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Wraithblade6 said
Ilyndriel "Lyn" Shadowsong


So long as I don't get a law suit levelled against me from Blizzard, I have no problem with this at all.

Accepted!

On a side note, what are we doing about Nillanor's geography? I am happy for people to create maps of their own, if they wish to contribute to the RP creatively. That was the original idea, if memory serves - that Eulona would be made up from everyone's input. However I am ready/willing/able to do them myself if needs be.

Oh, and with Baalor - I guess you could compare it to Osgiliath from the theatrical LOTR if you needed a point of reference to what kind of place it is.
Guilty Spark said
I know you said gold mask, but this is the first thing that comes to mind.(The Leper, King Baldwin the Fourth. For those that didn't know.)


I'll be honest, Baldwin served his part in creating Jazeer. I needed the Crown Prince to be a physically weak man, and I thought about the various things that could cause someone to degenerate so cruelly - then I remembered Baldwin. Add the magical wards needed to keep the bacterium from devouring the rest of his nervous and respiratory systems, and boom, you also have chemotherapy thrown into the mix. Poor little guy.

Rockette said
Ah I was thinking the same thing, Spark.I can easily colour it to be gold, if you'd like to use it for his sheet, Hammy-ham.


I'd like that, if you could? Would make it easier for people to visualise him.
There are always two sides to every story.

Character Name: Jazeer Sadek, Crown Prince of Eblistan

Species: Human, Eblistani

Gender: Male

Noteworthy Abilities / Limitations:

- The Leper Prince: Jazeer Sadek suffers from leprosy, and though his father’s medicine men have kept the disease at bay through arcane means, he is critically weak from the exhausting treatment he must undergo on a daily basis. Sometimes, his muscles and bones are so wrought with frailty, he is unable to walk for days. He often wears special garments designed to prevent the disease’s spread, and his face is usually obscured by a golden mask to hide its progress.

- Healing Hands: Stricken down by his crippling illness from a young age has humbled the Crown Prince. He has dedicated much of his years to helping others, usually afflicted by diseases deemed incurable. As a result, his knowledge in medical lore and the healing arts is extensive, and he is beloved across the Caliphate for his selfless services.

Background: Jazeer Sadek started life with high expectations. The firstborn of Bazar Sadek, Caliph of Eulona’s greatest enclave, he was set to become a figure of great renown. Achieving highly in the various educational fields laid upon him by the finest tutors Eblistani coin could buy, Jazeer quickly became an aspiring academic.

At the age of ten, he developed a mysterious rash on his arms, which quickly spread across his body. A medicine man diagnosed the affliction as the dreaded leprosy, a disease that had ravaged the population of late. Whilst Elves and Dwarves showed a miraculous resilience to the illness, human bodies were fair game to its ruining form.

A cure was far beyond the meagre magical prowess of the Caliph’s medicine men, and only a temporary ward was deemed strong enough to keep the disease at bay. Requiring the victim’s essence to lend sufficient power to it, this ward drained the Prince’s physique, after years of such treatment, he has been left heavily weakened.

Emaciated, stricken by crippling arthritis and with severely deplenished muscles, Jazeer is a weak and sorry creature. However, his father, ever loving has refused to move him lower down the regal food chain.

Inspired somewhat by his harsh hand dealt in life, Jazeer turned his energy to medicine, where he triumphed as a superior healer. He would often escape the Palace under the cover of night to treat the sick and the dying, despite his father’s wishes against such activities. Aside from helping those as unfortunate as himself, he also invested a great amount of resources into discovering a cure for his own ailment.



Usually, he is clothed in silk robes of varying colours – they are warded, to combat the leprosy, but offer no other benefit. The golden mask that he wears over his face is in the visage of a man’s.
2087 words, wow.

Anyways, I believe I got around to all of the characters. I need to go now, and see to my IRL existence.

Before I do though, I want to make the following announcement:

Rockette and Roman are now my co-Gms. Between the three of us, there should hopefully be greater coverage by a responsible person.

They have the power to accept and reject entries, although I think I am right in saying for now we are at bursting?

They also have the power to stop bickering, to punish lynch mobs, and to molest players in a sexual nature.

Both of you can of course leave your new roles at any time, but I really appreciate you volunteering. Hopefully seeing to this RP wont require me to sit here for 3-4 hours a night now, mulling over things so much.

Any questions, then talk to me. If either of you have steam, then SyrianHamster is my id, otherwise the PMs will have to suffice.
The Minotaur was the first to speak, and not to the Prince’s displeasure. It was a fine instrument of warfare, and Mundhir had learned over the last few days that its name was Shorus. There were three dozen City Watchmen, laying in the cold earth that could bear testimony to the beast’s awesome raw physical power. As Shorus spoke in his simple-minded way, a smile crept across the lips of the Prince. In exchange for knowledge of machinery, this mighty weapon would fight for him – already the cause was bolstered. Thrandel of Nillanor, nor Jazeer of Eblistan, had themselves such a champion.

“Your do me great honour, Shorus,” said Mundhir with a deep bow of his head. “I have five hundred of Eulona’s best serving me, right here in these ruins. With you by my side, we may as well up that figure to 600,” he joked merrily. “As for machines, there is something you may wish to see – and might even be able to help me with. Captain Hazim, if you will.”

The Captain had stalked the shadows of the derelict council chambers, his eyes darting from one prisoner to the next as he weighed the potential threat they posed to the Prince. Though a large man, with the muscle capacity of a practiced warrior, he was also adept in the art of stealth. A former World Breaker, he was a formidable adversary, and he his name was blessed and cursed in equal measure. He stepped from seemingly nowhere.

Sizing up the Minotaur, Hazim grunted his approval, “you’re a big bastard, ain’t ya fellah?” Stroking his neatly trimmed beard with a ring-laden hand, he continued, “the Elves left behind a large weapon when we drove them from the ruins two months ago. They call it a trebuchet. Normally the Longears use them to pummel us from afar, but in the battle for Baalor, they were forced to destroy them all – all but one. We can’t figure out how to use the bloody thing though, perhaps you have some knowledge that we lack?”

“Then it is agreed,” said Mundhir with a wide grin.

There was a brief commotion from behind, and the Prince turned half-expecting to see his assassins making a final attempt on him. Instead, it was the light hearted fellow he had not seen since the dungeon; the other prisoners had given his name as Tarwin, and the Prince abided the man’s entry.

“It seems one of you has gained his freedom without my assistance,” mused the Prince, “it was once said, in the Bak’Rah, that a real man forges his own path, and relies not on the charity of others to break the chains put on us from birth. I believe you, young Tarwin, are such a scoundrel.”

The Prince then repeated his earlier words, proclaiming Tarwin a free man within the bounds of Baalor, and the surrounding lands carrying his banner. “Welcome, dear friend,” he finished with a warm smile. “Stay a while, and listen.”

Next, the mysterious forestkin fought for her turn to speak. Mundhir bowed to her, as if she was a maiden of the court, and his eyes dallied for perhaps longer than was appropriate. There was something strange about her, and it perplexed the Prince that he was both unnerved and yet made lustful by her thorn-studded figure.

After stating her gratefulness for having been rescued from the oppressive environment of Eblistan’s dungeon, the forestkin moved quickly to mention the dangers Eulona’s wars often posed to her peoples. As she continued speaking, the Prince found himself studying the exotic veils of flowers and vines that teased themselves around her modesty – a not-so friendly nudge from Sitara, promptly reminded him he was supposed to be above such deviance. Duranar would not entertain corruption of the mind, and Mundhir scrambled for his princely visage.

“If I am victorious, there will be no more war, no more fire – no more sieges, and no more orphans waiting on the streets of Eblistan for handouts from those more fortunate, my lady,” he said at last. “The Elves seek revenge; our histories have been lost, rewritten, and lost again, and so I know only pieces of their cause. My forebears brought them to their knees long ago, and enslaved them, but why Prince Thrandel wastes the lifeblood of his dwindling kin repeatedly against our borders is beyond me. I fear a tragedy befell him a long time ago, and that he is impossibly rageful. I solemnly swear, that should I defeat him once more, then I will push for an enduring peace between our peoples – at my own expense if needs be. Duranar willing, Thrandel will see wisdom.

As for Eblistan, I have grown ever so weary of one man holding all the power. If my father, Duranar forbid, is truly complicit in my murder, then it is my duty as the Lord of All’s chosen to slay him – and all those that stand with him. Upon the ruins of his sin, I will install a government made from the people, and elected by the people. Yes, if I am victorious, the western reaches of Eulona will enter a new era of peace and mutual cooperation.”

"I'll help, although I may regret it." Kyrtaar paused, and added. "You children of the earth lead such energetic, short lives." He finished.

“Ah, Master Elf, your assistance is most welcome. Make no mistake, though I war with your peoples, I hold nothing against your race. In a way, I long for human-Elven cooperation, and that our soiled pasts can be reconciled. I am a warrior, defending my country, but I always fight with a higher purpose in mind: in a dream, the Prohpet Ebli spoke to me, and he was very insistent that I unify all that I could under my banner. At first I assumed he meant for me to ride forth on my steed, and conquer Eulona as he once did, a thousand years ago. Recently though, I suspect he meant for me to correct his errors, and in this task I will not relent. War breeds hatred and division, and I must curb these weaknesses as best I can; alas, it seems battle is part of this process, one way or the other.”

Next, the Halfbreed – another fighting an invisible and unprompted war for the Prince’s earthly affections – offered her assistance. She spoke of a Norn, and the term was unfamiliar to Mundhir, but she mentioned the possibility of a cure for his affliction. She also made clear her contentment in travelling to Nillanor to see if she could retrieve an elixir. The Prince doubted either task was easy as it sounded, but he thanked her with all the courtesy he could muster; he noted Hazim’s disdain for such a practice. The Captain, unlike his Prince, was a warrior first and considered Elves his sworn enemy – and Halfbreeds an abomination. Not that he’d say as much, of course.

Rin demanded his fishing pole, and Mundhir nodded to one of his guards, whom quickly bowed and left the council chamber. “I believe the pole I have procured from the baggage train of the former Elven garrison will be adequate for your needs, Lizard.”

As the guard reappeared, carrying a long silk bundle, Rin continued to talk about hidden rivers, offering discreet passage to and from certain areas. Mundhir thanked him, stating that such information would be invaluable. Rin finished by announcing his delight in a recent bargain struck with the Prince’s physician, and Mundhir secretly pitied the fool, for the old crone’s food was less than wholesome. The horse stew could well be made from Goblin, for there were tribes of them residing in the sewer systems beneath the ruined city.

"My relatives hate you, Number 7. You've killed people they know, hurt the whole elven bloodline, and hurt their pride. I'm surprised my...brothers and sisters..have put up with you for so long,” said Wisdom, the Elf Mundhir’s men had shown little love.

With a sigh, Mundhir conceded, “I have killed many of your kin, their pristine faces mar my dreams. Though you must understand, Thrandel stormed these ruins despite a ceasefire between Eblistan and Nillanor, and was laying waste to the surrounding hamlets and villages that dot the land. It was my father’s inaction, which spurred me to launch a campaign. I do regret killing the Elfkin, for they are a wonderful people, but I do no regret the reasons for which I killed. Still, I gave that Prince every opportunity to surrender and withdraw, and never have I ordered my forces to pursue a defeated Elven host. They are a dying people, the folk of Nillanor, and I believe Duranar wills their continued existence.”

Wisdom's lips pressed deep creases up the hollow face, "It'd be an honor to help you. No way I could pass the chance to say I served the glorious Prince Mundhir of Eblistan. Just promise me a fine sword - preferably elven - and some good fights."

“I am delighted at your indifference to my worldly struggle,” said Mundhir, “though I cannot promise you will not have to use that sword against your own people.”

With a small army at his disposal, bolstered by the powerful adventurers he had happened upon in his misadventures, the Prince felt a weight lifting from him. This war was winnable, and the whole of Eulona would yet see a good human arise to lead the hurting masses into a new era of peace and prosperity.

“Very well, I thank you all for your support and allegiance,” the Prince said proudly. His left arm suddenly felt numb, and it fell uselessly by his side. He sighed heavily, and his merriment was replaced with grim remembrance of his impending doom.

“I must retire, to the War Room. If you all truly wish to build a better world with me, then meet with me there, and I will explain to you how it is I plan to vanquish my own brothers,” he stopped as a lone tear rolled down his cheek, “and put to sleep the ancient anger of Nillanor.”

Turning, just as his left leg twitched in spasm, the Prince stumbled but was caught dutifully by one of the guards and Sitara.

The War Room, a simple name given to a simple structure of torn walls and shattered tiles. Five hundred years ago, it served as the Sultan’s very own temple to Duranar. In its old and decrepit state, the Lord of All had long abandoned his presence, and now it stood empty and cold of all divinity.

In Duranar’s absence, were tables strewn around the place. They were laden with several maps, some recent, and some as old as the city itself.

Mundhir was helped into a simple oaken throne next to the largest of the tables, where two young women with veiled faces and tight silken gowns tended to an array of figures dotted about a large map of Eblistan and Nillanor.

“If I am to win this war, I cannot have my brothers and the Elven Prince fall upon me at the same time, therefore I must keep one of the forces busy long enough for me to deal with the other,” he said with a raspy voice, heavy with sudden exhaustion. “I intend to send a force to the ruins of Ahya, hoping to draw my brothers into battle there. They have little experience in war, and will no doubt take the bait. The forces I send will need to first secure, and then hold the ruins against my kinsmen – whilst a second force raids their supply base. If we can put their grain to the torch, then it’ll be weeks, perhaps months, before my beloved peoples can try to murder me once more.”

“What of your brother, my Prince?” Asked Hazim, as if reminding the Prince of something.

“Oh yes, there is a third part of the plan. Crown Prince Jazeer will likely send my younger brother, Basar to the ruins of Ahya. With most of his army gone – I hope – he will be poorly defended, thus making an apt opportunity to cut the serpent off at the head. I’m talking of course, of fighting fire with fire, he may well have ordered my assassination, and in the circumstances, I am prepared to order his!” Mundhir said, a brief fire burning in his eyes. “What say my newest friends of these plans, perhaps your combined worldly knowledge can conjure something more grand?”
thewizardguy said
Hahahahaha! I must say, I was partially aiming to give that false impression. I was inspired by your mention of overpowered ethereal beings in your OP.


I should have known better, you are one of the finest RPers I've come across in this guild so far - not to put anyone else down of course. So far, you've all been great, could nay ask for better.

Got another massive post coming, stay tuned.

@ Steel Fist, read the first part, then scroll down to the bottom. It's the only parts you need to be aware of, or comment on.
Naunix said
Venator Elyota


Accepted, was quite a good read despite my original reservations.

Although I noticed in the bio it states he was born three decades ago, when his age is two hundred and something. Typo?

Any ideas on how you want to enter the RP?

thewizardguy said
Golak Thul


When I first saw the name, which was last night on my tiny blackberry curve screen, I thought "Oh fuck what has he done? Now I look stupid, turns out this guy is a moron!"

Thought you were aiming for God modding heaven.

Having read the whole thing though, I owe you a massive apology.

Accepted.
Right, I have run out of time tonight. Sorry for the five million posts I've had to make, I wanted to dedicate one to each subject.

Wizard, Wraith, if you guys want to get your character sheets up I'll give them a looking over tomorrow.

Naunix, again, I'll look at yours tomorrow and give my verdict.
I need a co-GM, if there's anyone willing. I live in the UK, and work during the daytime hours, which means I can't be around for the prime-posting time for many players.

If I can have someone who will be happy to fulfil my role during the part of the day where I am unavailable, I'd be grateful.

Responsibilities:

- Accepting/Rejecting new entries.

- Resolving disagreements between players.

- Clearing up confusion.

- Generally keeping the RP moving, if an obstruction arises.

It's not as daunting as it sounds, and it would be really really really helpful if I didn't have to spend most of my allotted RP time dealing with OOC related topics. Generally speaking, I'm around from GMT 0 17:00 to 23:00, so you'd only really need to take care of the hours outside of that. For example, say GMT 0 00:00 to 06:00. I'll take care of the really important stuff, and if you're at a loss of what to do, again I'll handle it when I get home from work.

My main concern is cutting down my OOC workload so I can actually get posts out in the IC.

If no one is willing/able, then I'll dutifully struggle on as I have been doing.

Many thanks.
For all to read, I think I pretty much got everything. Wanted to keep it as short as possible.

The Story So Far


A motely group of adventurers, thieves, assassins and the downright bizarre found themselves on the wrong side of Eblistan’s law. Imprisoned for a series of crimes, though not all of them justified, the group was waiting for their impending doom at the hand of an executioner’s axe.

In their midst was Mundhir Sadek, formally a prince of Eblistan, who had been taken to the dungeon after being presumed dead by his assassins, so that his body may rot in the dark depths of the world. As it turned out, he miraculously escaped death despite the potency of the Ice Venom used to kill him.

As Mundhir attempted to talk his way out of the dungeon cell, planning on using his good standing with the people of Eblistan to secure an immediate release, the group launched a bold escape attempt. Slaughtering guards in their droves, the group battled its way through the dungeon; at first Mundhir was revolted by the scale of the massacre, and after seeing one too many of his kinsmen slain by the convicts, he abandoned the group to its fate.

Shortly after doing so, he was set upon by a World Breaker – an elite warrior of the diminished Eblistan military. They answer only to those that possess the Royal Sadek bloodline, yet this one did not heed Mundhir’s command to stand down. The World Breaker then made clear his intent to slay the Prince. After a brief battle, this mighty warrior was slain by the group, and the Prince suddenly realised that his own family had tried to kill him. Though which one of his many brothers had given the order, and whether his father was compliant, is yet to be seen.

Not sure he could trust his own people, Mundhir then sided with the prisoners, and led them through a secret passageway. They emerged a mile away from Eblistan Citadel’s eastern wall, but found a whole regiment of City Watch waiting for them. A bloody battle ensued, as the prisoners made their last stand against impossible odds, and one by one, they start to succumb to their injuries and exhaustion.

Sitara, Mundhir’s sworn bodyguard, then appears on the scene with a company of the Prince’s soldiers. Before the attempt on his life, Mundhir had just led a successful campaign against the Elves of Nillanor, liberating the ruins of Baalor from their grasp. This campaign was not sanctioned by his father, who at the time was seeking a lasting peace with Nillanor; therefore the soldiers who served the Prince had pledged their allegiance to him, rather than the Caliph.

Sitara, after learning of the Prince’s whereabouts, leads the company of mamalukes against the City Watch, using their skill in horse archery to beat off the numerically superior force. The Prince is rescued, but before he has taken away, he demands the prisoners brought with him as payment for their service to getting him (partially) to safety.

We then fast forwards seven days, and find ourselves in the ruins of Baalor.

Mundhir has learned that the Ice Venom has done its damage, and although he has made a ‘false recovery’, his organs have been irreparably damaged and in weeks or months – he will die. To make matters worse, two of his brothers, including the Crown Prince Jazeer, are assembling Eblistan’s army for an assault on Baalor. Meanwhile, Prince Thrandel of Nillanor has regrouped his forces following Mundhir’s victory, and is likewise poised to attack the ruins.

Mundhir approaches the prisoners, gives them their freedom, but asks if they will stay and help him in the upcoming war, and to uncover the man/woman responsible for his murder.
The Lengths of posts


Steel Fist, I understand what has prompted you to speak up, because I share the same problem. I have to spend hours a night on this RP, often at my other half's expense, and usually it means me sitting here for most of my free time tending to it.

Whilst personally it's no problem for me, because I love reading the posts, and I love watching an RP of this scale grow, I can see why it's an issue for the average joe. I'm well aware that life is a hectic mofo, that waits for no man. If you feel this issue is going to become too problematic for you to handle, then I fully respect your right to leave the RP. I don't want you to though, as I quite like Shorus, but I do see where you are coming from.

The players seem wholesale opposed to a post restriction, and so I'd be an idiot to implement one. For now, posts may be as long as they need to be, and as short as they need to be.

However, as I have said, the RP is on a knife's edge regarding the story direction. If everything works the way I have planned, then we wont have 10 players walking around together, thus negating the need to read so many posts that may directly effect your character. If you can hang on until that point (after the meeting in the IC), then I think you'll be happy with the much reduced workload. More importantly, as you're the minotaur warrior with little love for stealth, you'll more than likely be serving in combat-heavy scenarios. I know you are fond of these, and I hope you stay around long enough to assist Mundhir in repulsing the impossible odds arrayed against him.
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