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Guilty Spark said
I'll be sticking with Mundhir.(I knew what mamalukes were, I just never liked the word itself.)


I assumed everyone did, but I just wanted to enlighten anyone who thought I may have just plucked a word out of my ass and ran with it! :D

I am writing a post btw, it's going to be a bigg'n, so stay tuned.
Alright, great posts everyone.

I'll take it from here.

We're going to Baalor. Once there, you may all go off your separate ways or assist the Prince in his various endeavours. Consider Mundhir the main story quest giver, and everything else the sandbox. Do as you will.

I didn't see anyone who wanted to shrug off the assistance provided by Mundhir's men and escape, so I'm taking you all with me.
Let's clear up the mamaluke hating that's going on, and maybe you'll all understand why it is they are not knights in shining armour.

When the RP was first created, the original author, Primal Conundrum, wanted the users to create the various city states that made up her patchwork world of broken nations.

I originally wanted to play an oversized hamster, because I've never done it before and they are awesome so shut up. She turned me down as a sexy furry, despite my many attempts to persuade her that I wasn't a sexual deviant. I was ultimately unsuccessful, so I went down another road.

Everyone was creating these really crazy races, of all kinds of monsters and ROFLbeings. I wanted to bring the RP back down to earth though, so I made a humble human.

Middle Eastern culture never gets a shout out in RPs, so I decided that rather than have my guy be some westernised European-type Prince, I'd make him a more Egyptian/Arabesque fellow.

Eblistan (note the STAN, and that the people are referred to as EbliSTANIS, much like Pakistanis) was then born from this idea. The city state was not supposed to be the main setting of the game, I think it was just as no one else came forwards to create parts of the world, Primal ended up taking my contribution and using it as the RP's starting-off point.

I then got the RP thrown at me, and decided that a fictional, Muslim based culture sounded like a jolly old thing (again, the Prohpet Ebli vs the Prophet Mohammed ((not any likeness between them to any Muslim observers, just the word 'Prophet' was borrowed!!!))

Mamalukes are real world Middle Eastern warriors, though there is much more to their name than that, I just cba to describe the history of it.

So in conclusion, rather than a westernised Kingdom with Knights and Kings and other archetypes, I went for a Caliph and a Middle Eastern style setting.

*breathes in*

So y'all stop hating on my mamalukes!

Right, let me get back to this RP and see what's what.
Sorry bud, I've been "super busy" (i got a ps4 with The Last of Us and my life just went right down the sink hole), and that other RP has demanded my full attention because it has about 3,500 players.

Not that it's any excuse.

I promise tomorrow Polvark will cannibalise Broding's eyeball.
I'm not sure if I should post, or give the others more time to make theirs.

I'll come back later tonight, and if there's been no update, then I'll post anyways.
gcold said
Bye.


I would have used the term "dick" but then that's me.
Well, the alternative is for Freeform Democracy to play its part.

What'd you guys want to do?

Rewrite the jail break?

Or carry on and just be more cautious in future?
Lovely post Spark, very nice.

Okay I see our rambotaur is causing some concern amongst the townsfolk. Let's see if we can rectify the problem, shall we?

The toning down of the death toll would be greatly appreciated, Mr. Steel, and I would urge everyone to take care in what kind of enemy they feel the group should face. In this instance, three hundred guards would have been a death sentence or a very laughable escape were it not for Spark's entrance into the RP... although thinking about it, I coulda just GM'd Mundhir's men I guess.

Anyway, back to the point, whilst this is a High Fantasy RP, we must try to keep things in scope. Realism applies as much as it can, and gravity is very much in effect. The bigger something is, the slower it moves unless altered by physics-defying forces (i.e magic). The more someone swings their weapon, the more exhausted they become. The more blood they lose, the weaker they get (especially mentally). The guards of Eblistan are not incompetent fools, and whilst the dungeon guards may have been the dregs, the City Watch are soldiers trained to kill. Murdering them by the dozens isn't going to cut it, not unless you can justify your actions rationally.

It doesn't matter though, as we've secured a logical escape. I just urge all players in future to take stock of what their character is doing, and to remember the facts of the situation.
Steel fist said
Guys, no bad intentions. You planned to leave the citadel, I wanted Shorus to stay behind and cover your escape. He has no intention to fight off all the guards, just to draw their fire till you escape, that's all. After that he will collapse a wall or something and use the havoc to escape himself. I don't see a reason for spark to not introduce her character, a battle is a good time like every other time. And you don't even have to fight, just use the havoc Shorus created to escape.And yes, I needed the Minotaur to be busy for a while, I actually told you that.. (Hamster, you ignored that, so I tried to make him busy myself).


I know y'all think I ignore everything. Sometimes I forget stuff, and this is true, but my last post was well researched. You were the one who spawned 300 guards, and I don't care how big this minotaur is, three hundred people is A LOT vs one guy. They'd of surrounded us, and whilst I do plan for your guy to be the last man fighting, my original plan was for him to be bundled onto a wagon and driven off. Maybe unconscious, exhausted, and this would excuse you from the RP for however long.

Just to prove to you I was aware of everything, these are the notes I referred to in writing my post:
Rin offers Prince hide with little paste left, but offers to suck the venom out with his teeth.

Krytaar makes his name known.Says he'll come for the time being.

Rin makes a point that the plains are open. Says he can smell danger, and find Prince's men if they dont want to be found.
Wants his name cleared and fishign rod back

Guards slip past Shorus and attack the group. Rin kills two in a savagae attack with his teeth and tail.

9 makes an appearence, looking much less worse for wear than he was. Saves Rin from a polearm guard.
Kills several more than run at him.

Shorus holds off the guards, after knocking through the door. (300 of them)
See, there it is, right at the bottom (i ordered things chronologically from everyone's posts), but it's just it didn't make sense for us to escape on foot from the city with nowhere to hide and nothing to help. So like I say, the mino was going to hold his ground, right up til help arrives, then he was going to be taken away in bad shape. If you don't want this, then I'm sure we can leave you for dead instead.
The Lizard shook its head, and offered up the empty hide. Mundhir poked his fingers into it anyway, and scraped some of the paste’s remnant into his palm. The wound on his torso had started to burn, and he feared it would soon fall to infection; with this in mind, he applied the meagre amount there. The pain caused by the paste making contact with his damaged flesh was momentarily unbearable, and he fell to his knees, taking long deep breaths between whimpers.

“Thanks, Master Rin,” he coughed, “I took an arrow to the thigh not so long ago, and until this very moment, I thought that was the most painful thing to ever have graced my body.”

"Or if you wish, Rin can pull the poison out by bloodletting..." hissed Rin, revealing his assortment of large teeth.

Mundhir grimaced, and thrust out a palm, “stay right where you are, or by Duranar’s Will, I’ll cut you down!”

Before the Prince could modify his statement to a kinder version, the mysterious Elf spell caster made his appearance. “My name is Kyrtaar, if anyone is curious. I suppose I'll accompany you for the time being,” he said plainly.

“For the time being? Sounds about right for an Elf, I suppose,” muttered Mundhir. “Your peoples have ever been a fickle lot. If Prince Thrandel paid more attention to the changing landscape of a battle, than he did the sweet taste of wine, and the beauty of Elven whores, I dare say my Baalor campaign could well have gone differently. Still, your company is appreciated all the same – I hope you have no misgivings towards me? It’s not that I wanted a war with Nillanor, it’s just, well, you long lived fellows hold grudges for a great period of time.”

"There aren't much trees in the plains... Harder to hide, harder to fight and easier to track." Rin said suddenly, with his usual unnerving tone.

”Wasn’t always that way, Uchfos once covered this entire area for miles and miles,” retorted Mundhir as he picked himself up. ”The Prophet Ebli Khan had his Khanic Mages burnt the trees to the ground, it took many weeks, but eventually the land was a scorched ruin.” He paused, and looked nervously at the Nymph and scratched his head. ”Not that I’d of done that, of course. The Prophet was of a great military mind, and he knew he could not fight the Elves of Nillanor in the trees. He had them burned, so that any army could be seen miles before it reached him. Genius really, though can you imagine such power? There must have been thousands of these Khanic Mages, but in truth, the Bak’Rah says there was only six.”

"Rin will go... at least Rin can smell for danger. Also Rin can track your friends if they do not want to be found. Then we make them clear my name yes? And my fishing pole?"

Mundhir waved his hand, “of course Master Rin, you’ll get your fishing pole and more. I’ll have it seen that you are given land and a nice hovel, or perhaps a ship, that you may sail forth and find yourself some finer land, better suited to your kind?” He stopped, stroking his matted black beard. “If you can truly smell danger, that will be mo-“

The minotaur, with its awesome strength, suddenly surged forwards in a mad rage. Mundhir’s head swivelled so quickly that he felt the tendons in his neck threaten to split, and as he yelled to halt his mighty companion, the door at the end of the tunnel gave way under the weight of its hulking mass.

Immediately strong rays of light sprang into the Prince’s vision, and he stumbled backwards with both hands brought to shield his eyes. The sound of men cursing and making their battle songs rang true, and they were immediately followed by the brutal melody of untold carnage. The minotaur was up to his tricks again, and it seemed he had ambushed the ambushers.

Rin rushed past him, then the nightmare beast, and finally the Dark Elf – whom he’d paid little attention to. The three of them fell into the chaotic melee, which was finally becoming visible through his sun blinded vision. Rin swiped and gouged his attackers, whilst the nightmare beast used its horrifying features to destroy any who opposed it. The Dark Elf, with her shadowy form, slipped past the battle and started trooping towards freedom.

Mundhir went next, beckoning the Halfbfreed to stay behind him. “Stay back, my lady, I’ll find us a way through this dilemma.”

As soon as the Prince stepped from the exit, a dozen arrows crashed off the rocks and doorway. He ducked low, but the missiles had fallen wide all the same.

“It’s the War Giver! Forget the others, KILL HIM! Duranar demands it!” Shouted someone from amidst the battle.

“War Giver? Duranar demands it?” muttered the Prince, but now was not the time for thought. He looked across the bloody scene, where the Insectoid, the Lizard and the Minotaur were locked in deadly battle with a full squadron of city watch.

A spear came at him from the blur of struggling forms, but he parried it with ease. The snarling face of an Eblastani, with his sun blasted skin and oiled beard, spat bloody murder at the fallen Prince. Mundhir kicked the man in his bulk, and crossed his neck with a sabre stroke.

Two more of the watchmen replaced their fallen comrade, and Mundhir stepped back as the venom once again sapped his strength.

“This is not how I die,” wheezed the Prince, batting away his attackers with slowing swings. “The Prophet did not promise me this.”
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