he looked back to where he had came from. He saw DIO, The Overlord and Juri. They were all barely visible from where he was standing but he could make them out. Hmph. For me to lose to an arrogant Vampire. How irritating, but expected as such considering my power is so low right now. I'll be he feels good, taking out a "little fly" doesn't he? Well, no matter now. Forneus got up, Venge ached in dissappointment- it craved to wrong the person who wronged its master.

Forneus walked along the rather creamy top of the building to look out at the night sky. It was very beautiful, much like how the skies of the Abyss which could not be seen by lower demons were. As the lord's gaze drifted off into the deep sky he began to think once again, DIO is a very powerful adversary as I said to him prieviously, and he is one of the very few I give that title to. He may think of me as an insect now, but I shall wait and I shall watch him. After all, like demons, huma- er- vampires also have flaws, it's in their nature and there's nothing they can do about it. My nature was shown right there! I rushed into battle because my only ally was killed and because I didn't respect DIO's power! So it's only natural that I lost. Forneus snickered to himself, he stared once again back the intersection of 4th Street and smiled his wide smile once again. This world from what he had gathered was not to be trifled with and instead he should look at it as an open window to anything the mind could think of. A colossal metal man, a girl with spider clothing and a vampire with teleportation powers who could control a being of pure energy! Truly, there was more than met the human and abyssal eye. The mission was Forneus' first and foremost duty though, for the sake of his lords and for the sake of his kind he would find a way to oust DIO. Then he would take control of this miserable city, kill all it's inhabitants and once again restore the abyss to the glory it once held.

The full moon shown the eyes of the lord, so ruby that even the finest gem harvesters could not cultivate them. He had no longer welled up with Abyssal energy, he had calmed donw and without hesitation he spoke aloud, "So, this is how it begins? How it's supposed to start eh? Is this our tapestry? Our canvas? Interesting, so this is the what happens when an amalgamation of beings happens to be clustered in one huge world?! Whoever the viewer is, this is pure genius! I wonder what he'll toy with next? It's like a child who just got their first toy and are trying to figure out the features!" Forneus giggled, "Well, count me in Viewer. Entice the Lord of Water with your antics! I'll take them as they go, good or bad." Forneus' giggle evolved into a laugh, "And as for you DIO, the first lesser demon to best me in combat- I applaud you! You have taken control of quite a major city in this play about a new world and for that you have my praise. But rest assured, you cannot fathom the power of the Abyss and though you may be cunning not everything is understandable! You have aspirations of dominance, of leadership, of glory but you do not realize that their is no true leader! None can be perfect and most certainly none can be the "crown of creation!" Forneus began to laugh even more, "And in the near future, you shall see what you most fear. The fear of the unknown, the fear of loss- no- the fear of the end! You will taste my true power and when you have finally gorged yourself on it I'll eviscerate you like the pig that you are! So enjoy what you have now Roanpur, Viewer and DIO. For when the time comes, the world will bathe in the glow of the Death Eclipse and the Abyss will be reborn!" Forneus' laughter evolved into a cackle which echoed throughout Roanpur for at least a minute before stopping.

The Lord retreated into the building, plotting his next move as the moon's glare shown down on Roanpur.
Yeah, yeah, sorry for being off for the weekend. My parents have conscripted me into their restaurant so I've been working a lot more than usual. I'll get a post up today, but I can't assure it will be my best.


Don't worry about it being good man! Just write! That's how I do it.
I don't know where Guru is lol, I think I should just post anyway.
So uh, where's errybody? Weekends not popular I guess?
Don't touch that browser! Everyone's gone but we'll be right back! Seriously where da people at?
Er, DIO timed his strike to hit at the exact time the Overlord's did. A two-in-one, one from each side. Keep in mind that both DIO and the Overlord, though on separate sides of Forneus, were both less than three feet away from him. Super close quarters.


Ah. I'll fix that then. EDIT: Aight got it now.
Forneus - The Conflict



Forneus was only focused on DIO for the time being when he felt a gust of wind, as he turned around he saw a giant club being swung with so much force that it created the very essence of wind around it. Forneus had realized his foolishness and saw that it was too late to prepare any sort of defense for the giant mace, so he decided to do what the humans called: "taking it like man." The mace slammed into Forneus' right cheek, it stung the lord so hard he could swear that there was some sort of electricity in it! He could hear a slight crack, his jaw was dislocated, that he knew. Forneus flew back far, how regrettable that he had only focused on the target of his hate and had not noticed the metal man! The foolishness, the folly! As he flew he noticed that DIO had tried to make a sneaky move by trying to elbow his spine in, he had noticed his ice powers earlier and had neglected to remember that vampires also were well versed in ice-magic. Forneus thought quick as the pain from his jaw started to seep into his nerves, then it hit him! Waving his arms to the side in the air Forneus managed to pull some bubbles to himself, they quickly formed into a small carpet and caught the flying lord just as he was about to be elbowed, it only softened the blow a bit but it tore quite a bit into his spine managing to tear some flesh off. Forneus gritted teeth in pain as he flew backwards even more. Venge, who's thirst for blood had not been sated saw the target of his master's hate below it. The sword ached with desire and then promptly loosened itself from Forneus' belt and with an inhuman roar arched downward burning with hatred so warm and so savage that it would never burn out! It aimed for DIO's elbow and managed to propel Forneus to the right as it did.

The bubbles gently let him down near a street lamp and the lord managed to hunch himself over on his right arm. He hated his foolishness, had he focused more on all his opponents instead of one he would've gotten out of that situation a lot more smoothly he wouldn't have had his spine torn into and he wouldn't have had to had his jaw dislocated. As Forneus keeled he began to whisper to himself a small incantation, a small ring of blue began to appear around the lord. As the ring appeared what looked like an atom began to circle around the lord, making him glow blue each time one of the small electron-type things passed him. His jaw began to relocate itself, snapping into place and curling into its rightful spot. The flesh around his spine began to morph back to where it was previously, purple blood still spilling as it creased itself back into place. With a pop and a small gleam all the rings at once disappeared and Forneus' jaw was back to normal as was his back. However even though the pain was still there for the time being, Forneus felt a new pain- The pain of overestimating himself, he needed to fix it- now. If he did something like that again he would surely be killed, and if he died here it was the end of the Abyss's dreams for the moment. He couldn't let that happen and he began to devise a plan, he quickly started array his bubbles near him. Innovative... Maybe... If I posistion them right and if my knowledge of- Ah yes! Wait. What do the humans call it? Uh- Paydirt!

"Fweh! Well. I must say man of steel you do pack quite a powerful arm!" Forneus said as he felt the pain in his jaw, "Your excellent swing reminded me of a pirate whom I fought no too long ago, like you his swing was excellent- maybe even more so! But enough of my silly past, you have outwitted me and that impresses me greatly!" Forneus said this genuinely, even though it had been his own error the Overlord had managed to capatalize on it- therefore making him a very formidable foe. It had hit Forneus that DIO had amassed some of the finest, no more underestimating- these were real warriors and as such the Abyssal Lord of Water had to turn up the heat for once. "DIO! You have very powerful allies and believe it or not you've taught me a thing or two and for that I thank you warmly! But for now, we fight as adversaries! Prepare yourselves, I have been tempering this technique ever since I traveled through the portal here!"

At that moment Forneus waved his hands and in an instant the bubbles began to fly everywhere, they stopped right above streetlamps, angles diagonal to each other and places unseen. At that moment Forneus alinged the final bubble to himself which he began to power up with intense runic chants, the bubble glowed an eerie sea green as the rest of the bubbles one by one began to light up. Forneus finally threw the bubble upwards as it began to glow and finally it happened: All at once the other bubbles began to shine an eerie light that lit the whole street up with a rather emerald glow, Forneus after finishing his chant cried: "Rite of the Abyss - Inside Seiryu's Eyes!" The new technique he used was special, it allowed him to create afterimages of himself by using the illusion in the light that the bubbles created. He would appear fast to his enemies when in reality he himself was moving at normal pace, Forneus was done toying, now the fight was on for real.

Forneus is quite capable of taking hits, he's an Abyssal Lord who's fought more heroes than even the Dragon Lord has. What separates him from the rest of the Abyssal Lords though is cunning. If he takes one hit it's less likely that he would again from the same way, Forneus loves to read his opponents from what they do or how they act.

EDIT: Lol what have I started?
Hehehe, I'm so used to people like barely dodging attacks and only taking part of the damange that I'm legitimately surprised when someone takes the full attack. I actually feel bad for Forneus though, since this thing will be slamming into his face. I'll make sure to return the favor if there is an opportunity where the Overlord will get thrashed around by one of Forneus's attacks.



Damn, that is a nice club. I learned early in RPs that it's sometimes better to take the full hit sometimes, otherwise you just look like a "godmodder". I personally think it has to be the fear of losing is to why people chose to barely dodge.
Course it will! Though Forneus is intelligent he is also very focused, he was too focused on DIO and not focused enough on the Overlord so the attack will connect. What I was thinking he would do is that he would see the club coming right at him, realize his foolishness and then take the full blow which would knock him back significantly. He would be caught by one of his bubbles and drop, amazed by the sheer power of the strike. Then he would try to heal his wound while thinking of the next option. Which would give the three amigos plenty of time to strike him again, however be warned! He will be up to something by the time they do.

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