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I'm heading off to meet Jacob, Rachel and Leo to form an attack plan, after that what do our two tacticians plan for our motley crew?
Seems like 4 of us have gathered. And the plot thickens :)
"I'm ready!" Yelled Yorik, from his front door, Bronze Spear in hand and copper pot mounted crookedly upon his head. Although his voice matched the strength of his spirit and heart, his body from the waist down suggested otherwise. In a torrent of profuse quivering, the farmhand looked foolish and comical as he stood at his home. The family peeked cautiously behind him, all equipped with household utilities in arm and upon head in a do ill fashion.

"Don't get yourself killed boy!" Wretched then mother, as she patted her son's back. However, in reality with her mountainous physique, it was more like a forceful shove. Toppling forward it took Yorik almost every ounce of his mettle to keep from planting face first into the ground. Looking back at his family. A smile crept passed his face as he rose his spear high above his head proudly, the trembling ceased.

"I'll do my best Ma!" Jogging off, Yorik was keen to find the young tactician, it would be through him victory would be assured.
Everything happened so fast, from the mob of equine and sheep, to the kindness of a stranger, to the terrifying attack of marauders, the swift and just expulsion of them and two rousing speeches of heroism. Yorik was flabbergasted, coughing up tufts of wool and hay the humble farmer squealed in fright mixed with awe as the bandits were defeated and the village rallied behind the two brave souls who stood before them.

"<cough> Gosh, that fellow can cast spells and wield a blade!" Pointing out the obvious, it wad hard to process much else. Beyond all that had transpired, ethereal flames had just been cast in front of his very eyes, the farmhand could only look upon Jacob as a reliable saviour. With all due respect to the eloquent older gentleman, unless he masked a mountain of muscle and a plethora of weaponry under his robes then the protector of the village was already decided.

After the robed man strode off, having helped to inspire the community to bar their gates and take up arms, this further proved it was Jacob who would be the one to lead the defences, even if he was very much younger.

"Yes sir! I-I'll do my best!" Piped Yorik as he clumsily saluted and sped off to his home to claim his Bronze Spear. Now was the time to test his mettle and lay his life done for the village he loved. As the eager villager approached his home, his visitor, Ross bolted out rushing past Yorik, spinning the young man, again, on his heels.

"Bandits?! Trying to ruin The Great Ross' meal? Nay! Not on this day!" As quickly as he arrived, the hulking Beserker was off, brandishing his Silver Axe with the rest of the rallied villagers. Soon Yorik would join them.
I left it general so there is a lot of room for players to build their own story. The realm is at peace, but the Einherjar have begun a silent invasion. (Which they themselves do not realize)

That in itself let's us direct our individual characters with a base to write with. Look how much diversity came with the DLC packs in the game.

As writers we have our characters grow through the situations we put them in. Take Appollo with their character Jacob. They put in a bandit attack and within the post we saw how Jacob was pushing himself to lead. Same with Lionhearted with Rachel, little things like admitting to hating horses but willing to try riding one. I see that as character growth.

Feel free to keep asking questions, as long as it helps stimulate you to write more about Sho. It's a shame you put time into a profile and you want me to give you a story to work with as well as the challenges for your character.

If a writer was given all their material before writing, itwouldn't be as enjoyable, in my opinion.

By the way, since the request to abolish Post Order has been put in, I will be the first to step out and celebrate our groups decision by posting.

And thank you to Apollo for stepping up with all of your suggestions! Let's make this happen!
I'm back!

From the looks of it, it sounds like you guys like a more free flowing post. I'm new so I'll concede and do it your way!

By the way Sho, I don't ever write with a direction in mind. I work with what I get and build it with the people I role play with. All I am thinking of is how will my character grow.
I'll see you all when I get back! Looking forward to how the story develops!!!!
This will probably be my last post until the 20th Thursday. Will be out in Dominican Republic for 9 days

Round 2
Ryder
Jacob
Ku'shin
Leo
Menkar
Rachel

If you all get to Round 3 before I return go ahead and skip me, I'll take my turn after Rachel if it comes to that. :)
"<wahahaha!> Thank the gods! Your kindness saved me twice!" Laughing heartily, the towering Ross, son of the Great Garcia patted his benefactor upon the back, a gesture of gratitude. However, the behemoth's open palm felt like a heavy pan colliding in between Yorik's shoulders.

"<ow...>" Muttered the humble farmer as he rubbed his sore appendage. Looking upon his guest, the young man could see the battle tested physique an obvious explanation to Ross' unrestrained strength. "Think nothing of it Sir Ross, it is my duty to aide all denizens of-" Before Yorik could finish and go into an enamoured tangent on his hero saviour Chrom, Ross stopped in his tracks, his eyes darting across the estate.

"Hold, something is amiss!" Caught off guard in mid sentence, Yorik walked on ahead a few paces. Hearing the Beserker's words, the humble farmer turned around only to be knocked over by Ross sprinting past him. "They are overcooking the porridge! The Invincible Ross hates burnt stew!!!" The hulking man raced past a bewildered Yorik. As the young farmer spun on his heels, he noticed two more visitors near the barn. His vision was blurred from the spin, thus he could not make out who these people were. Toppling over and lying prone upon the field, the herd of sheep and equine cheered in amusement. Laughing and crawling through playful nibbles and nudges, Yorik tried to get a better look at his new visitors.

"<haha!> Stop it!" Chuckled Yorik as he weaved through his animal companions. "Hello!!!" Yelled the farm hand, he could not see the two visitors as his flock of animals either affectionately coddled at him or began to meander upon the estate. It was an odd scene to say the least. Roaming sheep and horses and their caretaker rolling upon the dirt, surrounded by some of his cheery animals. A lone hand sticking out from sheep's wool and horse manes, waving at the thief and tactician duo.
Cool Apollo, I like to improvise with posts I get before me, so I'll be flexible with what develops in our story!

Great Lion! I've got a habit for just nick naming people, and sorry if my posts sound like I'm rushing people. I'm just super enthused to role play again, I've been on ice for 6 years.

I'll have mine up after I wake up haha.
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