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kishin asura said
I portal to that person. Ready to attack them if necessary. Beta portals in and guards tsubaki

You find a elf laying on the sand, already extremely tan.
"Sup....." He says.

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kishin asura said
"It's better than nothing." I say

"Tr-" He starts to say, before you sense someone else teleport near by.

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kishin asura said
"You never know." I say "maybe I could build a dimensional filter device and program it so you, tsubaki, everyone who works here, and me are the only ones who can portal here." I shrug "but that's just an option."

"If they were that strong, I doubt it would help." He says.

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kishin asura said
"Yeah..." I say "...I should really tighten security..."

"I doubt that helped." Timbersaw says.

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kishin asura said
I look at him and hold up the crystal "it's something a friend gave to me." I say "something I use to boost dubstep geass' resurrective powers when necessary."

"....Wow...." He says, dumb struck.

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kishin asura said
I smile and check on tsubaki's life force. Hoping that I was successful

You see, while warped, she is alive...for now.
Timbersaw looks at her in amazement.
"How did you....." He starts to ask.

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kishin asura said
I look at tsubaki's corpse before using dubstep geass to bring her back. Boosting my power with the crystal that darkside gave me

She gasps, and lets out a scream for a moment. She then looks around, breathing heavily. She then faints, breathing lightly.

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kishin asura said
"They blocked an attack powerful enough to destroy half a galaxy so I can see how that happened." I say

This makes the small purple smallkeen faint, his mech standing upright still.

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thewizardguy said
Hey, I've been practising writing, and I'm currently writing a story called Tales of Heartstone, for lack of a better name. Could some of you guys please proofread it? I'd really appreciate it if I could get you guys's honest opinions and criticisms. Thank you!http://matthijs.noyce.eu/category/my-stories/tales-of-heartstone/

I liked it. I really did, although for some reason the captain reminded me of kunkka.

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kishin asura said
"Why didn't you stop them?" I ask "why?"

"I tried...they ripped me out of my mech and beat me until I passed out...." He says, ashamed at his failure.