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A good CS, overall. However, there were a few things that were overlooked or misinterpreted. In no particular order, I'll just go from top to bottom.

From which region does she originate? If it's not canon, you are free to create your region. Exactly when did they move to Hoenn? Did they immediately go to Littleroot Town or did they begin elsewhere? Regardless, I believe the Johnson's and Arami's would be quite familiar with each other. I'd be more than happy to flesh that out with you.

I wanted to see unique/personal items in the "Items" sections. The number of Pokeballs, potions, etc. is largely irrelevant, unless you were going to keep close track of it and use it throughout the story. The Gauntlet has a Pokedex and Map built in, making them superfluous to own alongside a Gauntlet. The "Standard Applications" are applications that comes with the Gauntlet.

The moves are pretty strict but can seem inclusive when I say "Pokemon can know an unlimited amount of moves." I want Pokemon to stay true to their typing and physiology. You can branch out with moves that go with their personality and characteristics, but it can't go into changing the "natural" chemistry of the Pokemon or adding or subtracting to their inherent typing. I know it's vague and contrite in the OP, but I didn't want to write a short story on the mechanics of movesets for this RP. But I'm not against working with you to sort it out into something with which we both can work.

I don't see how Arcanine can make its tail like iron since it's not rock, ground, or steel type.

Metagross is not a Ghost or undead which makes it illogical/impossible that it can use Shadow Ball.

Milotic isn't an Ice type so I don't understand where it gets it's ability to freeze its water.

Dragonite is neither a Ground, Electric, Ice, or Fire type. It's not really heavy enough to perform Earthquake without being a Ground type. Dragon's have plenty of moves to utilize without needing to go into other types.

Also, the height/weight sections was so you could make them smaller, bigger, skinnier, or fatter than the "average," which is what Bulbapedia lists. So there was no need to put them if you weren't changing their physicality since it was an optional section.
You don't have to have a full team, no.
And you can be any type of character you wish. :)

Also, ignore the IC post. I'm writing another one. ;P
I didn't make the interest check until today. But feel free to brainstorm anything you'd like to add to the world. Nothing is set in stone. You can think of the Map Notes, Technologies, and other stuff as suggestions or ideas.

But I'm glad you think it's interesting. It's not often I get interest for Pokemon in Advanced.

In the meantime, feel free to ask any questions or state any concerns you might have. :D
Hoenn: Make a Wish
Updated OP.

I'll keep trying until something sticks. xP


They met up with his family a bit later than expected, but they all rushed through the small road connecting Oldale to Slateport so they could make their ship to Ever Grande City. Forrest had all his Pokemon in their Pokeballs, which was unusual for any other time of the year. But he spent this time to have his sons crawl over him or feed his daughter and cradle her to sleep. The five of them together looked like the perfect family.

There were many trainers who wanted to challenge Forrest specifically, but he turned them all down and passed them off to his cousins. At this point in his life, and the level on which his Pokemon competed, he didn’t need to “test the waters” or “keep his team in shape.” It was his regular routine to keep his team in the best condition possible at all times. He felt they should always be ready for a tough battle at any time, so he always trained with his Pokemon himself.

It looked odd for Forrest to have his sleeveless hoodie on, even if it barely covered much of his body. That, with six Pokeballs around his belt and the rucksack and luggage bags around him, he looked over-encumbered from his usual travelling equipment when most of the family left for the lunch banquet sponsored by the Elite Four and current Champion. He looked almost clumsy as he shifted or walked around. But he took this time to start on a cigar while his kids were away. He wasn’t used to being around so many people, considering his hermitic tendencies.

“You gotta light?” a stranger approached him. The man was clearly seasoned, but Forrest couldn’t immediately tell if he was there to compete in the Championship or if he was traveling with others. Instead of prying, he just fetched a matchbook from his pocket and handed it to the man. “You’re Forrest Johnson, right?” he said with a cigarette in his mouth.

Forrest just nodded in response. Just as he had, a younger girl approached with excitement. She was just another competitor wishing to get a feel for the competition. He had to redirect her to Chesley, which she seemed just as excited since he was a foreigner from Johto.

“Why don’t you indulge her,” he said with smoke in his lungs. “I’ve been watching you turning down everyone who challenges you,” the man admitted as the smoke drifted from his mouth.

“I don’t like to, and my Pokemon don’t care for the lack of battling space.”

The man looked around. The port was larger than a standard battlefield and he was clearly confused. How much space did one need to battle? “Their battle styles require a clear field,” Forrest interpreted the man’s look.

The man looked around once more to note how many trainers were around, littering the bow of the ship. He just nodded and turned to sit next to Forrest. Just as he had, Forrest smothered his cigar and put it back into its case. The man looked up to see a woman with three small children with her walking toward them.

George hid behind his mother while Stephen approached the two with an odd sense of confidence. “Who’s this?” the boy asked with hands on his hips.

The man raised his brow, impressed by the boy’s frankness. “Elijah,” he said with a small smile and extended his hand to shake the boy’s.

Stephen just crossed his arms in denial of the greeting. “What do you want with my dad?” he asked.

“We were just chatting, hon,” Forrest interrupted and waved him to come to his lap. He chuckled slightly in knowing he was responsible for his child’s behavior.

Elijah visited for a bit before returning to his own daughter who was competing in the competition. They learned he came from Sinnoh and was there only for the sake of his daughter. This being the highlight of the voyage, Forrest was glad to get off the ship at Ever Grande and find their room at the immense inn. Chesley, Caleb, and Valoria had their own rooms which were fitted to house their families as well. The rest of his family were easily housed as well in spite of the hundreds of competitors this year’s events had gathered.

Forrest remained in his room to meditate. Katherine took the children to play with the rest of their family. She knew not to force him into socialization since she could never make him do more than with what he was comfortable. Still, he couldn’t shake a nervous unease from his body. It was unusual from all other times he’d competed in the Championship. However, it was the first time in four years since he had, considering the demands of his family. But he committed to placing in the Championship once more before he would give up competing.

The next day consisted of qualifying rounds. Forrest had little trouble making it to the quarter-finals, but the challenges lasted all day and took their toll on his and his Pokemon’s stamina. But just as the quarterfinalists were to be presented on the large stadium screens, all the power was cut off and the event was to be postponed before advancing forward.
Forrest Archer Johnson
Plot:
The region of Hoenn has undergone many changes over 100 years, as would any. Still, gym leaders act as a precursor (though there are 18, one for every type) to the Pokemon league for the Trainers who want to become the best. Several Contest Halls host events to judge brilliant Pokemon and their trainers in the hopes to become the best coordinators. Many day-cares and breeders throughout the region help Prof. Evergreen of Littleroot Town to learn and hone their skills in healing and growth. Trainers generally train with other trainers, with their Gauntlets, or by themselves. The use of wild Pokemon for training is seen as unnecessary and harmful to the ecosystem and environment.

Technology has improved, but in no way as to interfere with nature and wild Pokemon. But there is a small group of 12, naming themselves Team Zodiac, that disagree and believe the technological growth of the region has bastardized the natural relationship between Humans and Pokemon. Though they remain underground and nameless, they continue to try to convince the trainers of Hoenn that their dependencies on technology and their cultural influences have poisoned their minds and their bonds with their Pokemon. As they know their efforts, thus far, have been in vain, they know of means that can reach them to their Utopian end.

Setting:
The laws and regulations are quite liberal in Hoenn. Of course, technologies are pursued with passion, but the conservation of nature is also held in high regard. Topics such as sexuality, religion, and politics can be conversed with little consequence when they are idealistic for the population and not the individual. Radical ideas would not be shunned but, instead, considered and pondered. If someone wants to explore the politics of this region further, you are more than welcome.

The cities are the same as the game, but major buildings, landmarks, and Gym types and locations have changed. Also note that Routes normally take about 2 hours to walk through and uninhabitable areas and other areas blocked off in the games are accessible in this RP. These changes are ultimately up to all players, including the GM. Before the start of the IC, these specifics will be hashed out and added into this section. I want this to be a collective effort and something in which all players feel some kind of investment.

The beginning will be a sandbox setting, all PC's doing their own thing. The first post should include enough character development to where you understand your character's personality and introduce any potential NPCs you might wish to create. They will be introduced into the main plot when I introduce them. This will be on an individual basis.

Beginning PC's may be advanced Trainers (well-trained or fully-trained teams), beginning Trainers, or anything between. You can be a researcher, scientist, Gym Leader, or anything else you wish. You may also reserve to play a member of Team Zodiac. A list will be created below.

The Elite Four is a precursor to the Championship (of which may only be challenged after obtaining all 18 badges). Trainers who wish to compete in the Championship must first challenge the Elite Four and previous Champion and be deemed competent to compete in the Championship.

For Gym Leaders, I like the idea of there being no "first" Gym Leader and that all Gym Leaders are capable of discerning one's skill and understanding what each Badge level means. They may be located on Routes or in places outside of Cities and Towns. (Designated Gym Locations in Map Notes are not definite.)

Mega Evolution is either a lost ability or has not be discovered yet, it is up to everyone involved. However, it will be (re)introduced in the RP proper. Either way, no one can start with Mega Evolution.

Noteable Technologies


Hoenn Map Notes


Team Zodiac


Rules:
  • Standard RPing rules (no god-modding, power-playing, meta-gaming, etc.)
  • There is no posting order. (Post only once after my own posts)
  • Stats and typing and fainting Pokemon are largely irrelevant. Skill is required to "win."
  • All CSs are to be PMed to me where further direction will be given.
  • Do not post CSs in the Characters Tab of this RP (reiteration of the former)
  • You may make more than one character, but please do not make more than you can handle.
  • Do not make more than one post for multiple characters. Condense them into one post, please.
  • If your character is denied, I will give reason. You are allowed to argue or otherwise defend your choices.
  • 4 consecutive days of inactivity in the OOC without notice will result in your characters becoming an NPC and any reserved spots being re-opened.
  • Ask me questions. Provide criticism. Any and all feedback is welcome.
  • Changes, additions, and removal of rules are up to the discretion of the GM.


Character Sheet:
Name: First and Last (Middle is optional, aliases, etc.)
Age: >15
History: About 3 paragraphs (3-5 sentences). Hometown, parents, siblings, education, brief overview of adventure.
Personality: (Optional) Only fill out if you do not know the character's personality after writing the History.
Items: (Optional) Personal items and equipment (tools, books, clothing, etc.). I don't care about Pokeballs, Potions, Berries, etc.
Appearance: (Optional) Text is preferred over stock photos. Personal drawings or commissions are okay (but provide appropriate credit).
Party: Standard size limit of 6, minimum of 1. There is no maximum. Legendaries are illegal and Pseudo-Legendaries are restricted.
Pokemon Name || Ability (mostly unrestricted to anything within reason)
Type (if you believe a Pokemon should be an additional or single typed, designate. This is based off species and physiology. Can be no more than 3 types)
Height|Weight (Optional)
Brief explanation of where, when, and how it was obtained. You may add its relationship with trainer and other Pokemon. Describe how they battle, what attributes they utilize or rely on, and typical strategies.
Move Pool
-Pokemon can know any number of moves.
-Pokemon cannot know moves outside of the their typing, species, and characteristics. A wild Buneary (or any Buneary) will not know Ice Beam. Starmie cannot know Thunderbolt. Hawlucha cannot know Grass Knot, etc. Also, take into account the Pokemon's personality and strategy.
-TMs are not in this RP. Pokemon can learn moves by practicing them either on their own, with a tutor, or with their trainer.
-Moves are performed and look different by each Pokemon, even of the same species.
-If you believe a Pokemon should know a move it can't learn in the games, add it in the CS and if I seem to disagree, debate the point. A good enough argument (outside of "it won't be strong") will usually be accepted.
-Indicate in some way the moves a Pokemon utilizes most or the manner in which they would use them. (Use my CS as an example).

Battling Mechanics:
-Real-time combat rules apply.
-Stats and levels are ambiguous and intangible.
-Combining moves takes up time and energy but may be done with any type of move (Physical, Special, Status) and in any combination.
-Typical weaknesses in game can be trained to be resisted (but this sacrifices other areas of combat for the Pokemon).
-The Pokemon has autonomy and independence from the trainer. They have their own fighting style, and not necessarily the one you want for it.
-Creative strategy beats strategic strength.

Approved Character List:
Forrest Archer Johnson [Phoenix]
William Laurence [Will Laurence]
Having a "Brief History" and "Background" section in your CS. They are the same thing. Just because you want one to be long and wordy doesn't mean it's not irrelevant.
(I said it'd be fluff and redundant, in more words, and I was told that's not how I should go about presenting my CS)

I'm sure this has already been said: Personality and Full History in a CS. These are pretty self-explanatory...maybe >.>
I'm sure this has also been said: "The CS proves your writing capabilities." It does not and it's just a formality to not have a Mary Sue or OP'd character and to make sure there is a general understanding of the plot and setting. I feel that's the only reason for a CS.
Okay, I understand.
Thank you.
Lo Pellegrino said I will review the CS when the background is completed.
I don't really know what else to add. I'd really just reiterate what's already been written in greater (and arguably irrelevant) detail. Do you want me to write a kind of story depicting his everyday life? It won't even be longer than the Brief History due to the nature of his life, which is relatively uneventful outside of what I alluded to already.

Let me know what you're looking for so I can accommodate.
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