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    1. Taengrid 6 yrs ago

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@Bones Johnson This is interesting. I would like to jump into a roleplay somewhere and this was at the top of the list so why not?

You've got an attention grabbing intro, vague but suggesting some sort of sci-fi or sci-fi fantasy mix. The machine gods...algorithms. This is a matrix like reality? I would suggest maybe refining the concept or, as you suggest working it out with some other folks...I'll try and riff a little on what you got...

Machine Gods Created by...the CREATORS! I guess they probably were destroyed by the machines. Some time must have passed since then because the narrative suggests these 'machines' are viewed as gods by whatever survived, and something to be feared. Fair enough, something powerful enough to create a new reality and destroy what created them should be feared. Not to mention they have control over day and night. Seems like they are in full control except for these "places habitable to life are those the Gods have long since abandoned".

Why were they abandoned by the machines? Or were they forcibly removed? Someone must have figured out how to thwart these machines at some point, so much to the point that a new civilization has emerged. So...points of light of civilization in a scary machine-ruled reality. That's cool. Plenty of opportunity for adventure.

What else have you got?

"Either coming from the cosmic scrap itself, or vagrants shambling away from the Gods workshops, life ..."

Both interesting ideas, suggesting there is some sort of universal force at work divergent from the machine gods reality. Also, the vagrants shambling is very evocative. Rogue sentient robots? Maybe some refuge remnant of the creators themselves? Cool. That's two possible player races.

I'm thinking that this world is some sort of Magi-tech plane. Or maybe it's just technology sufficiently removed from knowledge that it seems like sorcery...

Anyways, I'll be around.


Hi! Going to give this a shot as it seems the most simple game to get started with. I can post a writing sample if you want? I tried to keep it pretty basic as you requested in the OP. Not sure if this is a fantasy type game or more historical so I tried to make a mixture of both, leaning towards the historical.

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