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11 yrs ago
Current Well, I am back for the city life. Which means that I have to get caught up with my roleplays and respond to private messages.
11 yrs ago
I am going to be gone for the weekend. So, I will not be able to respond to roleplays and private messages.

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I hate how other talk about how reading has become a chore for them. I mean the Free section is there from you to roleplay and you don't have to read that much.
Dinh AaronMk said
So there is that, so where are my posts?


It is coming soon...
Griever said
To be completely frank, I sometimes even find reading other posts in RPs I'm in difficult. Whether or not I'm the GM of that RP is irrelevant, some people just have a verbose and drawn-out writing style that makes reading IC posts a chore and not particularly fun.

Also some people make bizarre stylistic choices in regards to their posts, like switching between point-of-view narratives, switching between past/present-tense and even switching languages mid-posts (protip: this is an English RP site, let's keep the posts in English unless otherwise specified.) All of this doens't make their posts more "stylish" it just makes them more confusing and that much moer irritating to read.


Malikoy said
I agree, when reading other posts stops being fun and turns into a chore you just have to do the RP basically dips into a downward descent to inactivity and death.

But you can always pick out the participating individuals to avoid that. Nothing ruins a nice RP like on le player with horrible or uninspiring writing style.


That is why the Free section is there, so you don't have to read paragraphs and don't have to worry about all of those things that you both said.
I like to read other RPs that are good to read. Plus, it helped me improved on my writing.
mmidnight said
I'll take the dad and edit his CS into Andrew's CS when I get the chance.


Alright.
Double Post.
Double Post.
Chapter One:

The Vigilante - Daniel Geyser

(Fight For Freedom)


"You need to run boss! I will cover your back." said a man with his pistol on the trigger as they heard the gun shots getting closer towards the boss's officer. The boss, a man in his thirties that just got his black hair cut, walked towards the emergency door and said, "Thank you, boy.". The screams and the gun shots began to get worst as the boss opened the door and walked out of his office, from the last time.

He then started to run towards the ladder as he felt the warm sun that hit his pale skin and looked towards the clear sky. It was a beautiful day to go to the park and witness the child playing at the playground; but it was also a perfect day to kill.

The boss then heard the gun shots in the office and then a cry of mercy, which was quickly ended by another gun shot. The boss then started to climb down the ladder as he heard the emergency door opened, which caused the boss to let go of the ladder handle. He fell onto the dirt and screamed in pain as he landed on his legs and then looked up to saw a man, wearing a mask. The boss stopped breathing as he saw the man; it looked like Death was going to finally kill him. He then turned and saw his SUV as he got up from the ground and started to limp towards his SUV. The mythical man grinned as he saw the boss limping towards the car and said, “Mr. Dario Marabella. The man, that brought the drug business into Greenfield destroyed lives in the process.” Marabella opened his eyes wide as he heard his name came out of the man's mouth and began to run from the SUV as he shouted, "Stay away from me, you frea-".

The word 'freak' was cut short by a bullet, that went into his left leg and caused Marabella to collapse onto the dirt again. The man walked towards Marabella as he began to cruse in his native language and grabbed him by his jacket and said, "Speak English or I will cap you in the right leg.". Dario chocked up a bit as he spoke towards the man, "Y-y-y-you are messing with the wrong guy, sir. Hear me. You're messing with the wrong person.". The other man grin at Marabella and said to him, "Many people have said that to me and nothing happens, you know why? Because, I kill them before they could cry to their mothers.". The man began to craw towards the wall of his office and started to say, "Well, if you're here to kill me because of the whole drug business, go ahead. You will just get yourself into a huge mess.". The masked person began to laugh and said, "No, I should kill your sorry ass; but, I will spare you if you do me a favor.".

"You kill my man and storm into my office, why should I do you any favors?" said Marabella as he got annoyed by the masked man, then the pistol was near his head. The masked man said, "Because, I got the thing that can make you live or die." and pushed him towards the wall. "Since you're going to do the favor, no matter what you said, I want you to tell the police about me.".

Marabella then looked at him confused and said, "Why do you want to be known?" and then he heard a gunshot as he cried in pain from the shot. "Stop it please! I will do it! I will do it…” said Marabella as he began to cry and the masked man pushed him towards the wall. He collapsed onto the ground as he held on his knee.

"Good. You will also tell them that you're a drug dealer and there are bags of them inside your 'office' or I will find you and kill you myself." said the masked man as he began to walk towards the SUV and then stopped as he heard Marabella's words. "B-b-b-but... I need.... a.... name.".

The man walked towards him and then said, "Call me, 'The Vigilante'.". Marabella laughed and then said, "You're not some 'vigilante'! You killed my men -people living their lives.” The Vigilante grabbed his SUV keys from his jacket pocket and said, "I'm a 'vigilante' because I made such that the bad guys never come back to the streets." He walked towards the SUV and said, "Thanks from the SUV, Mirabella. I will make such to take care of it."

The Vigilante walked towards the car and got inside as he started up the car and began to drive away from the building. Marabella breathed faster and faster as he realized that he just met a so called 'superhero'.
9/10 Because of the tea cup.
I like the green more than any other color.

It might because, it looks so fucking cool.
mmidnight said
I'm not saying it needs to be changed. I'd just like a say in the characters I'm going to playing whether they're NPC or we're going to be splitting the mother and father. Unless you wanted to play the rest of the family, which I didn't think would be very fair to you.


Of course, I wouldn't play the rest of the family. Since there is going to be four characters, we each get two. What do you want to be?
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