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Current Life is what happens when you're busy making other plans.
7 yrs ago
It always seems impossible, until it's done.
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Beauty is power; a smile is its sword.
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Currenlly seeking 1x1s

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@Cara Took the liberty of PMing you as well.
@Themerlinhawk Updated my CS, please take a look at it and let me know if anything else should be amended.
@MysT3CH Unfortunately I'm going to have to say No to Johnathan Reeves. He explicitly violates my "No Supernatural Hunter" clause in the Magic User section.


Must of missed that, no worries.

He is also an invincible Abmortal with the moonscarred ability. That combination is unacceptable since not only is he immortal and invincible but he possess a variety of other supernatural powers. In addition to that the character's abmortality includes powers far beyond simply cheating death, which is unacceptable.

The moon scarred thing was meant to be rendered impossible due to his immunity to disease. As per your reponse to my earlier inquiry. He cannot die yes. But is not invincible. Other beings of supernatural presence can harm him, as seen when the werewolf ate his arm. Which was stated in the CS. All damage he receives is tangible but heals quickly unless inflicted by a supernatural. So he can be stopped by them easily. And weapons which would normally affect supernaturals like silver would hurt him. Which I also stated, though perhaps was not clear on my intent. I am open to possible fixes for his abnormality i guess.

The curse also transfers and reverts supernaturals which I'm going to veto immediately as there is next to nothing in this world that will undo a supernatural change. If there were it would be rare, unheard of and the center of a lengthy card related mystery and would be directly related to that supernatural being not a blanket 'removes supernatural status'.

I can understand that, but again this isn't something he can control. and only happens if he is killed. I can remove this no problem. But it isn't like it would happen save to once during the RP (If he dies)

The prosthetic limb has no explanation since its not a period piece. It would need some sort of explanation (this is more knit pick since it appears to be there to simply shore up a potential interesting character weakness 'I lost an arm to a Wendigo'.)


Was a werewolf and i can explain it in the bio gladly, just didn't want to hit you with a book so skipped it.

Overall the character feels like he would have been quickly run out of Job by the combined might of the supernatural communities who would have identified him as an immediate threat given his current state and run him off. In summary the character is unbalanced and needs more work in terms of how he fits into Job. A few knit pick notes: General knowledge of the supernatural is rare, even rarer is knowledge about things like Reapers, angels, demons, and the divine messengers and harbingers of other faiths beyond the judo-christian faith. I left things like angels and demons off the list on purpose as they represent the initiation into some of the ultimate mysteries of the world like: Is there a god? a devil? Vishnu? What about the gods of other mythologies? Crow? Coyote? Ra? Sun Wukong? Thor? Job is purposefully written such questions unanswered though it hints at the fact that there may be more in the world beyond what I have listed. At this time I would prefer to keep it that way. Try again with the character and then let me know


I kind of wanted a character that would be at odds with the whole community. As i wanted to explore the idea of him being an outcast among outcasts. But alas, i again didn't factor the no hunter thing. I'll edit him up. Though him hunting the pack was really just meant to be his excuse to be there, I understand your reservation given that rule which I seemed to have over looked. Thank you for the timely feed back though.

Yea. PMing you about that now.
CS is up for consideration.



1871 I believe was stated in the int check.
Out of curiosity, if an individual was already effectively Abmortal - and subsequently immune to disease, could they still become moon-scarred? Or could they be immune to said toxins as well?
Interested, I'll get to work on a CS, once i've caught up on the OOC.
if this if still happening, i'd like to express interest as well.
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