Marshall

The Descent of Man

First post is up! After you get confirmation on your NS go ahead and post.

The Descent of Man

"Yea, though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil: for thou art with me"

Psalm 23:4

"I still remember those early days. Those days where everyone was still mourning. People still knew what they had lost, they knew the people they had lost, the memories. Desperation made us this way. It forged us from steel and set us on this path. We do this for the ones who we lost." The men and women of the Koltsevaya Coalition are celebrating the defeat of the bandit stronghold in Buninskaya Alleya. The Rangers responsible for the destruction of the bandits returned early this morning, among them Ranger Commander Nicolai Mikhailov. In recent days people have noticing an increase in Nosalises around many stations, this is believed to be caused by a new break into the Metro from the surface. When asked about the recent increase in hostiles the Ranger Commander replied "A squad of Rangers have already been deployed to search for the opening and close it if necessary or fortify it as a new entrance." In other news, many stations have begun taking territory toward the center of the metro and Rangers have been deployed to ensure no violent clashes occur between station forces. No significant changes in the population of the Koltsevaya Coalition or other major happenings.

The Descent of Man

@UltikanaRe That emperor is probably dead because of the date change but other than that confirmed. @TheSovereignGrave Finish up that NS before you post IC please @Zendrelax Finish that NS up soon please @Enalais Looks good, Confirmed @WanderingRebel You're population density is very low but thats your choice. Looks good, finish it up soon please. @Quaz Unique, I like it, fix it up a bit and get back to me.

The Descent of Man

Thats fine Enalais, we'll make sure not to get too far ahead

The Descent of Man

Guys, go ahead and start writing your starting posts, I'll definitely have mine ready by noon tomorrow. Go ahead and post them whenever but I won't be posting until tomorrow morning or noon.

The Descent of Man

Hey guys, I hate to ask but could everyone put their amazing Nation Sheets in hiders so that I can scroll through faster, the faster I scroll, the faster we start thanks.

Kumlatu

That all may be true but from the public opinion of this so far I'd say a revision is necessary if you want to succeed. And yes I have wanted to write an original idea, in fact I'm currently helping to write a custom DnD campaign.

Kumlatu

Listen. This looks like it could be amazing but there is too much to it. The reading of it goes like this: Sci-Fi Space Adventure, ok some magic thrown in, wtf Merlin?, Demons? In short, I think you should take this to the drawing board, rethink what people want to RP about and go with that. I suggest something more like, Sci-Fi starts to merge with "magic" due to some material. Sci-Fi Roleplayers like realism. Fantasy Roleplayers want medieval. Good luck.

The Descent of Man

Er, if we're going with the 'nobody knows for sure' route you probably should change the first post. Because it all but explicitly states what actually happened.

@TheSovereignGrave

True, and done.

S.D.O: The Last resort: Modern fantasy roleplay

Hehehe My evil plan to get people talking has worked!