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The communicator buzzed. With the press of a button, a timed message appeared from a hologram of Councilor At'chaa Cluyr appeared and mentioned the possibility of the assassin being Force-sensitive and that great caution should be practiced while proceeding with the mission.

Ael took this as making sure to have all three of his lightsabers equipped, which he had. The professional red combat suit he'd changed into wasn't was turned the heads of the criminals and addicts he passed along the landing bay. Hak, Blok, and Oew were strapped onto him without much care for concealment. Because of the rarity of such weapons, those around him, even the most seasoned gang members would think twice before confronting such a possible threat.

Most couldn't tell whether he was light or dark due to the lack of Force-awareness among most sentients. His energy was warm and steady to the point of harsh. Since he had little control over concealing this presence, most could feel it, regardless.

But his attention was that of the small, airy light he was trying to reach. Javilla didn't wait for him, which he found concerning. Of course, she had raced off without him, so her sense of independence could have been the only reason for her eagerness to infiltrate Le'Cudosch. He still saw this rash and highly dangerous for one of her experience.

He then made the corrupt, void-like Force propel him forward at an amazing speed with the glimmer turned to flashes. He'd recognized this as her in the midst of a duel or in combat. Assuming she was in trouble, Ael didn't mind knocking over a few bystanders and leaping over their heads in an attempt to reach her before Javilla would be overwhelmed.

Her scales had turned a yellow-orange color and the green blade of her lightsaber was exposed. "Javilla!" he bellowed. On Nar Shaddaa, his voice didn't carry as it had back at his home. With the thick air and numerous bodies around, it filled out and trembled through the air rather than penetrating it smoothly.

Just as he made his presence known, his identity was determined, and a blaster bolt shot toward him. He raised his hand, following it's trajectory, and absorbed the intense bolt of energy. With this, he healed his previous wound completely and sped toward Javilla while igniting the orange blade of Blok from his left hip. The blade looked as if on fire and he glared at those surrounding them.

"Who?" he asked as if in Epicant.

"Le'Cudosch, I guess," she responded. He could only assume she probed too hard to passers-by and was to be punished for her insolence.

<"Girl will get what she wants,"> one alien said.

"And then you for interfering," another continued.

Ael didn't bother to attempt to understand what they said, understanding what their intentions were, perfectly well. Instead, he responded by almost disappearing and knocking three of them to the ground with broken bones in one maneuver. They fired back at Javilla, who just dodged the shots gracefully. She flipped into the air and performed a Sun Djem before tumbling away and tossing another off a ledge with a Force-enhanced grip.

Ael broke the right leg and left arm of another and tried to press her for answers.

"Where your leader?" he asked. His massive stature clearly intimidated the female.

<"Like you'll learn -"> she began before being knocked out by a blow to the head. Since she couldn't speak Basic, Ael didn't have the time for Javilla to interpret during such a confrontation.

Another bolt was shot toward him which was deflected back toward the male's leg, making him fall to his knee and comprehend the wound. Ael shot back with his foot to the male's face, lifting him in the air a bit and leaving him unconscious on the metal floor. Javilla knocked out two more thugs by utilizing pressure points she'd began to study in the Efti Sector in the Oew Kingdom.

Ael's head and body pivoted to the remaining two who stood here with their blasters raised and apparently ready to fire. Looking closely, their hands were trembling slightly. "Basic?" Ael asked, hoping there was at least one conscious person able to point them in the right direction.

And one of them did. It was toward what Javilla assumed was a cantina of some kind. The plasma sign read "Krazy Krayt" in another foreign language. Ael nodded his head to the side, signalling that they should get away before they sustain injuries as their comrades had.

"We go," Ael commanded of Javilla, grabbing her firmly by her arm and almost tugging her in the direction of the tavern. His warm energy seemed to almost burn her. She turned blue as if to counteract the heat. She could also feel a calm focus wash over her. Ael must have persuaded her in a subconscious manner.

The bouncers made plenty of room for them to enter the club. It wasn't that difficult since the crowd dispersed as the apparent aggressors approached the building. As Ael entered, the sense of real Darkness touched him. It was foreign to him but he knew this is how true evil would feel. It wasn't desperate survival or pride he experienced on Panatha. It was greedy hatred he'd felt only one other time in his life.

Ael looked down at Javilla, who's arm was beginning to shake in his hand. "Chaos, yet Peace," he recited and she looked up and straight into his eyes. They were filled with concerned fear which then turned to cautiousness when she looked back out into the club.

It was loud and bright lights flashed throughout the dark room. Still, her eyes caught something, and it wasn't pleasant.
It's up to the character. I wanted it to be ambiguous for more intrigue. :)
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Everyone's interests aren't shared. It's taken me a while to come to that realization. Even when someone's interests are the same, the manner in which they want it implemented is vastly different. I'm not sure if this is a concern for you, but just an example of what I've gone through.

As for the rude people, that's going to happen. It seems like it's more prevalent lately, what with the influx of new RPers or those that haven't RP'd for years on this particular forum (since all forums with RPing are vastly different). Soon after I began RPing, I realized what I wanted and realized that most others couldn't fulfill that for me. So, I went to GMing. And though I'm still learning how to GM effectively, I've found it (generally) more rewarding than just being a player.

I've met RPers and GMs that I have learned to never go near again. There are plenty of times when I've seen a fellow RPer behave rudely and have to bite my tongue. I've had RPers come to me about an RP I wish to start and criticize how it's run and the mechanics. I just explain to them why I've decided what I've decided in a civil manner and expect them to not return, knowing it's not for them.

I've been trying to get a couple RPs to go for years now, trying the same one's over to see if a new (better) crowd is around, but alas. I'm just going to keep trying. The thing with such a large community like this one, you really have to be patient. One of my IntChks to an OOC has 20~ bumps in a row from me, and the OOC is completely untouched. But I understand that the way in which I want the RP to run to fit my desires is not the same as others, and I think that's what we need to take from this.

Currently, I'm in an RP of a genre that I didn't consider going back into, but the GMs seem cool and I liked the plotline, so I joined. I've subsided from bumping my hopeless RP every other day to every week. I guess it's just persistence and patience.

Otherwise, I've just written stuff on my own and started a project that could become a novel if I ever got the self-esteem and confidence that I could do it. I've tried to get into other arts (drawing, singing) but they don't fill the same need. So I guess it'd be best to just keep looking or start something yourself. Be open and expectant of failure ('cause that's what the majority of this forum is). Just because you want it now doesn't mean it will come to you. And just because you've wanted it for months doesn't mean it's going to sit in your lap and give you puppy dog eyes. If you want a specific role-play and you've started an IntChk, don't expect it to get any views. Bump it if you have to.

But I will warn you about the general state of players right now. They're pretty poor, so don't take a CS as a sign of commitment in the slightest. There seems to be no real cure to people disappearing. :/

And I'm sorry if this is depressing or pessimistic, but that's just how it is, sometimes. I wish you the best in your endeavors, though. I hope you find a source of creative entertainment. :)
I suspected as much. xP
And thanks for the clarification, it's been edited.
Is Byrdo male or female?

EDIT: would it be terrible if I posted again (in response to NN)?
I just decided to post something short since no one is around. :)
The darkness surrounding the space around the moon of Nal Hutta made Ael uneasy. He'd lost contact with Javilla, but he hoped she was safe without his protection.

Though his perception of the future was limited, his Ancestors told him he'd be in danger very soon. It came to no surprise to him that his freighter was boarded by spice traders who assumed he'd have some valuable cargo, be that items or sentients, in order to trade for profit. They were surprised to see it was only a very large male humanoid flying the ship by himself. They figured the five of them could overwhelm the obviously unintimidated man and take his ship.

Without a word, Ael ignited Hak, its purple energy glowing in the darkened compartment of the ship. Though the blade was perfectly round, it's still energy gave off a cool intensity due to the Sigil crystal fitted in the hilt. Though the smugglers were initially frightened, the leader among them shot at Ael without hesitation. The bolt found itself in the head of that who took the shot, and the small human fell to he metal floor.

The others took a moment to see their leader fall before opening fire at their victim. Only a moment passed before each of them mimicked their fallen leader on the floor of his ship. Unexpectedly, the lifeless hand of one of the bodies managed to pull the trigger and shoot Ael's left ribs. His suit deflected most of the heat, but it still singed his skin and burned with a deep sting.

Without reacting to the injury, he sat and meditated for a minute before rising, his skin back to its normal tone and the injury almost entirely healed. But he couldn't tend to it 100% since he felt a familiar and bright presence approaching him.

Over the intercom system of the ship, the voice of the Falleen girl took Ael's attention. "Master, I'll meet you on the surface. I'll be landing at the coordinates I'm sending you now."

His large feet thudded toward the bodies he'd created in his ship and grabbed two arms in each hand. All four bodies dragged across the metal and rubber floor until Ael reached the empty cargo bay. On the other side of the door, he opened the hatch and watched the bodies be sucked away by the lack of gravity.

Wide strides allowed him to reach the cockpit in little time and the amount of automated computers raced his ship toward the coordinates sent to him by his Apprentice. Since there weren't any security protocols to enter the moon's orbit, he raced without much precaution to the landing bay where he would meet his Apprentice. Or, at least, where he thought he would meet her.
When an RPer contacts me with interest in an RP I wish to start and states they wish to be a Co-GM when no such position was offered in the OP. Then, I look at their history, to see what they're like, and notice they have done the same thing with every other RP they showed interest in.

To me, this says they want control/authority over just playing the game. For me, I just wish to play a game, but don't care for the way most others run it, so I make one myself. So, to see someone striving everywhere to be a Co-GM is a big red-flag for me. I don't know why, it's just irksome.

Another thing is when I see an RPer post a CS, then follow the feedback by the GM (which is a combination of critique, gratitude, and questions) in a very positive manner, and then the RPer throws a fit on how unfair/biased/etc. their criticisms were. I mean, you're going into their RP where they have clear-cut rules, even if they're still being developed. To be so close-minded and unwilling to compromise with the GM in a mature and level way is as fascinating as it is irritating.
Sometime during the Galactic Civil War, a major source of it was traced by Han Solo to Ventooine, which triggered a sequence of events that led to the end of the Satab line.
Find the page! :D

Input on the last paragraph of my previous post:
What Nite has for the Jedi Council:
Grand Master Roan Skywalker (Male, Human)
Councilor Byrdo (Male, Yoda's species)
Councilor Horn Datch (Male, Human) (Developed/created by Kalistar)
Councilor Taris Verr (Female, Zabrak) (Developed/created by Phoenix)
Councilor At'chaa Cluyr (Female, (Red) Nikto) (Developed/created by Phoenix)
Unknown Councilor
Unknown Councilor
Unknown Councilor
Unknown Councilor
I thought of a game. A kind of scavenger hunt on Wookieepedia. I don't know exactly how we should go about it. Click "random page" and state a quote from the page. Write a paraphrased paragraph about the subject.

We could also try a six degree of relation kind of thing. But that's all I got.

Otherwise, we could write out a fake/non-canon as per this RP interaction between two of our characters. Right now, I find this option more interesting, but we could always do both.

I'd also like there to be a list for the Jedi Council, where their temples are located, any possible conclaves, etc. Flesh out their opinions on marriage, reproduction, who to initiate and when, etc. Same for the Sith as well.
There should also be a section for the current republic, who is Chancellor, key planets not part of the Republic, etc.
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