PharaohAtem

The Lost Alpha

oh well it could have been a descent RP but with gm gone and everyone dropping out i think it is safe to say this RP is officially dead so...

Time of death 10 pm 20/04/14 anyone like to say any last wads?

How to Save Your Dragon.

Astrid Hofferson

Astrid was just about to hunt some more dragons when she got new orders just then Twin Blade came up to tell her about Kuro she then grabed Blade and quickly ran into the sky and began looking around the forest she then amplified all the sound in the forests until she heard Kuros hart beet she could tell it was his cos it was racing like he was terrified of something she then reduced all other noise and focused on the location where Kuro was and began running with Blade over her solder as she made her way to Kuros location

Raiden

With his dragon like sens of smell and Superior traking skills it was easy for Raiden to follow Kuros trail as he his way to Kuros location flying as fast as his new wings could carry him he wonderd what he was doing way out in the middle of the forest when the village was under attack

The Twins

The Twin couldn't stop fighting long enough to here their new orders however they did take a brief pauses to ask each other if they heard something and even though they both asked never of them where smart enough to realizes someone said something to them they just thought they where imagining it

How to Save Your Dragon.

Astrid Hofferson

Astrid saw the village get attacked but she didn't need to run to get her weapons as she always had them on her and just as she was about to go hunting she heard Rogue tell her to put out the fire she then took a beep breath in blow towards the fire though it was not air that she blew out but water she had use her water powers to suck up what water was in the air and even sucked it out of the earth around her creating a water blast that blew a hole in the wall she then tuned to Rogue

"sorry i over did it a little i promise i will fix it later till then i got some dragons to kill"

just as she had said that Kuro came up to her but she didn't even notice him she just ran right past him as she released powerful sound waves from her feet as she took every step sending her higher and higher into the air as as a Deadly Nadder came flying at her it shout out some spikes witch she deflated with ease then chopped of both its wings and she amplified the sound and pitch of its own scream and reflated it back at it the sound vibrations scrambled its brain killing before it hit the ground she then span around and kicked a wave of water at a Monstrous Nightmare putting out the fire and as the water tuned to stem making it unable to she she flew at it and stabbed both of her swords though into both of its eyes driving them into its brain and as the blood spewed out of his head she smiled as she bathed in it

Raiden

was cutting up some bolders doing some light training when the village was attacked as a Zippleback came up behind him and with out even looking he swung his sword round and chopped off both of its heads he then smiled as he thought to himself 'well people are always telling me to fight fire with fire so why not fight dragons with dragon DNA' he then used the DNA of a Deadly Nadder giving him blue dragon wings scales and even a spiky tale now he could breath fire and fire spikes out of his tale but he did not give himself the dragons poor eye sight he then took to the sky's as he set up a mind link with all the other vikings in the village

'chief Raiden here i have set up a mind like with me you and the other vikings so now you can give your orders to everyone at once no matter where they are PS this is including the lazy bastards who think its ok to sleep in while the village is under attack'

after that he flew the center of the village from the dragon area cutting down every dragon he saw with ever his sword or a psychic wave once he arrived at the center of the village he saw a Gronckle eating the stone statue of Thor he quickly fired a few spikes at it although it did not do much due to their though skin but he did not expect to do any damage the attack was simply meant to force it to step back and it worked as he cot closer he hit it with his shied witch had a strong psychic field around it with he dispersed as his shield made contact creating a strong shock wave knocking his head upward and forcing its moth open he then shout a blast of fire down it thought coking it from inside out

The twins

Tuffnut and Ruffnut where fighting as usual when the dragons started attack and as a monstrous nightmare came at them to attack Ruffnut Tuffnut simply stomped on the ground and as he the earth began to shake and a stone spike came out of the ground and stabbed into its heart he looked at as it lay dieing

"only i can kill my sister"

Ruffnut then kicked him in the head

"dont insult me that thing could have never killed me you piece of shit"

she then created a large thunder storm high in the shy forcing all the dragons to land well all except the night fury who could doge lighting

then Tuffnut got back up covered his fist with stone and punched Ruffnut the chest sending her flying into a hose that was knocked down

"no one sucker punches me like that you little bitch" two the went back to fighting coursing some damage to the village

The Lost Alpha

ok here theses are both links to a pretty big list of powers

http://heroeswiki.com/List_of_abilities

http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/List_of_Supernatural_Powers_and_Abilities

i would give you more specific recommendations but just found out form one she has lost interest in the RP and will not be making the IC so hope that helps you in the future and sorry guys it was nice meeting you all

How to Save Your Dragon.

Cs
Name: Tuffnut
Name: Ruffnut
Gender: Male
Gander: Female
Age: 15
Age: 15
Appearance:


Tuffnut Personality: Same the real ones except he has grate instincts and is a natural dragon trainer he hates his sister and always fights with her but when they get serious and start to work together they have unavailable team working skills and they can fight as one because they are so in sink Tuffnut is a more down to earth, serious and level headed then his sister although he is still an idiot

Ruffnut Personality: same as Tuffnut except she has her head in the clouds and is more laid back and relaxed person and she is always daydreaming

Bio: Same as the real ones

Tuffnut
Power 1: Earth/ Nature
Power 2: Bone manipulation
Markings: Tat on his right arm
Family:
Friends:
Sentimental Attachment: each other cos even though they hate each other and fight all the time they are still brother and sister and they look out for each other when they need to basically they have the type attitude that only they and kill each other
Other:

Ruffnut
Power 1: Weather Manipulation
Power 2: Bone manipulation
Markings: Scars, cuts, and general markings.
Family:
Friends:
Sentimental Attachment: each other cos even though they hate each other and fight all the time they are still brother and sister and they look out for each other when they need to basically they have the type attitude that only they and kill each other
Other:

How to Save Your Dragon.

Cs
Name: Raiden
Gender: Male
Age: 19
Appearance:


Personality: Raiden is a very smart and skilled Viking who fears nothing he is not a cowered like his alter ego he knows everything about dragons (only whats the in the book of dragons so not rely everything) because he can be kind of arrogant he is well versed in warfare and strategy he dose not act without thinking is be very cautious he dislikes those who think they are better then everybody and who brags about everything he dose not care nor dose he participate in the compaction that his friends started

Bio: Raiden is the seconded beast dragon slayer other then Kuro but dose not brag about killing dragons he just gets on with killing dragons he has always hated the competition between his friends believing it was making them arrogant and he dislikes what it has done to them he is always training or dragon hunting as he has read it that many times he has memorized the book complicity now he all is dose is update the information when needed as for a lot of dragons all it says is it is dangerous and need to kill on sight

Power 1: Psychic/ Telekinesis
Power 2: DNA Manipulation
Markings: Blue paint markings
Family:
Friends:
Sentimental Attachment:
Other:

How to Save Your Dragon.

Cs
Name: Astrid Hofferson
Gender: Female
Age: 17
Appearance:


Personality: Astrid takes much pride in being the best, but that doesn’t mean you’ll find her basking in her glory for she’s always off training and practicing. Her perfectionist ways makes her a very sore loser and she refuses to put up with anyone she feels isn’t doing their part.

Even after her slight change of heart, she still isn't very tolerant of someone who harms more than helps in dragon training or tagging along on missions. she is also highly competitive

Bio: same as the real Astrid except like the real Astrid she highly skilled but is Physically then your typical muscle brained Viking and because of this she uses her powers and skills to compensate for her weakness she skilled in both swordplay and Martial Arts though she dose not use her hands to fight expect with her swords

Weapon: She uses a double bladed long sword, that can be detached from each other to make two single long swords or connect them to each other side by side to become a double bladed long sword.

Power 1: Water/ Ice manipulation
Power 2: Sound Manipulation
Markings: the red paint tats sown in pic
Family:
Friends:
Sentimental Attachment: her sword as it is a family keep sake handed down to the most skilled members of her family
Other:

How to Save Your Dragon.

if he dose not have a gun y not use this pic

The Lost Alpha

yeah they are stronger but seen as you clearly dont mind having different powers i could give a list of decant power if you would like considering that they are strong power but they are also common but they are fine i only gave the suggestions that i did because they where stronger powers that gave you the same ability so if you want more uncommon powers i can get u a list otherwise they are fine

The Lost Alpha

fist of let me say Rose i can see where you are coming from but a lot of the powers she has rejected are a sub ability of stronger powers and where as it dose not she you have to have strong powers it dose state you will be fighting other packs so it would stand to reason that you would need good power in order to defend yourself and the pack and as for her being harsh she is i agree but she is getting relay annoyed with contently repeating herself and even though you haven't seen it let me just add this has also been going on in PM with multiple people where she has heard them out with their powers and explained the situation she has even shown me some of the quotes but she has just had enough that's y she has handed it over to me but if i where in here position it would not have gone on for this long as i would have been more direct with those who she has had this problem with but i wont mention any names anyway sorry to see you go and try not to hold it agents her she has just lost her peasants today is all

ok now i have taken a quick look at everyone's CS's accepted and none accepted and this is a of week powers u ay want to change and stronger power serjestions that give you the same ability as the weaker version you chose this is in order of when i spotted them now obviously those who been accepted dont have to make any edits but i would strongly serjest you do as i have been told that i am allowed to kill of any of the weaker wolfs and i am going to make a character just for that porpoise now we will all end up fighting him he will only kill those who are week and cant put up a good fight

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Stitchblades, Bjomolf, Power 1: his large size has given him abnormal strength for a pup of his age thats not even a power or an abillity its basically make you like any other body builder IRL but he is a pup so he will have others to look after him so if you dont want to edit you should be pretty save as long as you have Strong body guards now you could give him enhanced ability's I.E strength speed agility dexterity regeneration ect or you could focus on strength in witch case give him super strength and invulnerability or go with one of the mimicry powers i mentioned before as their are a lot of animals that are stronger then wolfs both IRL and in myths that would give you that ability like my spder ability give me enhanced strength and agility

Argetlam350 Thalesin Power 2: Unusually fast, more then most wolves. ok this one is an elder so he probably wont be doing much fighting but you basically just made him like any Olympic runner you could do the same thing as i serjested for Stitchblades

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Argetlam350 Zaccar Power 1: Manipulates smoke ok i have watched one piece and i know smoker is pretty strong but his body is made out of smoke so unless you are going to do something simmaler i cant see how that will help you other then covering your escape Power 2: Some unusual strength for a wolf ok what is it with theses so called types of powers enhanced strength is classed as an ability super strength a power theses types of powers are never trust me on this you could put that in your bio and give a half assessed expansion like he works out a lot and gained a lot of muscal and one would accept it you are meant to be the hunter leader and from what i can see you are one of the weakest hunters if you want to control smoke why dont you give yourself water/ ice control as that actually lets u manipulate water ice snow and steam now i know that seam is not smoke but it is close enoth that the one will let you control smoke with considering how annoyed she is for power two see perveios tips i gave Stitchblades and Argetlam350 now you dont have to edit as i believe u have already been accepted but if you dont i dont think you will live long and since i am one of the three who will be killing of characters others being one and DKUK i know what i am talking about here

SomeoneSomewere Austin Power 1: telepathy( communication with mind alone. Once he creates a conversation he can recieve thoughts aswell from the other person before he ends the conversation.) that just telekinesis so y dont u add physic

FireHeartWolf Alexis(Alex) Power 1: When she sinks her fangs into something, it injects a paralysing poison. If she catches someone out, her pack then has the upper-hand. if you give yourself spider or lizard mimicry you would have that anyway as well as other ability's and have access to different types of venom Power 2: Can create a 'forcefield' or barrier surrounding something, creating it invisible and masks into the background- much like camouflage. light control can do the exact same thing and you can use it to kill people and fly who dosnt like flying?

FireHeartWolf Tristan Power 1: If he makes contact with someone- licks them, cuddles them ext.- he will sooth them and, if he licks a wound, can heal. ok sound manipulation can do the fist part as you could use it to sing with has been proven to sooth animals IRL as well as bring out other emotions as for the healing if you use the Molecular Acceleration sub ability theoretically you could accelerate the body natural healing process this link will enplane it in more detail http://powerlisting.wikia.com/wiki/Sound_Manipulation power 2: Can communicate with people by sending them images telepathically-but only pictures, no words same as someonesomewheres power1

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Athinar Bandit Power 2: Enhanced healing same as Argetlam350 and Stitchblades but for the mimicry you would need something like lizard dragon or phoenix thinks than naturally regenerate faster then other animals

Cerberus Apollo Power 1: Empathic healing- Takes wounds and pain onto herself.
Power 2: Hyper persuasion- Hypnotically forces others to obey comands, this is weaker on Alphas, Elders, and ones with strong will. ok power 1 is a unique ability's so its hard to give you a power that can do them but their are lodes of ways to heal other if that's what you want to do i can give you list if you need ideas and as for Power 2 you can use physic/telekinesis and you could attack and defend with it and considering you are a Caretaker and part of your job is protecting pups and the sick/ injured you should make him a bit stronger

Cerberus Artemis Power 1: Vulpes senses: Can hear and smell much better than a wolf should, matching the senses of foxes./ CerberusArtemisPower 1: Vulpes senses: Can hear and smell much better than a wolf should, matching the senses of foxes.OrionPower 1: Vulpine Physiology- Has a Fox like appearance and senses. ok i have gone though the enhanced ability and senses thing a few times now so i assume you all get the idea

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Destinyfailhorror17 Corin Power: Super sonic bark (deathen enemies if they got to close and disorientate them, leaving them defenceless) ok sound manipulation would not only give you the same ability and more it would make this power completely useless

Destinyfailhorror17CorinPower: Super sonic bark (deathen enemies if they got to close and disorientate them, leaving them defenceless) same as Destinyfailhorror17/ Corins Power

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HellHoundWoof Lupus Power 1: He is capable of seeing far distances with his ome eye. ok this power can be use as a sub power of a lode of stronger power or you could just do the same thing as i have said about the enhanced ability's if you need a more detailed list then let me know that is if you are still interested after all that
Power 2: He can make his fur hard as bone when necessary. Bone manipulation this would allow you to make bone armor and fire parts of your bones as weapons and give you enhanced regeneration

now to address Roses commute duplicate powers yes they are a lot of them but that is because there a lot of similar ability's