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”If Prince Thrandel thinks he can come at me again, he is painfully mistaken,” Mundhir said with a smirk. He drained another cup of Westwind Brew, and savoured its sweet hoppy taste.

Before him, sprawled across a simple oaken table, was a badly worn map of the Eblistan Sultanate. The cloth that the image had been stitched onto was centuries older than he, and it stung his pride to see the vast expanses of territories that his people once controlled. Nillanor, Irongarde, Thraxton – all bended the knee to his forebears, and those nations that did not, ever shook with fear at the monstrous power the Prophet’s children held.

Picking up a small metal soldier, roughly an inch tall, Mundhir mused at it. On the aged map, it represented his “army”, and he quickly became embittered by the fact that it stood alone. Opposing it, ten centimetres east of Baalor, were five similar metal figures. These represented Nillanor’s recovering army; an army he had bludgeoned in the ruins of Eblistan’s ancestral capital city.

“Why wont father help me? We can make a difference here, we could end this war once and for all. Yet here I am, lauded for war crimes by going against his wishes, holding the very borders he and my brothers have forsaken. Don’t they see? If we don’t stop the Elves here, they will take more and more ground until the Citadel is an island of humanity in a sea of hostility. We’ll be cut off, besieged – forced to surrender before long, no doubt, and the Prophet will look upon us with shame,” he ranted to himself. Another cup of Westwind Brew followed his words.

“My Prince,” came an unfamiliar voice from behind him. Mundhir turned with the grace of a seasoned warrior, and narrowly removed himself from the arc of a sword swing. An assassin, masked in blackness, stood before him. Footsteps from his left and right confirmed that he was not facing just one adversary.

“Who sent you?” Mundhir demanded, drawing his sabre. “Tell me now, and I’ll ensure you are entreated to a warrior’s death.”


With a gasp, Mundhir awakened. Every single bone and joint in his body ached like fire, and his lungs felt as if someone had replaced them with iron kettles. Sweat poured down his brow, and felt icy cold upon his skin. His vision was blurry, and every time he attempted to focus on something, his vision exploded with a searing light.

He attempted to move, and it was then that he realised he was restrained to a wall. Looking down through shimmering visions, he made out dark stone, torches and a throng of people. He sniffed the air, and grimaced; he knew where he was, there was no mistaking that smell. A smell of death and decay, of waste and misery.

A swollen tongue and cracked lips, coupled with a throat as dry as a desert, hampered his ability to talk. If he wanted answers, he’d have to find another way of communicating. He tugged weakly at his restraints, and was surprised when one his hands came free. He figured that whomever had put him here, had thought him dead, and wanted his body to rot as a final insult to him; they must’ve paid little attention to the functionality of his restraints. A follower of Duranar, denied a decent and correct burial, could never find their way to the Undying Promised Land. The thought of being stuck in a black void for all eternity rattled him into action.

Using his free hand, he quickly unfastened the worn leather straps pinning his other limbs to the wall, until finally he fell with a thump onto the damp stone beneath him. The impact, though only light, sent shockwaves of pain rippling through his body; it was several minutes before he dared to rise.

The first thing he did, was press his face against the cold granite wall. With his swollen tongue, he jabbed at the tiny streams of moisture that had accumulated there, and did so for some time, until he finally felt well enough to at least hammer out a few words.

Turning, he looked at his fellow inmates. They were a colourful selection of varying nationalities, races and backgrounds. Murderers, thieves and conmen no doubt – ill company for a Prince of Eblistan, but it wasn’t as if he was in a position to complain. Besides, he had other things to worry about; namely, escaping his father’s dungeon and finding out who it was that tried to kill him. Their skull would decorate his house for a thousand years, this he promised himself.

A draft billowed past him from some hidden vent. He realised for the first time that he was naked as a babe, and as his vision returned to him in earnest, he was horrified to see a spider web of blackened veins spanning his torso; they emanated from a nasty looking wound down under his left breast.

“By Great Duranar, Lord of All, was I struck by Ice Venom?” He hissed aloud. He prodded a finger at his wound, and instantly regretted his childish curiosity as he doubled over in pain.

Ice Venom was the last of a dying, black art that had prospered in Eulona for centuries. Collected from the giant arachnids way up in the frozen north, it could be easily applied to blades, arrowheads – food and drink. It was guaranteed to kill anyone, by turning their blood into a thick blue jelly in a matter of minutes. A common tell-tale sign of its use was the ugly blue veins that would span the victim’s body, as his or her blood vessels became constricted with sludge. How he had survived, was nothing short of a Duranar given miracle.

Arranging for not just one assassin, but several, to murder him using one of the rarest of poisons in the known world, would have cost someone dearly. This left him with two possible conclusions: either Prince Thrandel of Nillanor had stooped to dishonest combat, and arranged it – or someone within his own Royal house had been responsible. The latter notion shook him to the bone.

A commotion erupted from beyond the wide iron bars that acted a wall for one side of the large cell. He could hear the guards, chuckling to themselves merrily, and the sound of their weapons rattling in their sheaths told Mundhir that they were prepared for trouble. He took comfort, however, in knowing himself as a beloved war hero – one of these men would recognise him - and likely set him free immediately. Then he’d be able to take revenge on those that had tried to murder him in the foulest way.

Barging his way through his fellow inmates, and paying them very little heed, he rested against the bars and waited for the guards. Already his tactical mind was deciding his next move, once he was beyond the depressing constraints of his father’s dungeon.
Tick said
Wisdom


Accepted.
Alright, no more entries after this post until further notice.

IC WILL start today. I'll get on with the first post right after I've looked into Tick's CS.
Right, sorry for the delay. Late entries etc.

IC starts tomorrow. Any entries after that will have to be stored on the laterbase, or else we'll have characters spawning from all directions.

Get yo keyboards ready ladies and gentlemen. From the talent pool we've got here, I imagine this fellah will be quite the RP.
thewizardguy said
How come your characters become so much more interesting moments before death? Ima give him a chance, let's see how this works out. To me, this is how I think Broding would react, cuz that's how I imagine he thinks about the world.


Yeah sorry, I'm great at writing about someone's last moments, but terrible at narrating their life. When they're alive, it's all about "He did that, then stabbed this," or "he slept with that, but not that because it had crabs."

... When they're facing down the end of their existence though, it's time to cash their chips. Everything they've done in their life comes down to one singular moment; who they were, what they've done, their failures and successes, all summed up to create who they are in that one final scene.

Anyway, I'll have to go away and think hard about how Polvark goes out, if he does... although things being as they are, death looks like the only path to walk down.
Lord Polvark was no warrior. He was a statesmen, a great reformer, beloved by the citizens of the Empire for his tender care to their needs and welfare; despised by an Emperor whom only cared for the iron fist of oppression. His assignment at Castle Rivergate was nothing short of a collection of negative variables and circumstances. As the battle raged on around him, he took time to reflect upon his life.

He had no sons, or daughters - nor a wife. Lord Polvark was a demonic creation, or so his father had often told him, for his love was for other men. Whilst not a crime in the Empire, homosexuality carried an intense stigma, especially amongst the ruling classes. Perhaps if, as his father had put it, he was born "normal", then he could have risen to greatness. Though, as another of his Praetorians fell with a cleaved neck, the Lord of Castle Rivergate wondered why he had burdened himself with life at all. Had he ever known happiness? Denied his parents' love, scolded by an Emperor who sought to see his people suffer needlessly, and now abandoned in his moment of greatest need by the Gods of old - Gods that he had dedicated a great deal to, and at great risk, to receive deliverance.

Why should he fight? Why should he waste his lifeblood upon the blades of his enemy, terrified and helpless, when he could just submit?

Snatching the silver trumpet from his sergeant-at-arms, whom stood beside him nervously as the battle turned against the Praetorians, Lord Jaques Polvark, son of Frandalmir the Great, heaved the strength of his lungs into the mouthpiece. A piercing sound echoed through the hall, drowning out the sound of bloody slaughter and dancing weapons. The Praetorians, understanding the signal as one of retreat, backed away from the melee and locked their shields. Their enemy pursued them, but they maintained formation as they circled their master in a protective ring.

Lord Polvark shrugged off his sergeant's grip, and pushed his way to the front of his men. Throwing his ancestral sceptre down at the foot of the hulking giant; the hastily emerging Empire's greatest threat, he bowed his head.

"My castle is yours. Do what you will with me, but I ask you to spare those who have fought tirelessly to keep this fortress in the hands of its rightful owner. Their courage and bravery should be apt price, for their safe return to Imperial lands. If you are a warrior of any honour at all, you will pay me this small mercy," he said, with a wavering voice.

"My Lord," hissed the sergeant. "Do not soil your name in the quagmire of surrender. Die proudly, with the Emperor's name on your lips."

"I will not have any more of my men die protecting me," shot back Lord Polvark. "Our cause is lost, we have been bested. Now carry out my final order, and throw down your weapons - all of you!"

The Praetorians hesitated; caught between instinct and duty. One by one, they chucked down their swords and spears. Many closed their eyes, expecting at any moment a foriegn blade to pierce their exposed bodies, or a mace to implode their skull.

Stepping forwards, Lord Polvark was not attacked by the barbarians, even as they yelled their jeers and curses at the surrendered Praetorians. He unclipped his armour, and threw the chest plate to the ground.

"Do we have terms?" He asked the giant.
Antonius shrugged at Rinack, "how many families did you destroy in your path of so called justice? How many orphans, widows and bastards did you create? The Empire would have brought enlightenment to the far reaches of the world, were it not for your selfishness; for your blinded rage. Prepare to die, Rinack."

Summoning his power, Antonius threw out an open palm. Rinack's memory shattered around them, as if made from glass, until they both stood in a black void. He hefted his staff, and pointed at the warlock.

"Let us end this; the Emperor has no command over my magic here," he spat.

A large ball of orange flame, twisting and turning, appeared at the head of his simple oaken staff. As the seconds passed, it grew larger, until it was the size of a small child.

"DIE!"

The ball of flame shot forwards, directly towards Rinack. Antonius smiled victoriously; expecting any moment that the last of his enemy's mental defences would crumble.
How are Canadians even a problem? I only met a few in my lifetime, but all had one weakness in common: a piece of wood with a nail through it. Super effective and cheap to make.

... I um... I was joking, to any who find it in their power to become socially sensitive.
The Roman07 said
He's not exactly a copy and paste character since technically I created him.and never actually got to use him in a game. Every game I try to use him in often gets overloaded with characters and he just gets drowned out in the background over everyone elses ultimate heros of valor or sneaky villans. If your skeptical on the uality of my RP'ing, I'll gladly throw upsome samples of older games if you like?-which brings me to your other question: I personally think 6 or 7 characters max would be perfect, after that number it always seems to go down hill IMHO. I always believed Quality over quantity, even if that means cutting out my character to pick you favorite cs's (which I'm fine with if you want that and wouldn't hold any grudge, you got a lot of good CS's)


You misunderstand my scepticism and definition of "copy and paste" characters. I see them as characters, that of course someone has made, and then stored away somewhere. These characters are then used in several RPs, and the logic itself is sound - I mean, having a character you can just lightly modify to fit an RP, rather than hash a new one out, is an efficient practice, right?

What I've seen in the past however, is that people using copy and pastes tend to go AWOL early on. I never quite know why their AWOL rate is so high, but I just assumed that it's because they keep playing the same character and are subconsciously, or maybe even consciously, bored of it. I don't know if that's the reason though, and that's why I am accepting you. Like I said, you are a test run in my eyes, and if you become an early AWOLer then I think there will be enough evidence to back up my theory. If not, then I can scold myself for being too quick to judge statistics.

There is nothing wrong with your character as it stands, I mean everything is there and he's quite the colourful fellow; I just have my reservations about copy and paste. Here's to hoping you'll prove my judgemental ass wrong though.

Rockette said
Klymi Dryad


Jesus Christ, you weren't joking about having to read up on things. Good work. Accepted.
Rockette said
I'm working on it right now, I was just stumped a little and had to do some research on the particular character I decided on.I guess it depends on what you're comfortable with and capable of maintaining when it comes to players. We have a pretty diverse set of characters already, and with this being a sandbox style, more wouldn't really hurt I think, but it could clutter and compliment things in the event of combat and posting speed. I guess I'm in the line with that so I'll defer to everyone's preference and your judgement.


Pretty much just echoing my thoughts. Maybe the worst case scenario, I could open a second thread if the group suddenly splits off in various directions, to help with post congestion. We'll cross the bridge when we come to it, in the mean time I'll leave it open.

Well, I've gotta pop out to do some shopping, wont be back for a few hours. When I get back, I'll update the accepted player list, then we'll see about getting things moving.
The Roman07 said
Rin Zeela-Tae


I don't normally appreciate copy and pasted characters, but my dislikes for them are based more on theory than on practice. Depending on how you do, will decide how I approach copy and pastes in the future.

Accepted.

Grothnor said
Kareth of Lendria:


At last, a knight in shining armour! Accepted.

camillethegnome said
Nessa Anarae


Glad you decided to join us. Accepted.

Shoopthewoop said
Experiment 19


Declined.

Reasons:

    - We already have an exotic creature that got its name from experimentations, I'm concerned that you've read through the list of existing characters, and become inspired by that one in particular.

    - Questionable writing ability. The holes in your background information, coupled with the way it is written, worries me. You've only been on the guild for a day, and I have no previous works to go off and read. I don't need you to be a flawless writer, as this is casual, and I myself sometimes write like a hapless mudfish - but I need to know you can write things that wont make people cringe.


If you really want in this RP, there's two things you need to do.

1) Find me a post from another RP, so I can quickly make a check. If one doesn't exist, perhaps you have some creative works saved on your computer? Paste me a paragraph or something from one.

2) Give your character more depth. You don't need an essay, but there are some glaring questions. For example: If he was a snake, and was experimented on, does he have the ability to think like a human? Or is he just an oversized serpent with arms? Can he be reasoned with? Hell, can he even speak? Tell me more about him.

OR.

The other players, if they are happy with what they see already, can veto my decision, in which case you'll be accepted. But that's down to them.

Rockette said
Blargh - I'm getting there to the finish! I'm just multi-tasking like Hell before I leave for my show. c:


It's okay. How long do you need? I can postpone the IC's start for a short time.

On another note, should I close this RP to any more entries? Or we happy to have as many as possible?
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