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Little Alice said
Nytefall, this is my review.I think you forgot a section. You placed skills and traits together. Am not sure if you noticed, but the CS has two different sections now. Skills and traits. Please see some other CS's if you've having doubts what is correct and what not. Other than that, I am actually going to say I am again a Blood Release Kekkei Genkei. Not because I am against the idea, but the way to balance it is a hassle.That and I find most of your jutsu not really C or D ranked. A D ranked jutsu that enables somebody's blood to melt through metal? To be fair, that would mean its highly corrosive or has a very high heat/temprature to melt through metal. If you would apply that to skin and bone, it would burn right through it. Faster than you would likely imagine. I would suggest to heavily tone the jutsu down. As for the regaining blood while sleeping? I am very against that. Blood that can be used for several things and then be regained like that is not really acceptable in my book. I would suggest to consider why she would need such a release. As I always suggest to newcomers : Think for what purposes you want to use the KG. Only for combat uses? Then better not use it. It will become something dull as you can't really use it for character development and on the long run, it will become not a character you'll enjoy to the max.But that is my review as a Sub GM.


I understand you concern. However the hardening of her blood as more than just combat uses. For example reinforcing structures helping injured team mates, Creating short bridges. I have removed the acid like blood as i can agree that is quite overpowered. I will be touching up the CS a bit here and there. Consider it still being working on as I would like to see what other GMs make of it and suggestion they have.
Gerontis said
@NytefallThink I know you?At any rate, my review :1. ) We don't use the chakra or any kind of pills. They are a bit of broken in fights as they prolong it and thus are deemed to be something we shouldn't use.2. ) The traits are off. Starting genins are fresh genins from the Academy. Its also not possible to make them start with above average chakra reserves and a good chakra control. For an experienced chuunin that would be possible, but not for a genin.3. ) Am not sure about the Kekkei Genkei. Think that hardening and using blood can be interesting, but I will remain neutral over that for now.4.) I would like to suggest to read the rules. The rank of a genin is that they can start with Two C ranked Jutsu and four D ranked jutsu. I shall review the jutsu once you have made the changes in that section.- Gero.


Okay i understand that, i can rework the jutsus. and the other bits, as for pills they are mainly used in battle to ensure she doesn't die from blood loss, however i can take them out or limit their use to out of battle or during training as well as the amount she carries.

Done some edits. Please review ty :)

http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/15895/posts/ooc?page=19#post-564646

Name:Shiro Konton
Nickname/Alias: Shiro
Gender: Female
Age and date of birth:13
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Bisexual

Parents:

  • Tamekaze Konton (Father - MIA)

  • Sheiko Konton (Mother - MIA)


Length and build 144.5 cm Average
Weight35kg
Favorite weather and season Rain and Autumn



Village: Kirigakure
Birthplace: Kirigakure
Organization: Kirigakure

Clan/Bloodline: Konton
Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature:

Ketsu (Blood Release)



Appearance:




Personality:
One could liken Shiro to a Masochist, possibly because she doesn't mind cutting herself and using her abilities in a reckless way. Shiro would shrug and agree as she has little regard for the thoughts of others, she just wants to get the job done as quick as possible.

Shiro's sadistic, masochist and bloodlust attitude could come from her clan's kekkei genkai, due to it needing the use of the users own blood in order to be used.

Shiro can be a real handful in general and enjoys winding people up and getting on people's nerves. She can however be an excellent team mate when you can get over her aggressive personality. She will grudgingly come to the aid of her teammates but will show no sympathy if they get in her way.



History:

Shiro comes from the aggressive and rather withdrawn Konton clan. A clan that posseses the powerfiul blood release blood line. It has given the known users of it infamy when used in battle due to its high cost but great impact on the battlefield.

Shiro was young when she was told that her parents had disapeard. Shiro knew her parents as being devoted clan members who kept many secrets about her clans hidden past.

Why they kept these secrets Shiro did not know. Shiro had no family members to look after her as none of the Konton clan reside in their village of origin. This is something that Shiro still searches for the answer for as well of of course, the location of her parents.

Theme Song:



Weapons/Items:



Skills/Abilities

  • Skilled Taijutsu

  • Good Chakra Control

  • Skilled Kusarigamajutsu

  • Weak Genjutsu

  • Average Ninjutsu

  • Strong Close Combatant




Special Traits

  • High Pain Threshold

  • Blood Thirsty

  • Regains lost blood while she sleeps




Kekkei Genkai:

Name of Kekkei Genkai: Ketsu (Blood Release)
Clan: Konton
Description: The Konton clan are well known for their ability to warp their own blood into tools while in battle. A great battle was once won by one man as the more they cut into him the more blood they gave him to work with. Sadly he did not live to tell the tale of his victory.

Blood release allows the owner to control their own blood to a degree of making it boil, explode, or harden. They can only control their own blood and of other clan members. Owners of the Ketsu blood line are granted the ability to create red blood cells seemingly from nowhere when they sleep.

Most clan members are afflicted with the curse of blood lust while in battle causing them to dip more and more into their limited supply of blood. Due to the sacrificial nature of Blood Release most of the Konton clan have died, due to bleeding to death.



Jutsu:




Custom Jutsu



Summons

None
Shame to see you go Hal. Wish you luck with whatever you pursue.
alrighty coolio i dont see that elf has been said to be a race so I will just give you the heads up that my character will be an elf
Just wondering if this rp is still accepting and where i should post a cs. while i realise in the titlke it says you are accepting i feel that it is only polite to ask before i post.
probably not going to get ESO just doesnt seem like my kind of game.
EliteCommander said
Indeed. Just make sure your character doesn't arrive at the meeting location before Sharee does, as it would mess with the collab I have written up with New Yorker. Not that you could really do much at the meeting spot before anyone else is there, I suppose. I'm crossing my fingers that we can get to it soon enough, so you won't have to wait too much longer.


nah its fine just say in rp when you see my character coming to the meeting point
I'm an IT guy just finishing a course in webdesign
I gave my character a nice little conversation starter
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