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6 yrs ago
Current Today I reached the conclusion that, if presented with an exact duplicate of herself, one of my characters would DEFINITELY hit that.
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7 yrs ago
They're not LONG chapters; but the fact I've managed to right 2 meh and 4 half decent ones in 4 days makes me very happy with myself.
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7 yrs ago
Wow, I just realized it's been a full year since the Avadon incident.
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7 yrs ago
Decided to half-ass nanowrimo by doing a RWBY OC fanfic I've been thniking about for ages. The fight scene I'm working on rn just feels.... right.
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7 yrs ago
According to the scale i just weighed in on I'm down to 313 from a starting point of 330 when i started going to the gym a little ovver a month ago
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Not even remotely similar to Pyrrha's semblance. hers is simply the ability to control and move metal through use of magnetic forces, while Ferrin's is more like being an iron-based demigod.

Looks better, BUT (This next part is mostly me nitpicking, but also sort of important.)

Question:Why describe it as a broadsword when a blade of that length fits the definition of a greatsword?

Question: does the sword fold or collapse in any ways? if not, does he always carry it?

Question: where does the ammo for the third form of the claw come from?

Question: why call them coin shaped ingots and not simply iron coins?

Question: Why do you use the same character for all of your roleplays?
I'll re-evaluate once I see the modified personality.
Semblance is fine, it's just a bit... over-engineered? the name is my biggest concern.
Not wanting to be on a team is fine, i understand that. but based on his personality, he would be incapable as functioning as part of a group. there is a sizable difference between 'not wanting to cooperate' and 'refusing to cooperate'
Sorry, but he just doesn't fit the bill. something off about him that I can't quite put my finger on. I think he might be a bit too neutral/evil... gonna need to do a quick analysis to see if I can pinpoint the problem...

Ah, found it.
The 'lone wolf' thing. We need team players, and Ferrinas really isn't one.

Also, his semblance is just plain bizarre, and the name is awkward.
Oh, and I recommend changing the sword to something other than a katana, since he isn't a japanese themed character.
*faepalm*
original post in OOC. I posted an explanation of the the non-grimm enemy I've devised to fight you. still working on the person controlling them, but I'm keeping that a secret for now.
no. decided against that, too complicated.
this is the major antagonists for your characters. for the first arc, anyways.
[3 months ago]

“I used to study human history, for I have lived through many ages. But what is there to study, when they repeat the same mistakes again and again? Nothing. Left on their own, they are little more than a drop of water in a river, doomed to follow the same road forever; But now, as they near destruction, it is my time to intervene. Mankind needs heroes, and so I shall provide them.”
A man fully adorned in silver armor stands on the ledge in beacon tower

“What are you on about now?” inquired the headmaster, sitting at his desk, filing paperwork for the new batch of students

“The day is coming, Ozpin. You know as well as I do. The silver clad warrior reminded, strolling towards the headmasters desk, his voice booming in the empty room

“Indeed, they will not sleep forever. But how much longer do we have?”

“A few more years, at least. Long enough to prepare the newest crop.” He sighed, the purple glow of his eyes fading out for a moment “Just pray they are enough.” With that, the silvered knight departed, retrieving an enormous sheath and the swords within as he passed by the doorway “I have work that must be done. Make sure the assassin is properly contained, we don't want that maniac getting out before his time.”
With that, he disappeared,somehow making his way out of the school unnoticed.
[today]
“Ozpin, the new students will be arriving soon” reminded Glynda Goodwitch, looking over the roster “Some of them seem, different, somehow. It's almost as if-”
“As if what, Glynda?” the professor interrupted “Never mind, would you like to do a rehearsal speech?” the headmaster chuckled “How many years have I been doing this, Glynda?” the teacher sighed
“Too many, I think.”
“I fear you may just be right.”

[That afternoon, Beacon Academy landing zone]
A brown haired teacher stands at the cliff, watching the inbound shuttles, beside him, a sharp eyed young man, wearing the beacon uniform “So, excited to meet your new schoolmates?” the teacher asked “Underclassmen, not like I'll be living with them,” he reminded “I should get back to the dorm, the rest of the team is waiting or me.” the teacher patted his son on the shoulder “Say hi to your cousins for me, Garen. And keep them away from the new students. The three of them can be... intimidating, at a glance.” the hawk-eyed boy nodded in agreement “Good luck with the recruits, dad.” Grey chuckles nervously “Let's just hope I don't need it.”
(Your characters are on the first airship. 4 rounds until next GM post. BEGIN!)
alright, I'm going to put the intro post up in the IC thread, but nobody post anything else, we still need to fill the roster and assign post order.
if you need help you can send me the sheet in a PM and I'll go over it with you.
Also, decided what crazy thing your characters will be up against, put a summary of it in the OP. will decide on/create the villain behind it soon,but I'm keeping the who a secret.
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