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    1. Melkor 12 yrs ago

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5 mos ago
Current haven’t been able to rp in so long. grad school is a bitch
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3 yrs ago
I'm about to enter my senior year. So close to that astro degreeeeee
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4 yrs ago
Act two of the original three is done. It is about 100 pages and 23k words. I'll be merging the first two acts into one and the book will end up being about twice as long as originally projected.
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4 yrs ago
Act 1 of 3 is done. It’s about 100 pages and 23k words and has a prelude, 8 chapters, and an interlude. I’m looking at 100k words as an approximate goal.
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4 yrs ago
Progress on draft 2: 8200 words and 32 pages.
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Thrawn: "I have read about the nightswan. Have you?"

Nightswan: "You refer to the fact that it sings only as night is falling?"

Thrawn: "Yes. You do not expect your stand to succeed, do you?"

Nightswan: "I know that it won't succeed."

Thrawn: "That does not necessarily mean the end. I can give orders for you to be taken unharmed."

Nightswan: "They will be ignored. Half the troops here are Batonn Defense and Restos is determined to get rid of me."

Thrawn: "Then come with me now!"

Nightswan: "A man must do what he must, Admiral Thrawn. Even if his stand is against the fall of eternal night."

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Roy watched the scene unfold from his perch. He was nearly one hundred and fifty meters away, but he had a basic idea of what was going on... Wait just a bloody second! I don't know what's going on! Well.. Maybe I have a better idea now... He began to reload his weapon, slipping cartridges into the trap on his rifle. Dead men walking... A mysterious man with claws who can move faster than anyone I've ever seen... I don't fucking know what's happening! that was about when the woman was caught.

From the distance she seemed to have been caught by the man's claws. This can't be good... Blimey, what is that noise..? He raised his, now reloaded weapon again. The woman's arm shot upward and a knife sliced through the man, or at least part of him. She yelled something about shooting and that was about when the other man appeared and began to unleash hell upon the clawed man.

Christ alive! Another man had two... Pistoles? Either way, he unloaded them into the man's chest, blood splattering everywhere. "Have another" Evans wasn't convinced that that would do the man in. He took aim and fired, the bullet meeting its mark - the clawed man's head.
The archers wasted no time, the one on the right knocked an arrow as the one on the left drew a short sword and advanced. And here they come... Melvus drew his straight sword then twisted his body to avoid the first arrow. Bringing up his sword horizontally he blocked downward slash from his opponent. He took note of the archer reloading while he stood, sword holding the enemy's blade, in between the two. As the archer took his shot, Melvus wasn't there anymore and the other man stumbled forward as Melvus' sword disappeared and an arrow lodged itself in his gut.

The wizard didn't have time to notice the dolops of blood soaking the ground as his opponent fell to the ground, in what was now a puddle of his own blood, the scarlet liquid changing the color of the dirt. Melvus was in a hurry. Six seconds left... I need to get into position... He though as he maneuvered himself closer to his enemy, knowing that there was no way the archer would notice him. Three... He was within reach of the archer. Two... Now behind the archer. One He raised his sword and lunged forward as he rematerialized, lodging his blade into his opponent's back. That's what the plan was anyway.

As the blade appeared behind him the archer dropped to the ground, twisting around on the way down. As his back touched the dirt on the ground his right foot shot upward striking the wizard's hand, knocking the blade from his grasp.

Melvus jumped back as his blade clattered to the ground, he'd lost sight of the archer. Where..? His gaze quickly shifted from left to right as he realized Down... He looked down in time to see the fist. As his back slammed into the ground beneath him, his hand shot forward and an arm sprung forth. The archer, now on his feet, sidestepped around the glowing appendage and fired an arrow at Melvus who caught it in his left hand, effectively knocking his staff to the ground. The spellcasters reached over with his right hand and, painfully, ripped the arrow from him. As it exited it took chunks of his palm with it, spraying blood over Melvus. The glowing arm shrunk and moved closer as it picked up his staff.

Replacing the staff on the wizard's back, many swords appeared around him, they revolved and whirled at great speed. The archer's next few arrows were swatted away. Realizing that it was a futile effort, also having noticed his comrades falling around him - the archer attempted to retreat back into the fog. As he reached the edge, he was shoved to the ground by a rather large horse, one of the beats large hooves crushing his head, killing him instantly.

"You! Bastard!" Came the voice of the rider, clearly not concerned that he just killed one of his own men.

"Ah... Slaver, I told you not to return..." Melvus said as he drew his sword in his right hand, ready for a fight.

"Dammed wizard! Think you can best me!" The man jumped from his horse, landing in front of Melvus, his sword drawn. Melvus unsummoned his swords, leaving him with the one. The man lunged.

Melvus sidestepped then pivoted, facing the man again, his sword held in a Mid-guard position. "You are the calm eye of the storm as your opponents rage around you..." his friend and teacher's voice, Cylus, came into his head. "Let their power work for you..."

"You can't avoid me forever!" The slaver yelled at Melvus as he swung his sword at Melvus' right side.

The wizard brought his sword up and swept his opponent's away then returned to a guard position. "Why do you torment this town?" Melvus asked the slaver, his expression not changing as he ducked, avoided, and blocked.

"Do you know what profit is boy? I do it for the fuckin' gold! Now have at me dammit! I want to see what you're made of!" He stabbed at Melvus' center.

The wizard swept the sword away, using the sweep to power his own attack. He brought his sword around and cut into the man's right leg. Nothing major, it would hinder his movements but the battle wasn't decided yet. "You see the world in such simple terms as power and profit... I envy your ignorance."

"Dammit!" The slaver yelled out of frustration. He reached into his pocket and pulled a scroll out. "Let's see how you handle this!"

A magic scroll... Can't allow him to use it... Melvus became invisible. I can only keep this up for a moment... He could tell he was weak... his spell wouldn't last as long as it usually would. He ran forward.

"Where?" Is what the man said as a wizard materialized in front of his, grabbing the scroll from his hands. His first reaction was, stab. And that's just what he did.

As Melvus took a sword in his gut he remembered what Cylus had told him many times, "Do not rush your opponent without a plan... They have a weapon and will not hesitate... Melvus silently cursed himself as he reached forward, grabbing the slaver's sword he pulled it toward him, he could feel the point against his back, not yet piercing him, but it pushed against his skin, threatening to break through.

"Gods!" The slaver yelled as he let go at the sight of the man pulling the sword into himself more, blood pouring into the ground. He looked as though he would hurl. The wizard winced at the pain. I have him...

From Melvus' hand shot a larger, glowing hand which grabbed the man and brought him closer to Melvus. "Pain means nothing to me... I have suffered a thousand deaths before you have met your on-" The slaver spat on Melvus' as he spoke. "And I will suffer more after your own death." With that the wizard ran his through, several times until the man's screaming died down and his eyes rolled back and his head hung, limp.

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Melvus was grateful for the food, he couldn't seem to speak as he ate. Afterward he made his way to the room, provided by the inn. He had given his cloak over to a wash lady to be cleaned of all of the blood spilled on it. Hopefully the smell would, be gone, but he couldn't get everything. He fell asleep almost immediately as his head touched the pillow. Nearly two days without sped cent sleep will do that.
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That song... It's a charm, right..? Melvus thought as the nun, who seemed rather fearful herself, which could easily be a misinterpretation of her body language, agreed to heal his wounds. His face stung as he had wiped some of the crimson fluid from it, adding to the already blood-stained cloak. This town has had more promising days than this one. She placed her hands over her heart as she chanted, the old woman's wrinkled hands glowed as she laid them over Melvus' facial region. The wizard could feel his bones mending and his wounds closing themselves, she moved her hands to heal other areas over him. Afterward he felt as though he would after a good night's sleep - well rested, full of energy, unscathed. She handed him what appeared to be a cloth to wipe the blood from his face, which he did, it would be useful to see during a fight. Melvus turned to the nun to say his thanks - that was when he noticed the archers.

It didn't seem as though it had taken them particularly long to find him - he had only gone as far as ten seconds would take him. "Go." Melvus said definitively to the sister. Melvus was reminded of something from his past.

Melvus and three other champions of Aesil had been selected to act as Efrida's escort during a diplomatic visit to the Palace Borough, another faction within the walls of the, immensely large city-state Drisbane. Along with him was Argus, a skilled archer, Helen, an 'assassin', and Cylus, the master of the sword. They made their way out of Aesil territory, the Princess, at the time, received many gleeful looks and cheers as she passed through on her white stallion. her escorts, as was tradition rode brown draft horses, but this was irrelevant. In order to arrive at the Palace's territory they would have to pass through the Neutral Zone, an area guarded by the Guardians, but they didn't enforce as much as they did in their own territories, so it was essentially an area ripe for a free-for-all. If such a thing did happen and the Guardians found out, they would likely incur on the provoker's territory in the name a justice, if there was such a thing in this city... this world.

It was a known thing among the quartet, if any power within the walls would have an attempt at Efrida's head, it would be here - in the Neutral Zone. The aforementioned area within the city was a rather dreary place. There were many people who lived there with no place to call home, Efrida generally invited them to live in Aesil territory - she wouldn't do it herself, but she would send attendants to convey the welcoming message. Today, however, she was on a mission of her own - to establish peace between Palace and Aesil in a greater attempt to silence the wickedness of Goetia. Aesil would say naught about Goetia's most recent incursion to their territory, this was mainly because potential allies had incurred on the evil faction and they would reveal this if they were revealed. Of course, the Guardians knew about the incursions but would do nothing unless directly confronted about it - they didn't really have any real power and to claim justice without genuine cause would be seen as their own unjustified incursion by the populace.

"You will be going no further today, Your Highness!" A deep voice rang out from nowhere - it was the middle of the day and the sun was high in the sky but it seemed to turn to night.

"Now!" Another, higher pitched voice said, it was like that of a child. Melvus could hear the whistling sound of arrows, before their trip they were reminded to enchant their clothing with vials of 'Divine Raiment' Each of the champions pulled their hoods over their heads. Melvus dove from his horse, knowing that it was gone. When the arrows had all met their marks, most of which hit the ground, some of which hit enchanted raiment, one of which... it had sunk deep into Helen's throat, she didn't have enough time to fully cover herself, or perhaps her hood was pushed aside by an arrow - it didn't matter now. If she wasn't dead already, she was going to die soon.

The enemy must've been far away, they were giving the Aesil faction time to themselves before their next attack... This isn't Goetia... They seem to only have had enough arrows for the one volley... A larger faction wouldn't have to ration their supplies like this... assuming that they aren't just giving us time... Melvus watched as Helen lay in Efrida's arms, she gargled blood as she tried to speak. Her futile attempts to convey information only caused more blood to spew from her grave wound. He watched as Cylus reached down and pulled the arrow from the poor woman's throat, a trail of blood following it as it excited. Her eyes glossed over and her squirming halted.

"Why... Cylus, why would you do that?" Efrida had spoken, tears welling up in her eyes.

The older man kneeled down next to her, "She was too far gone may queen. Even your healing magics could do nothing for her, you know this to be true. Your life is too valuable to risk it-"

"Please, don't" Efrida wiped her eyes, their horses were utter carnage of what they used to be. "We need to prepare, they'll likely swarm this area soon." She turned to Cylus, "Ready our defenses."

"Yes-" Cylus was cut off by a large unit of soldiers emerging from a road out of the area they were in, Melvus realized that it was an old plaza a large crossroads, there were eight roads leading in and out and it was in the shape of a large octagon.

"Attack!" Came the deep voice from before, it was a man with dark skin wielding a rather large axe. A minority within Drisbane, unpleased with the way they were being treated in turbulent times. The unit, with what was about fifty men, not all of which had darker skin, but most of them did. They charged, some of which bore axes, others wielded swords and yet others maces. Most of them had bows on their backs. I was right... A smaller faction... Melvus raised his staff and from it burst a golden spear which broke into a great many smaller ones, they shot forward, true in their direction, many of which clattered to the ground but the rest of them lodged themselves in opposing soldiers. Soldiers...? Hmm... Organized militaries are not legal within the city walls... I suppose the Guardians don't waste time regulating weak factions.

Melvus' attack left about nine bloodied corpses in its wake, the poor souls had no real chance, a few dove to the side to avoid danger and succeeded, but the rest were not as lucky. Argus unslung her bow from her back, knocked arrow after arrow, firing into the oncoming force, they were almost on top of the champions by now. The, now, trio formed a triangle around the Princess as the enemy closed in. As Argus shot off her arrows, Melvus' Arm of the Heavens shot out lifting enemies and tossing them into their comrades. Their numbers seemed to have doubled out of no where. How...

"They're being reinforced!" Cylus yelled over the commotion, pointing to the additional troops making their way into the fray. The old man, himself, seemed to be a fury, taking on a great many of combatants at once, their attacks could not break his perfect defense. He'd already taken down about twenty of their untrained grunts by this point. Melvus had summoned his Heaven's Wheel which shifted to defend and attack. Argus was the first to be overwhelmed. Her bow skills were not very useful at close ranged combat.

She dropped her bow, drew two arrows and was using them as daggers. She used her superior nimbleness to dodge the enemies attacks, all the while getting close enough to lodge her arrows into eye sockets, exposed skin, chinks in armor. She was ducking and weaving. She jumped to the left, avoiding a blade, then dropped to the ground to avoid a swipe which landed on an enemy. She proceeded to kick her immediate opponent's feet from beneath them while stabbing heir throat with her arrow, yelling the entire time. She reached back for another arrow to find that her quiver was empty. Nearly thirty enemies lay dead around her, her breathing had become very heavy. They only reason they'd survived this far was because of their armored clothing... No chinks.

She began to punch and kick, but quickly lost her energy and was swarmed by nearly fifteen enemy combatants, Melvus lost sight of her in the storm. Melvus drew his own straight sword, his swords were fading - he was losing energy. The enemy had been reduced to about thirty from their original hundred... Cylus had taken out most of them, but his old body could not take the strain, he collapsed. His body no longer able to take the stress, Melvus presumed. Melvus guessed that there were about fifty dead enemies around he old man... These people are not well trained... They cannot even compare to a master... Luckily the enemy seemed to assume that he was dead, fell by their swords.

At this point, the deep voice of the man rang out, "Back off! This dog and his queen are mine. Head back to camp." The man approached with two archers at his side, his axe slung over his back and he wore leather armor. The archers stayed back as the man stepped forward.

Melvus turned to Efrida, who was still unscathed, at the cost of two of her most skilled champions. Melvus could see the mangled body of Argus... She was only recognizable by the, now crimson, armor she wore. "Go." Melvus said to Efrida.

"No, I'll stay."

"Go!" Melvus spoke back, he knew that if he lost, she would be defenseless, if the archers tried something he could deal with them, but if she was here when he fell, she would die.

"No-"

"I will defend your life, my queen. But I will not give my life if your death is assured. I will not allow you to stay." Melvus turned back to the enemy, who was waiting for his fight. "I gave my word to bring you to the crown in any way I could-" She attempted to cut him off but her voice was drowned out by his, "Once I have given my word as a solemn oath! On my honor as a vassal of Aesil, I will not betray that oath! The best way for me to assure your crowning is for you to get to the Palace territory alive, I cannot assure that if you die here. Go!" He could hear footfalls behind him as she ran to the exit of the Neutral Zone. Melvus took notice that Cylus was no longer on the floor He went with her... She is safe... The injured wizard turned to the enemy.

"Have at me demons!" Melvus yelled at the archers who stood before him, Sister Agnes behind him and his wounds healed.
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Okay
I'll work on my next post now.
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Here. I posted, sorry for the wait - I just moved and don't have internet for a while... I'm at a starbucks right now.
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