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    1. Rare 12 yrs ago

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11 yrs ago
Current Well, I am back for the city life. Which means that I have to get caught up with my roleplays and respond to private messages.
11 yrs ago
I am going to be gone for the weekend. So, I will not be able to respond to roleplays and private messages.

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It's not quantity, it's quality. Don't worry about the length, short or long. Worry about the content and the actions.

I can't just change. I post at the length, that I like. Such, the content and action are important and I try to add that in my post. But, I am not the 'greatest writer out there'. Lets end it there before it gets heated and just wait until the GM tells me to change it.

After all, the GM has the final say in anything.
Yes. You fall because the helicopter crashed, and through the power of Paragraphus, God of Plot Devices, you survived because that's how the RP starts.

Dude, TomeBinder narrated more or less all you need for an intro. Just start from where you meet up with our squad, and take it from there.


I know that the GM placed me with the group. I went to the group; I didn't go off by myself and killed all of the VC in the jungle. I am just filling in what he missed.

I don't just post a paragraph and be done. I am post more two+ paragraph posts rather than a paragraph or less.
Also you need to roll back through and fix some of your grammar, double-check your spelling, write more information from where TomeBinder prompted you (he already auto'ed your character's arrival to our squad, the only unique thing you added was that he walked through an active firefight, upright, at 7 feet tall) and get rid of your bit about having a parachute in the helicopter. Because never in the history of helicopter piloting has a motherfucker been able to parachute from a crashing bird.

Helicopters don't glide like crashing planes. They plummet straight down, spinning 360 degrees. The man who jumps from a crashing helicopter is going to end up flying ball-sack first into the propellers and end up spread across nine miles of jungle like the contents of an open blender.

Helicopters also typically max out at the minimum safe height for opening a parachute, meaning you wouldn't have time to pop it anyway.

Dude, I don't mean to be a dick, but this needs some serious revision.


So, what, I just fall out of the helicopter? I mean, it's low enough that I don't die; but, he did he live without breaking anything? Such the trees would of made his fall slower; but, he would still get cut and stab wounds for the trees.

Was there a second helicopter and I just miss that somehow? Or is there some detail that I missed? Tell me, I need to know how they survived and they still live without being hurt (besides the damaged eye, that Wyatt got for a couple punches to the face).
It's too peaceful...
Um, I feel bad now as I really didn't read it to closely. There are some errors. For one, Huey is the name of the helicoptor, not the enemy. That'd be VC, Viet Cong, Victor Charlie, Charlie, Chuck, what have you.


I just realize that as I posted it.

Oh well, I am currently editing them. Mistakes happen :p

EDIT: Speaking of which, I have edited them into Charlie. If I miss any, tell me.
I have posted!
Wyatt jumped out of the helicopter, which was going to make a crash landing nearby the jungle. There were only two parachutes on the helicopter and Wyatt grabbed one, as he was the most important person in the helicopter- besides the guy with the radio. He didn't know what happened next as he jumped out of the helicopter and soon opened his parachute up. Soon, he was stuck on top of the jungle trees as it got caught in the tree branches. He got used to the jungle by now, as he had been in this hellhole since the start of the war.

He soon grabbed his knife from his pocket and started to cut the ropes for the parachute. He got done cutting as soon as he fell towards the ground, of course he landed on his sides and breathed heavily as he felt the heat of the jungle. He put his knife back in his pocket as he tried to remember where the helicopter was going to land. He began to walk northward, thinking that was the way that the helicopter was going to land on. He kept on a moment until he almost stepped on one of those punji stakes, which he had weekly soldiers that had landed in the stakes. The stake wasn't camouflaged, which meant that the threat is nearby.

Before he could react to the trap, he was hit in the behind and soon landed on the ground near the stake. He began to walk around as he heard footsteps, not his own footsteps, and soon grabbed his pistol. Before he could get a grip on it, he was tackled by someone and soon they were on the ground. Wyatt punched the guy as many times as he could; but, he could just get the guy to let go as he soon was on top of Wyatt. He began to get punched as he tried to reach for his gun on the ground next to him. He got a hold of the gun and aimed the guy, which he fired and the bullet went right pass his arm.

The Charlie soon fell to the ground and began to shout something at Wyatt as he grabbed his pistol and rushed away from the guy. He soon was lost as more shouting was heard and then he decided to stop, thinking that it was pointless to run for them. He aimed his pistol and shout out loud, "You will never get me!". As soon as Wyatt saw a Huey rushing towards him, he fired and saw the guy dropped to the ground. Dead or not, he wasn't going to move anytime soon, as Wyatt began to shoot at the Charlies. Most of the time he would miss and sometimes he would hit him near the chest area. He wasn't waiting his time to aim at the head; but, he wanted them to get away from him. That didn't happened as Wyatt was tacked by two guys. His pistol was now gone within the darkness of the jungle, he was ready to surrender and accept his defeat.

"I surrender." Wyatt said shamefully and in an upset tone as he was kicked in the chest about eight times before the other Charlies made him stop. Wyatt knew that he got it coming from shooting at their 'friends' and he soon was punched in the face. They One of the Charlies was on top of Wyatt as he kept punching and punching until he lost sight in one of his eyes. The Charlies was clearly shouting and laughing as they beat Wyatt up. He decided to make a shout for help, thinking that the guys in the helicopter would in the jungle by now.

"I said I surrender, you slope eyed mo-" he tried to shout before he was punched in the face once more. They were laughing and one of them shoved the other in a joking matter. They made Wyatt sit on his knees and they were about to kick him once more; but, they began to drop dead as gunshots rang out. With one eye, he saw Tommy walking towards him and Wyatt gave him a bloody smile as he was helped up by Tommy. He walked over and grabbed his things as Tommy handed him a M16 replacement. It wasn't the same; but, it was a good gun to use in the jungle.

When Tommy tried to talk to Wyatt about the rest of the Charlie's occupants, he just shook his head. He was just trying to take in the damaged eye, which caused him to not speak for that second. And when it was all too peaceful, gunshots were heard once more. Before he could react, Tommy quickly grabbed him and ran for them. He didn't know what to do about him being dragged; but, a least his life was being saved again.

They were running for the Charlies, their bullets, and the shouting for what seem to be hours until they crashed into another person. Thankfully, he was an American. Then he was grabbed and pushed into cover by someone. It was too much it take in and he had been in Vietnam since the war started.

He dropped his M16 to try to breath for a bit until he turned his head to see the other Americans, fighting back against the Charlies. He had to fight aside them, so he got up and grabbed his M16. He walked towards Ryan and began to fire at the enemy with his damaged eye. He said to Chris as he was firing, “I want to help you guys kick their asses.”.
I could become the GM.

Just send me your ideas you had of this RP and I will try my best to use them.
It's good, I would just catch it up to where we're at. With the Doc diving for cover behind Davis and the rest.


I just don't want someone to be like, "it's too much to read. make it smaller."
Well, I am not such if I should post it or not. What do you think?

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