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Shiro Nagakura

Amegakure: Training Field E


"Every night has been the same after Ryoku took charge. The peaceful sound of rain dripping outside everyone's homes day in, day out. It was like a never ending twilight zone. But I ain't complaining, I like the rain, always have. It helps me sleep quite well actually, it's like a lullaby, just louder and more frequent. Anyhow, I'm Shiro Nagakura, soon to be the strongest genin in the ninja world, this is my story:"

As the rain continued, it seemed as if the sun would never breach the clouds. It was pretty cold that day, just like Shiro liked it. The young ninja had just barely escaped the grasp of the Academy. His scores in the academic portion, written exam, weren't as good as those of the practical portion. He was more of a hands on kind of guy, wanting to always be on the move rather than sitting on a desk, listening to lectures or actually giving them. He wanted to become a great shinobi and be able to work with the Hokage some day. He didn't want to be Hokage because he saw it as too much work and would eventually be too lazy to do it, sending all of Amegakure down with his enthusiasm towards labor. All he could think of at the moment was reaching that training field.................training field.......ummm...........A?......B?........ughhh.......E! Yeah, that was it. Training Field E. Maybe he should have paid more attention to the notice, oh well. Anyhow, back to the story. Shiro left the small cabin he was staying at. A nice old landlord allowed him safe haven for aid with as*hole tenants. Since he was old, he couldn't really do anything against advantage seekers. Anyway, now Shiro headed to the field. The rain blasted at him like small canon bullets. It aided to purify his skin, washing away all the disdained oils that occupied it. He couldn't afford an umbrella since he really had no money. He washed his clothing daily at a nearby river to prevent them from reeking. So this day, he felt good because he actually looked it. He was determined to show his new Sensei - name forgotten - why he graduated top of his class. He knew the journey to being a Chuunin would not come easy, but he was willing - aside from being lazy - to work hard and achieve greatness. There was no way he would allow other students to meet his rank. Being on top was the motive, only those on top get what they want. This attitude came from the defiance he presented towards his father. Though Shiro is presently poor and struggling to make a living, leaving the cook life behind had been his greatest accomplishment, or at least that's the way he sees it.

As the ninja finally made it to the training field, he made sure he was in the right place. He looked over to the sign labeled 'E' and nodded. "Let's get this training started" he whispered to himself. The rain, obviously, continued to pour uncontrollably. The people of the Rain Village had already gotten used to it, but since Shiro initially came from Konoha, his eyes would flicker at every drop that hit his eyelid. Eventually he would get used to it, but right now, he was at a handicap against the lovely torrent. But as of now, there were more important matter at hand other than his hindrance. He would now start his training as part of Team 11. His teammates would later become competition, maybe even rivals. He would go on missions alongside them, work with his enemy to complete certain objectives. He would lose people that are close to him as time passed, maybe lose his own life, but he was ready. Thousands of scenarios ran through his head as he prepared for the worse. But even if he had to deal with these complications, he was looking forward to being the best. "Ugh.....actually, I don't feel like it. Not right now."
Are all the Sensei gonna make a debut post, or do we as genin post as we please?
IVIasterJay said
Bring it on! *crosses fingers and prays that it happens after he learns Cloud Release*Also, I went through the entire CS and changed Shiro's name to Kumori (With a Chance of Meatballs).


We are officially rivals
IVIasterJay said
Oops, sorry 'bout that. I'll change his name to something else.


Oh. I'm not saying I have a problem with it, I was just declaring an all out war between our characters that's all. Lol.
@IVIasterJay: If my Shiro meets your Shiro, I promise you a showdown. lol jk.

Anyhow, where are all the Amegakure people man!

Name: Shiro Nagakura
Nickname/Alias: None
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 14 years old - June 21, 462
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Straight (Heterosexual)

Parents: Father: Yukio Nagakura - Mother: Akari Nagakura
Length and build 5'6 - Sporty/Fit/Athletic
Weight 122 lb
Favorite weather and season
Rainy - Winter



Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization: None

Clan/Bloodline: None

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Fūton



Appearance:

- Character in White.


Personality: Shiro may seem to always be carefree and laid-back, but that's how he is most of the time. There are occasions where Shiro can get serious and become the person he solemnly desires to be. In his head, he has decided that he wishes to fight against the sinful and die a messiah. He doesn't want to get old, but that doesn't mean he is looking to die on purpose. He just wants to be remembered after his departure to the after life. Anyhow, on top of that, he does wish to grow up and have a family. He doesn't want children though, he couldn't stand a little Shiro Nagakura. He also has a rebellious side to him. He can't stand being told what to do, when he deems it erroneous. He bases his life on logic. If it isn't logical, then why do it?



History: Shiro was born into a family of cooks. His father, Yukio Nagakura, owned a small ramen shop in Konoha. It was usually full of people day in, day out, which helped bring in money to pay the bills. In that ramen shop is where Yukio met Shiro's mother, Akari. They hit it off after a decently long conversation on a Tuesday evening right before Yukio had closed shop for the night. Akari was a beautiful woman. She always dressed in the most stylish kimonos, just gorgeous. After Akari married into Yukio's family, months later, Shiro was born. He was given his grandfather's middle name in respect to the elder who passed away exactly thirteen days before Akari gave birth. The number thirteen in times represents a blessing from God. Yukio was a religious man, always going to church and such. At the age of six or so, Shiro enrolled in a nearby Ninja School. His parents didn't want that for Shiro, they wanted him to continue the tradition in the ramen shop as a cook, but Shiro refused. Yukio and Akari allowed Yukio to get into Ninja School, believing their son, after he grew up, would realize that the ninja life wasn't for him, but that didn't happen. After graduating the Academy at Konoha, Shiro ran away from his oppressing home. The decision to leave was made after Shiro got into an argument with his father. Yuko wanted his son Shiro to help his mother take over the ramen shop. Yukio at the time was sick and had to rest for weeks in order to regain his health, but during this time, Shiro was to resume his training as a newly profound Genin. Shiro refused to run the shop so his father, to teach him a lesson of respect, threw him out the house for a night. But that night was the last time Yukio and Akari saw their son. Shiro heard about the Shinchi, the First Amekage in the village hidden by rain. Despite his knowledge of Shichi, the legend stuck in his mind forever. He decided to move to Amegakure in attempt to meet the person he though was his hero. He traveled for an entire year despite the short distance between the villages. He made frequent stops, sightseeing and enjoying his time away from his family. He had no choice but to steal food in order to survive. He would occasionally sleep under a cardboard box from time to time in order to help prevent the cold. Once he reached Amegakure, he entered a slaved village. He was not able to meet Shichi because the hero had vanished the year of Shiro's arrival. Amegakure had been invaded and enslaved. Throughout this time, Amegakure trained ninja to help fight the war, though their military force was not all that strong. A year later, as Shiro continued to train, the war ended. Shichi's successor Ryoku returned with aid and managed to win back the rain village. A treaty with the Fire Country was then set afoot connecting the two nations into a mutual alliance. Now Shiro's new goal is to meet Ryoku, Amagakure's guardian.

Theme Song:


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities

High Speed
Counter Strikes (Quick to react)
Ability to Dodge attacks
Close Quarters Combat



Special Traits

Boxing Style of Fighting
Strong right cross
Piercing left body(liver) blow
Eagle Eyes - widens the field of vision, allowing the user to see the field from a different perspective. Badically,widens the users perifrial vision.
Good leveled chakra control - Used with trench knives to implement more damage.


Kekkei Genkai:

None


Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu
Ummmm. Was my character accepted?
Gerontis said
I will now edit the roster.@QTMy review :Nice CS in general. (I noticed the Asuma inspiration :D ) But I wish you change some things. 1.) Eagle Eyes ;What do you mean with that? He can look as far and good as an eagle? If so, then I would like to know how that is possible. We already have a Konoha clan that has such eyes, the Nimatsu's. (Roran Hawkins clan). 2.) High leveled chakra control.Though his history is likely implying he got the training for it, which I never have a problem with, for the game balance I can't accept this. If you would say good chakra control (sounds higher than average, but yet lower than high) then I would like it a lot better. :)3.) Custom TechniquesWe always want to have some kind of weakness with a custom techniques. After looking, I only have a slight problem with Fatigue Smoke, as it implies the user can manipulate the air while your characters has no such jutsu. However, you still can have one more D ranked Jutsu (and two C ranked) and I would suggest :


Edited to hopefully meet requirements.

Name: Shiro Nagakura
Nickname/Alias: None
Gender: Male
Age and date of birth: 14 years old - June 21, 462
Age Appearance: 16
Sexuality: Straight (Heterosexual)

Parents: Father: Yukio Nagakura - Mother: Akari Nagakura
Length and build 5'6 - Sporty/Fit/Athletic
Weight 122 lb
Favorite weather and season
Rainy - Winter



Village: Amegakure
Birthplace: Konohagakure
Organization: None

Clan/Bloodline: None

Rank: Genin

Chakra Nature: Fūton



Appearance:

- Character in White.


Personality: Shiro may seem to always be carefree and laid-back, but that's how he is most of the time. There are occasions where Shiro can get serious and become the person he solemnly desires to be. In his head, he has decided that he wishes to fight against the sinful and die a messiah. He doesn't want to get old, but that doesn't mean he is looking to die on purpose. He just wants to be remembered after his departure to the after life. Anyhow, on top of that, he does wish to grow up and have a family. He doesn't want children though, he couldn't stand a little Shiro Nagakura. He also has a rebellious side to him. He can't stand being told what to do, when he deems it erroneous. He bases his life on logic. If it isn't logical, then why do it?



History: Shiro was born into a family of cooks. His father, Yukio Nagakura, owned a small ramen shop in Konoha. It was usually full of people day in, day out, which helped bring in money to pay the bills. In that ramen shop is where Yukio met Shiro's mother, Akari. They hit it off after a decently long conversation on a Tuesday evening right before Yukio had closed shop for the night. Akari was a beautiful woman. She always dressed in the most stylish kimonos, just gorgeous. After Akari married into Yukio's family, months later, Shiro was born. He was given his grandfather's middle name in respect to the elder who passed away exactly thirteen days before Akari gave birth. The number thirteen in times represents a blessing from God. Yukio was a religious man, always going to church and such. At the age of six or so, Shiro enrolled in a nearby Ninja School. His parents didn't want that for Shiro, they wanted him to continue the tradition in the ramen shop as a cook, but Shiro refused. Yukio and Akari allowed Yukio to get into Ninja School, believing their son, after he grew up, would realize that the ninja life wasn't for him, but that didn't happen. After graduating the Academy at Konoha, Shiro ran away from his oppressing home. The decision to leave was made after Shiro got into an argument with his father. Yuko wanted his son Shiro to help his mother take over the ramen shop. Yukio at the time was sick and had to rest for weeks in order to regain his health, but during this time, Shiro was to resume his training as a newly profound Genin. Shiro refused to run the shop so his father, to teach him a lesson of respect, threw him out the house for a night. But that night was the last time Yukio and Akari saw their son. Shiro heard about the Shinchi, the First Amekage in the village hidden by rain. Despite his knowledge of Shichi, the legend stuck in his mind forever. He decided to move to Amegakure in attempt to meet the person he though was his hero. He traveled for an entire year despite the short distance between the villages. He made frequent stops, sightseeing and enjoying his time away from his family. He had no choice but to steal food in order to survive. He would occasionally sleep under a cardboard box from time to time in order to help prevent the cold. Once he reached Amegakure, he entered a slaved village. He was not able to meet Shichi because the hero had vanished the year of Shiro's arrival. Amegakure had been invaded and enslaved. Throughout this time, Amegakure trained ninja to help fight the war, though their military force was not all that strong. A year later, as Shiro continued to train, the war ended. Shichi's successor Ryoku returned with aid and managed to win back the rain village. A treaty with the Fire Country was then set afoot connecting the two nations into a mutual alliance. Now Shiro's new goal is to meet Ryoku, Amagakure's guardian.

Theme Song: No Mercy


Weapons/Items[u][/u]:



Skills/Abilities

High Speed
Counter Strikes (Quick to react)
Ability to Dodge attacks
Close Quarters Combat



Special Traits

Boxing Style of Fighting
Strong right cross
Piercing left body(liver) blow
Eagle Eyes - widens the field of vision, allowing the user to see the field from a different perspective. Badically,widens the users perifrial vision.
Good leveled chakra control - Used with trench knives to implement more damage.


Kekkei Genkai:

None


Jutsu:



Custom Jutsu
Oh yes!
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