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Guilty Spark said
I am a Halo reference, I picked it up. And if I'm going to leave I might as well do it before I interact with anyone or effect the flow of the RP, I'll just leave my character as the plot device that got you out of the tunnel situation.


You're not a plot device, although you did operate as one in your introduction. I feel you are being very hasty in all this, and now that I've had my second cup of tea, I ask you to reconsider.

I just don't quite understand where all this has come from, it's very sudden. Ultimately though, I respect your right to leave the RP as and when you want to, and wish you well with whatever you want to do.
Okay, now let's clear this up.

If any of you have a problem with the way the RP is going, then I not just want you to speak up, I NEED you to speak up. You'd be surprised how many times you get a whole bunch of people sitting there, all harbouring the same reservation about something, but all being equally afraid to say something until it's too late.

It's equally important that the players take an understanding point of view to someone who has a concern that they feel needs addressing. What happened today escalated far too quickly, and there was no reason for it. It's created a falling out, and cost us a player. If this happens again, I will be less than reasonable in my handling of the situation. Respect people's opinions, even if they come across as agitated - firing back just creates an angry mess.

If you are in doubt of what to say to someone, when they do bring up something they want looking at, then don't say anything at all. Let me handle it. If you feel you want to add your two pounds, then do, but please don't make any attempt to fan the flames of RAR. Just say "Well, tbh I feel this blah blah blah blah blah, but we should wait until Hamster gets back and see what he says". That way no one gets hurt, and the RP develops as the good Lord intended.

I hope we are all clear here, and that I wont need to revisit this issue.
Guilty Spark said
I suppose I reacted much too abrasively, I've only made one post and my character pretty much feels like an NPC anyways so I'll just quit while I'm ahead. Good luck guys.


That's a very unhelpful statement to make. Very much akin to the beloved "KTHXBAI" slogan of yesteryear.

I am sorry that you feel that way, but I answer rashness with rashness, and I bid you good day. Nothing short of a shame, but if you feel that whatever has happened here has made this RP incompatible with you, then I guess that's your business.

Any hey, if this is because I referred to you as a treacherous metal orb, I was making a Halo reference.

Happy trails.
Wraithblade6 said
Oh. I wanted a recap. Did I post asking for one? Maybe I didn't. where are you all now?


I'll PM you and Wizard a brief summary, but that migraine inducing rabble from that double crossing metal orb goes most way there to explaining it.

Rockette said
I hate bolding text like that, it hurts my eyes. x n xBut I think I caught up well enough, if I missed anything, lemme know.


Yeah I know what you mean. I was horrible and left everything normal in my last post, partly because I hate the world, and partly because I wanted you all to read it. Having read some of the posts though, I'm not entirely sure that was wise. Some people didn't seem to think Mundhir was dying, despite him saying so. Hey ho, not important.

Naunix said
Hello there! I'm working on a CS right now, but I just wanted to check and see if a vampire hunter would fit in well with this RP?


I am mistrusting of vampires ever since Twilight, and the spawn of sexy teen vampire dramas that followed it. Whilst I have nothing against vampires themselves, as they are monsters, I have disagreements with the "beautiful" human looking creatures. I prefer the oldskool monster looking bastards that actually make you think "Holy shit that right there is evil, KILL IT, KILL IT WITH FIRE" rather than "Oh wow I want to put my willy in that".

Rockette said
I didn't realize we were still accepting?... Iunno.


The player count will become less of a problem soon, as you all start drifting off your separate ways on various quests/adventures.

Wizard and Wraith are with me, they're from Castle Rivergate, and the three of us turned a silly freeform RP into one of the best stories the world has ever seen since four weeks ago. It's okay, I wouldn't start drawing in the dregs of the guild at this point in the RP, they are both solid writers with creative knacks.

Naunix said
Venator Elyota


I'll give this a look in a minute, after I'm done answering all this OOC fan mail.

Naunix said
That signature just causes me to have flashbacks of all the deaths I've had via fiddle ult over the past 4 years of LoL-ing........stupid crows >_<


I have no idea what you guys are going on about, I am just going to come out and say it.

Steel fist said
Guys, I'm sorry! But not everyone have the entire day to sit in front of a computer! (for example I have in average 40-45 min. a day for RP).And we do have big amount of people playing in this one!I suggest that everybody except the GM will avoid posting too long posts, basically you're all very talented writers, but getting updated on the posts becomes very cumbersome.I suggest that no post except the GM's will be longer then 10 - 15 rows (shorter is better), a good writer should be able to describe everything within those limitations.About the GM, he has more to do in his posts, he is both controls a character, GMs the game and directs the flow of the game in order to avoid mishaps (like my 300 soldiers earlier), so his posts suppose to be longer then the others (but even with all that, Hamster manages to keep them relatively not too long).Really guys, we have to keep it readable and playable!


I understand your concerns, it is a problem for me too, but as GM I put my personal life on hold to ensure this RP happens, and that all of the hard work of the players gets an equal share of my attention. Besides, I actually really enjoy reading the different styles we have here, and the characters are developing really well. All I can say for now is: hang in there, and be thankful this RP hasn't died a death like 99% of them do on this guild within the first two days.

This will become less of a problem once we're done saying how awesome Mundhir is, and start accepting his quests like they're hotcakes at the sunday fare. You'll only really need to pay attention to the posts of the people that are with you, rather than everyone. If you can fight the good fight for a while longer, all will suddenly become much easier. I will get this phase of the RP rolling as soon as I can, but not so fast as to skip past what I consider an important part of the story.

Nephriel said
Holy crap, that was a lot to read... XD You guys are awesome... Be to a computer soon!@Shorus Not to pick a fight but I am pretty sure that only the actual GM, being Hamster and not you, can set a post length.... I am also pretty sure that he has yet to tell us our posts are too long and if he does that's cool, I am sure we would alter our posts accordingly. In the meantime everyone has their own writing style, someone posting more or less than someone else does not mean they aren't GREAT writers. Please be more careful how you phrase things and please... stop trying to gm when the gm is away. :/@Hamster Sorry about the fuss... Do we need to tone down our posts for any new comers if you are still taking them? I am pretty sure that the reason most posts are currently so long is that we are all catching up to the change in our prior positions and our new locations and health.


I want to refrain from setting post lengths, as I believe such things constrain creativity and generally piss people off. Sometimes you need to write a couple of paragraphs, and other times you need to put together a small essay, it's the nature of the freeform beast and I will nay don my sword and shield to combat it.

You are right, everyone needed to catch up and fill the time lapse, plus we're at an important development stage with regards to the story. For the moment, I'm not touching anything, everything has been working fine as it is.

Perhaps putting this in the "casual" section was the wrong decision, but it's what Primal had originally intended and I pretty much followed suit when I took the helm.

Guilty Spark said
Hey, when was the last time I told you to make your posts longer? Oh wait, I didn't. So why don't you refrain from trying to stifle the creativity of others.


Let's tone down the hating, but yah in a nutshell I agree.

Stefan0620 said
Thanks! :DFiddles too stronk


Still no idea what you guys are talking about.

The Roman07 said
I'll be on later tonight to post. Had one crazy couple days


I imagine you live in a tree.

The Roman07 said
Damn what's with all the hate guys? Geeze love and peace bitchez! @Shorus- I understand your concern for new players and others who don't have time but in all fairness this is an entertainment site meant for people who enjoy writing and want to further enhsnce their craft. Limiting ones post is like telling someone to play battlefield4 single player campaign but not the multiplayer. Sure it may be enough for some but others not so much. I get it was just a request, but I fear your request would get overruled due to people not enjoying the game nearly as much if they had such restrictions. Sorry ya big ox but that's just how the cookievwould crumble.. XD@Everyone else- LEAVE BRITNEY ALONE!!! -er I mean Shorus :-P


Agreed.

However I will defend a player's right to question the RP's system to my last dying coffee.

The next time anyone offers their opinion, makes a suggestion or a request, I'll get inwardly sad if I walk into the OOC and everyone is bundling him/her with extreme prejudice.

We all have a degree of responsibility over the shape this RP takes, that's the strength of freeform, it decentralises the power and allows for a greater, more varied playing field. If we jump on people for voicing their concerns, opinions or requests, even if they come across as a bit heavy handed, then you stifle this gift, requiring the GM to stand in and start taking control to avoid bloodshed. We need to show kindness, restraint and understanding at all times, it's what Gandhi would have wanted.

camillethegnome said
Haha man, there's always so much drama here. Sorry I haven't posted in a while, I've been caught up with summer assignments and registering for school. I think I'm the baby of the group o.o. Anyway, I'll probably get a post up today. I thought this was supposed to be a relatively community run RP, so having everybody shout out their suggestions should be a good thing, whether or not people agree with them. No one is trying to be the GM, but people have opinions and whatnot. Personally, I like reading both long and short posts.


Jesus so many kindred spirits here, I love you all in the gayest way possible.

thewizardguy said
You think so? I must admit, I've been unable to read all the CS's in detail (so many!), so I wasn't sure about it. I could change into something less combat-oriented, if you guys think that would work better.


Told you he was a good guy. Will be with you as soon as I can Wizard.

thewizardguy said
Personally, I have massive abundances of free time on my hands, and I'm able to easily read pretty much any posts. So for me, limited time isn't much of an issue. However, I think that it might be that we who have lots of time could place a little 'post summary' in the ooc or something of the like, to help you guys keep up.I think creating a rules system like you're doing is a bit overboard, and I think people might ignore that just because they dislike someone trying to tell them what to do, as is a common reaction to such systems. I think it'd be best just to ask people to try and help out those with smaller quantities of free time at their disposal.


It is a bit overboard, but I appreciate the suggestion. Freeform democracy has spoken quite thoroughly here, and as far as I am concerned, there will be no post limits.
Okay, now I'm going to go and make another cup of tea, because I got home from work today, looked at the OOC, saw bloody murder, and promptly went to sleep.

I am now grouchy, hazey and I just had to spend half an hour reading a God damned OOC section.

When I come back from making my cup of tea, I do the following:

- Reiterate my support for Steel's/ANYONE's right to make their concerns heard, without fear of being run down by an enraged mob.

- Give my full answer to the post length issue.

- Write a "Story so Far" and put it on the original OOC.

- There will also be a "Quest" section, where the various objectives of the characters will be listed so that everyone knows what everyone else is off doing. This may come until after the IC develops a little more though, we shall see.

- Look at the recent character entries.

- Make another cup of tea.

- Make an appeal for a transatlantic co-GM, to cover the hours I'm not around and to stomp out this kind of OOC violence early. It'll also help to have someone around who can clear up a disagreement, or confusion, when I'm not about in order to allow the RP to progress.

- Read the IC.

- Go to bed at 3 am.

- Wake up late for work and get in trouble with my twat of a boss.
You still can, its just entered a new chapter. If you need a summary of events, I can update you tomorrow, but we're at a point where it doesn't matter too much what the other characters have done up to this point because your guy will just spawn and be like 'sup'. Upto you though.
Managed it. Guilt prevailed :D
Human beings were an amazing race. They were survivalists, and everything they did propelled them to their one and only goal: continuation. It was perhaps this birth right that had taken hold in the Lord's mind, as he dangled helplessly, waiting for death. He had fought the good fight, drawing on strength that would have put his father to shame, but Jacques Polvark the Afflicted had reached the end of his meagre tale. As the hulking giant pulled back its hand, readying to rip his heart from him, he felt a surge of revulsion. To think that he would not truly die, but instead, would be trapped in a prison as a murderer of thousands used stolen knowledge to plunge the world further into chaos.

Polvark saw his chance, and went for it. With his hand stretched, as if his fingers were claws, he swiped at the giant's face, catching its eye and digging deep. With a brief sickening gurgle, he tore the enlarged orb from the face of his enemy, and the grip that suspended him in place loosened. Fighting with the strength of an angry God, Polvark broke free and dropped to the floor, even as his foe released forth a deafening roar - or was it a scream?

Standing to his full height, Jacques looked his opponent in its one working eye, "my name is Jaques Polvark, and it is within me to build a better world."

Rushing forwards, he planted a series of bone-crunching jabs and hooks to the dazed giant's exposed torso. One fist after another, battering away at an impervious wall of muscle - but this time, his assault yielded results. The monster recoiled, half blinded, and heavily diminished, batting away at Polvark with panicked throws of its meaty arms. Sensing an opening, the Lord put everything he had into an uppercut, making contact with the giant's chin, and sending it stumbling backwards. Not willing to lose his advantage, he shoved his enemy, and with a loud crash the hulking mass fell backwards.

Before he knew it, he was upon the giant, wailing on its face repeatedly, his knuckles feeling as if they were contacting with stone. Again and again, his attacks thundered on his enemy, sending splatters of blood over the stonework.

"Die, die, die!" Polvark screeched between hits.

Something akin to a treetrunk smashed into the side of his head, and he rolled several feet from his adversary. Blood dripped from his ear, and his already bloodied vision became studded with stars. He had little doubt his skull had been cracked, and that death was a strong possibility even in the event of victory, yet still Polvark felt energy surging through him. An energy not driven by magical powers, or divine blessing, but of raw adrenaline - the hammer and the anvil of all mankind.

"On your feet, monster," coughed Polvark, spitting a mixture of blood and teeth onto the floor. "I've enough... I've enough in me yet to rid your evil from this world."
Not to be a total arse, although I am anyway, I'm going to have to postpone the er, the post til tomorrow.

I realise this is gay, but I just spent two hours writing on the other RP so that those 3,500 players can continue. I promise, double promise that tomorrow I'll put this fellow first and get it done, but right now I have a life to lead, kinda.
Well that took forever.

Christ.

I hope you all appreciate that, that is seriously like two hours of writing.
“Make your peace with Duranar, brother,” said the city watchman as he held his sabre high above Mundhir’s head.

“Me and the Lord of All are forever at peace,” mumbled the Prince through heavy exhaustion. “Do as you will, I am ready.”

The Half-Elf thief struck the man in a beautiful display of whirling blonde hair and lightning grace. He groaned briefly, and collapsed as his heart imploded from the penetrating dagger beneath his arm. The watchman’s comrade, momentarily shocked into inaction by the development, quickly recovered himself and tried to slay her. Mundhir watched, motionless, as the Halfbreed put him to sleep in a much less graceful, much less beautiful display of violent savagery.

“By Duranar, she is magnificent,” he said weakly with a smile.

Mundhir looked left, as he heard a gut wrenching screech, and found that Rin had impaled his face upon the sword of a watchman. Not deterred by the grievous injury, the Lizard went on to consume the man’s hand. It was a grizzly sight, and as Rin pulled the extremity from its limb, Mundhir knelt forwards and vomited black bile onto the blood-soaked grass.

A green light washed over his outstretched hands, and it was followed by a thunderclap. Looking up, he could see clearly the mysterious Kyrtaar entering the fray with impossible powers at his disposal. In a flash of glimmering steel and emerald ribbons, the Prince watched as the Elf slid through the guards of his enemies like a serpent, leaving a trail of dying men as he went.

The watchmen screamed victory, and Mundhir crawled onto his haunches to see the great hulking minotaur succumbing to a dozen sabres. Falling to its knees, it let out a bestial roar loud enough to tremble the ground beneath the Prince, and as the watchmen, in their red capes and bronze helms surged forwards for a kill, the walking wall of muscle and death made a startling recovery. Clambering to its feet, it swung its axes at them in an obliterating arc of bloody destruction. A score of arrows struck into its flank; another earth shaking roar echoed, smothering the sounds of battle.

"Mhundir! Horses are coming... hide!" Came the feint cry of the Halfbreed; he looked over and saw she had pulled the watchman’s body over her for protection.

"What is going on?!" Rin screamed, blood frothing from his hideous face wound.

“World Breakers, come to see their ungodly charge seen to its end,” slurred Mundhir, as if drunk. He was so tired, so impossibly tired.
A trumpet blasted, and suddenly the Prince felt his strength partially restore. He knew that sound, and he knew the instrument that caused it intimately. It was his, after all. Looking up at the rising slopes towards the east, he saw a loose ring of riders approaching. Not World Breakers, from their light attire, and not his father’s men either – for they carried his banner.

“Impossible,” he wheezed.

Clambering to his feet, he fought his blurring vision for clarity, so that he could focus on the riders. They were his mamalukes, no mistake about it, and they were circling the city watch in a ring of death. Without horses of their own, the watchmen retreated under a devastating volley of arrows. Those who were foolish enough to stand their ground were pierced from several angles, and within seconds, Mundhir’s gallant soldiers were in the midst of the survivors, cutting and stomping.

“Make safe the Prince!” Roared a familiar masculine voice.

“Hazim!” Shouted the Prince; his voice hoarse. Tears streaked down from his eyes, “Hazim, are you real?”

A great war horse pulled up alongside Mundhir, and its rider, a hulking giant of a man with a finely trimmed beard, lurched over his saddle and offered his palm. “It’s me, your Highness, and I am very much real,” he said grinning.

Mundhir refrained from grasping his Captain’s hand, and shook his head, “the prisoners, do not harm them, they are our brothers and sisters.” He looked over at the Minotaur, as it knelt over, breathing heavily so that its plated armour rattled with each intake. “Especially that one!”

Captain Hazim looked about himself, and then back down at the Prince, “The Elves and the others we can take, but that monster and- what is that?”

Mundhir followed his gaze, and saw the nightmare beast stumble forwards and collapse under the weight of its innumerable wounds.

“A friend! I don’t care how you do it Captain, just get these people out of this blood gulch, Duranar demands it!” Snapped Mundhir, slowly rising to his feet.

Captain Hazim growled, “I did not come here to rescue a bunch of murderers, rapists and thieves. Take my hand you stubborn whoreson, before the whole of Eblistan falls down on us.”

“Why do we linger Captain?” Boomed another familiar, although feminine voice of Mundhir’s sworn protector.

Hazim swung on his saddle, as Sitara Kalyani rode up alongside him. She wore the face of professionalism as always, but she was clearly irritated by the lack of a secured Prince.

“He wants us to take his new friends with him, but I don’t see how we’re to carry those two monsters, not with our horses,” replied Hazim, almost sneeringly.

Sitara looked at the Prince, then at Hazim as if she was running a marathon riddle through her mind, before finally she nodded. “The watch transported many of their men in wagons, you’ll find them just south of us. Fetch them, and see to it that the prisoners are brought with us.” Turning to Mundhir, “My Prince, it is good that you are well, but we must hurry, your men have spotted the World Breakers – the whole regiment – leaving the city’s gates. They’ll be here soon, and I can’t promise you victory in that matter,” she said.

Mundhir nodded, but quickly turned to grab the Halfbreed from her fleshy shield. He led her back to Hazim, who gave her a disdainful look, but helped her onto his saddle all the same. Next, the Prince retrieved Rin and sent him towards another waiting mamaluke.

“Enough, my men will get the rest your Highness,” snapped Hazim; nervous perspiration forming visibly on his brow.

“Very well,” replied the Prince. As he went to haul himself onto a waiting horse, his heart started to thud like a drum within the confines of his head. First his hearing lost itself to a piercing shriek, and as he ineffectually clasped his ears, his vision gave way to blackness. The strength in his legs dwindled, and he felt himself fall to the ground.
The Ruins of Baalor,
Seven days later…

“Ice Venom kills all that it touches, you are on borrowed time my Prince,” rasped the ancient vocal chords of Mundhir’s physician. She was an old crone, hunched at the shoulders with an ugly ragged face topped with wisps of white hair.

“I feel fine, woman, can’t you see that the blackness webbing my body has started to fade?” Mundhir spat, unwilling to accept her words.

“And so you will, alas it is a false recovery. Those very few, and believe me my Prince, they are VERY few, who do survive the initial exposure, succumb within weeks – sometimes months. The damage to your organs has been done, and before long, they will fail,” she croaked.

“Liar, you old lying whore!” Roared Hazim, kicking over Mundhir’s bedside table and sending its accompanying water pitchers crashing to the ground.

“I do not lie, I only serve,” the physician corrected him. “You are welcome to find another healer, but I fear the Caliph’s medicine men will be most unfavourable to our cause.”

Hazim grabbed his sabre; burning hatred shining brightly in his eyes. He moved to cut her head from her body, but she did nothing to resist him.

“Stop Captain!” Shouted Mundhir, rising from his deathbed like a phoenix. “Sheath your sword.”

Hazim relented, and with a bow, he stormed through the doorway leaving the Prince alone with his physician.

“Is there no cure?” he asked, partially resigned to his fate.

“Not within our reach, but there is perhaps a way,” she replied, stroking a tuft of hair on her chin. “The Elves of Nillanor a-“

Mundhir broke out into heavy laughter. “Of course. If anyone holds a cure, it’s my sworn enemy. Well, why didn’t you say so? I’ll just send one of my men to retrieve it, I’m sure Prince Thrandel will be most understanding.”

The old crone shook her head in irritation. “You men, all you think about is killing and fornicating, perhaps if you’d tried to be a good Prince, then none of this would have happened.”
“A good Prince?” gawked Mundhir, stricken by disbelief that he was being cut down by this wretched creature.

“You brought war and death to both of your lands, even as your father attempted to instil a lasting peace with the Elves,” she shot back.

“Peace? Prince Thrandel was on our doorstep, if it wasn’t for me, the Citadel would be under siege. I do not jest when I say the Elves of Nillanor despise us,” he spat.

“Maybe so, but now you have enemies on both sides, and each have it in their power to save you; yet neither have the will to do so. It is a tragic irony,” she said, softer now.

“Enough,” said Mundhir as he started pulling on his princely gowns of crimson silk. “If I am to die, it’ll be on the battlefield. Poison be damned.”

***


The prisoners had been confined to quarters within the great husk of Baalor’s ancient Law House. It was a large structure, with dozens of rooms designed for large meetings, and each of Mundhir’s former inmates had been given one of these as a personal hovel. Although for the time being they had been forbade from leaving. Captain Hazim, the Prince’s second in command, did not trust any of them, and had a great deal of his men patrolling the building’s grounds.

“Move aside,” said Mundhir as he approached the building’s hollow doorway. The two waiting guards obeyed at once, and bowed as he passed.

Walking into what was once the Sultan’s Council Chamber, Mundhir was greeted by the sight of all of the prisoners. Rin was sitting on a brittle stone pedestal, looking bored, as he scratched at the bandages Mundhir’s physician had used to shield his ghastly wound from infection. Kyrtaar looked likewise bemused by his situation, and gazed at the Prince distrustfully. Over at the far side of the dome-shaped room, the Minotaur was leaning up against a wall, striped with bloodied dressings. The rest of the party were gathered around in similar fashion, all but one.

The nightmare beast known as 9, was still under lock and key elsewhere in the Law House’s bosom. Hazim’s men did not trust the creature, did not like it, and the physician had been puzzled as to how to help it. They had confined it to its quarters, with a dozen guards waiting outside in case it tried to run amok. Mundhir had checked on the monster daily, bit it seemed to be forever in a fitful sleep, and he feared it would never wake up.

”It must find its own way to good health,” the physician had said.

“My apologies,” said Mundhir as he clasped his hands. He smiled at each of the prisoners in turn, and then cleared his throat. “Your detainment was perhaps an over precaution, but you must forgive my Captain, he is loyal but lacks manners.”

Walking forwards, so that he stood in the middle of them all, though flanked by two guards and the ever watchful Sitara, he addressed them.

“As Prince of Eblistan, seventh in line to the throne, and Marshal of Baalor, I give you all your freedom,” he said cheerfully. “Though, If you will but for a moment wait, there is something I wish to discuss with you all.

I am in ill health. The Ice Venom that tarred my body as you saw back in the dungeon, has done its work, and I have weeks, maybe months, to live. My physician is not quite sure, she tells me it’s a matter of ‘will’. I feel fine for now, and I intend to use my good health, however temporary, to fight an impossible war.

My brothers, Crown Prince Jazeer and Prince Basar are marshalling my father’s forces to the west for a strike on Baalor. To the east, Prince Thrandel of Nillanor is acting in a likewise manner. My scouts estimate that within a week, these humble ruins you see around you, will bear witness to the greatest battle of our time, and have no doubt.

Your freedom is yours, but I was hoping that as a parting gift, a couple of you may help with an errand or two? And if there’s any here who would see Eblistan enter a new era of peace and stability, and that Nillanor quit its vengeful warring ways, then I beckon you too to stay and assist me on a few … ah, errands of a different kind.”

Mundhir started to pace back and forth, thinking to himself, before stopping to speak once more, “As of now, I can offer few rewards, but know this: if I am victorious in my struggle, in securing justice for my murder, and in driving the Elves of Nillanor away from my father’s borders, then the riches I would command in my dying hours will be immense. I can’t take such things with me to the Undying Lands, and so I would offer it all to any of you that will help me.” He stopped to think for a moment more, “none of you have to help me, and truth be told, I don’t expect any of you to but know this: Eblistan is barred to you, my father’s men watch the roads, and unless you are personal friends with the Elven Prince, then I expect going east will be a similar experience. Help me, serve me, fight with me, and in victory your names will live a thousand years, and the riches you know, the glory, it will be yours. This I promise. This I swear.”

Standing back, Mundhir bowed his head deeply to the prisoners, “please, speak your minds, or be on your travels. I will hold no one a moment longer than they wish to be held, you have served me all well enough already.”
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