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9 yrs ago
Current Nice sunny days, better mood.
9 yrs ago
Last few days leading up to 14.01.(New year) was really hectic and tiring for me. But will try to answer everything in the next two days or so.
9 yrs ago
When someone comes into your room every 30s to ask one stupid thing to leave, and then enter once more 30s later.
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10 yrs ago
The nice bliss when you repaired your laptop after what seemed like forever.
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10 yrs ago
Studying for todays test. Will be off most of the day.
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Hello~ I am Simona/Rada/Talija/Key choose me a name you like XP

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Humhum Highvoice

Humhum blinked his eyes open, he was in his dorm room, in his nest on top of the bed.
''Hm....''
The light was quite strong, for early morning, way too strong. He turned his head to the direction of the wall clock and jumped on his feet up. He slept in so much! Stretching his arms letting the feathers, that grow over them all the way along the arms and hiding his human like palms, get into the right position, as in his sleep he mostly messed them up with turning and wriggling about. He folded the wings up so his palms and hands could move with out much problems as he run a hand thought his hair, fixing it too. He was sure one of his friends were supposed to wake him up. He stepped off the bed and noticed a figure on the floor sleeping nicely.
'' Aww, so thats what happened, mmm-mhm'' He said to himself. Kneeing beside the figure he broke his own magic. It wasnt the first time he in sleep cast the lullaby to avoid to be woken up himself. He really should work harder on his sleep singing. It was like snoring for humans, just for him it was magical songs he sung. After short apologizing to the other still somewhat sleepy friend Humhum jumped out his open window. Being on the 4th floor of the dorm had it perks for the winged person. He made a circle around the grounds watching the many new and old faces mixs about. His first time he felt quite lost back then. He chuckled looking for a place where he could land. Crowds not really offering such places.
His grumbling stomach lead him towards the food stalls. He really could take some fish, right about now.
His eyes spotted some tables and the decision was made. The male harpy started sinking and with a small thump landed on a table. Trying not to land in any food plate, he was a mannered bird. '' Sorry for landing here...mmm is there a place free to sit here too?''
THE ROLEPLAY HAS STARTED~ Wooo have fun and enjoy your self~

@Aurus
really love the choose of magic, and the examples you offered. Magic mushrooms really nice XD
Varius looks like it will be a fun dragon to have around. I can imagine him be a often visitor to human libraries.
I accept him, just you forgot to say in his compact form what is off from a normal human. And start roleplaying and having fun ^^

A firefly lighted his way between the many trees, the stars it couldnt see from the tree crowns looming over it, started dying out one by one. Retreating in front of the crystal blue morning skies. The little light swung left and right before it fly up and up. Many of the trees green blats cares the fireflies in its passing. Until it didnt meet the raising sun in front of it. A shadow disrupted the little insect of light. It was a big shadow , belonging to the most magical beings of them all who lived in this world. A dragon.
The little firefly turned around watching the fast figure growing the gap between them, flying towards the mountains. Then it fall apart, the firefly melted into the lighting rays that went to feed the woods with their shine.


A pair of dragons eyes opened far away from the little ball of light, but seeing everything it did. The owner of those eyes closed them again to yawn. The tail flickering lazily as the white dragon stretched her arms first and then her legs.
Mirazan looked around her cave she slept in. It was a nice cave to her standards. It had a big fluffy hay heap she snuggled into when asleep. On the sides of the caves were many shelves showing off jewelry stones and various items. Opposite her sleeping corner there was human made furniture. A kitchen table, several chairs and a nice mirror. Beside the mirror were her wardrobe holding mostly cloths and bags in it, all intended for her compact form, as well as some of the human money.
She looked away from it and towards the cave entrance, it was big enough for her to leave it while being in her normal form, her head dropping down on the hay, watching it.

She didnt want to stand up so early, enjoying the sleep so much more. In sleep she could watch so many dragons at once, ensuring they were all safe. Her eyes closed before the body shrunk down to size of a child.A blond girl with pale skin, eyes blue and a small sleepy smile on face. There was no time to sleep, today was a beautifully day. Many dragons were still arriving and the Aging Festival was starting today. Many more dragons already arrived. As the Grand-grandmother she couldnt just hide in her home. Taking a deep breath she sat up.
The Grand-grandmother walked towards her mirror deciding what to wear today.

This days were days of happiness for so many dragons. Some will age older in the upcoming days, feeling pride and greatness for what they are. Some would come to catch up with old friends they didnt see, talking and celebrating reunions and sharing discoveries they may have made in this wide world. There will be dragons who would court each other in this good atmosphere and many eggs may be made. Love and flirt was in the air just as much the smell of many hard working dragons.

Mirazan chuckled to herself as she decide to wear a dark blue dress with a fitting top hat, a white scarf around her neck. Getting herself a apple from the bowl on the kitchen table, as she walked out in the sunlight breathing it in with deep breaths. She could see the children fly and play around, hearing the talking of the dragons close by.
The tribe always became so overly lively in this days, many dragons with the right type of magic made plants grow faster bearing many fruits, berries and vegetables for the many mounts that needed filling. A chicken run under her dress as it was escaping a dragons child gasp. Leaving the girl shake her head at it. A sorry from the dragon thrown at her as it still hunt that white panicked bird. Such a lovely chaos, like every festival.

Something else made Mirazan happy for today, and that was the lack of humans in the surroundings of the tribe. The old magic shield would protect them but still ... nothing is perfect. She feared those creatures. Not liking how close their city actually bloomed by the tribe she cherished so much. But for now they didnt trouble them. So she let them live. Many of the dragons would go to the city to explore and satisfy their curiosity. She hoped there will not be trouble arsing from this. Sometimes even she would go for a trip, trying to ensure no one will come after them. Studying humans. Keep friends close, keep fears even closer.

Turning back to her dragon form she flapped her wings strongly raising her body off the ground. Slowly flying over the tribe. Greeting and welcoming the dragons in her passing. Mirazan knew how hard the grandpas and grandmas worked, being there for any dragon that felt the need to show respect by greeting the one stronger then him upon arriving. And beside it all helping the youngsters with their magic. She was grateful for their help just as grateful she was that she could protect the other dragons. As the dragons tribe passed under her, she wondered to herself. Everything was build by dragons in it. But still there could be seen the occasional house made by a dragon inspired by human architecture. The mixture of things, were just as board as the beliefs and ideas the dragons followed.

Soon even the grand-grandmother landed between a dragon group, greeting her old friends and enjoying the reunion times.

The days of the Aging Festival have arrived.

Chu
The man grinned as he watched a crack on a egg grow with the raising of the sun. Chu loved children and spent a lot of his day in the care of the tribes nursery and babies. Loving to tell them tails of the great love between dragons. Having fun to explain the feeling of failing of love and tease them with not telling how eggs are exactly made. Retelling tells he as a small baby listened too.

Chu was a dragon who spent a lot of his time in his compact form, preferring it over his dragon form. Which was, well to Chu words not extremely practical under the company of many extremely big dragons. And with it he had quite the curiosity for humans, under which he didnt had to fear to being stomped on by mistake. He spent lots of time under them, trying to satisfy his curiosity and finding them fascinated. Sure a few times there were close calls and he had to hide away for a while. Even so his home in the dragons tribe was a small self build home just like the humans had...well nearly Chu couldnt wrap his head around how they manged to make any of their machines work. Even less how the light-bulbs shine or the sense of all those pipes. It was really confusing him. His home was full of the human trinkets and cogs of all sizes.

'' Is it cracking?'' Chu head snapped to the side seeing another dragon who spent lots of time in the nursery.
''Yup, it may hatch on the festival, such a lucky little one. '' Chu winked to him, only to get his head ruffled in return, which made him frown. '' I wonder if the parents of the eggs will come to this festival.''
''I will check to see if they are. You can watch it in mean time no?'' Chu offered standing up and stretching himself fixing his jacket up.
''Just dont end up flirting with everything that has a tail bunny. You may end up getting sat on. ''
Chu got teased at which he made a false laugh rolling his eyes.
''Do not worry we two will make a egg, darling. My body may be small but my heart and stamina are enough for the whole tribe, including you~'' Che send just as a teasingly, a flying kiss to his friend before rushing away. Mostly to avoid a ball of water to hit him in the face, for his tease.
Searching for some of the dragons he knew to have fun, and maybe find the parents of the hatching egg on the way.
I care too but its too late over here, will post tomorrow. *yawns and uses her character as a feather pillow*

Humhum: I am not comfortable with this situation...move your head off my wing. *huffs for a bit*
Silent Resonance said
We should call it...."Totally %100 Awesome Anime" xD


Or maybe
''The 100%'' Lile there is something mysterious going on XP
But could be taken as lame too. Hm.... ''The 100% AA'' sounds like a battery tag.

Could go with something like ''100% magic'' ?
-That is a weird ass hammer, you'll have to clue me in on its uses or if it's just light and used for close combat.

me: At first I wasnt too sure how weapons would work. But reading the rp I got a few ideas. Miro tends to use the hammer in close combat. To block and parry with its hilt or to swinging it around in a circular motion. I was thinking of incorporating maybe mid ranged attacks by using the hammer as source of shock wave that would dis balance the opponent if slammed on the ground. Including the enchanting of direct hits, as in amplifying the destruction if the hammer directly hits the opponent. The down side would be that MIlos is slow compared to some other correctors, and simply prefers the close combat.

-Now onto the background section, it was a bit hard to read in terms of some sentences just sounding stiff so you may wanna try reading it aloud to work out any kinks that deal with flow and grammar. I know you mentioned you did some editing but it does need some more work, some misspellings and re-wording of sentences...

I will do it. Its so annoying to read it myself at times as I myself end up cringing to some of the things I wrote. ^^; In posts its easier, as I dont have to focus on a whole life story with 101 things, but just on a handful of scene
Thank you for giving me a chance to fix it. ^^


Then a question I had was regarding his change in demeanor after he came back from visiting the Balkans, he seems more out going which should be a good thing, why would his parents move away from the man who was helping their son? Only to have him begin to act out because of moving away in the first place? Is the parent (grandfather of your character) of the kid's parents not on good terms with whoever his kid is? (Miro's mother or father, whichever side the grandpa is on)


Me: The grandfather would be on the mothers side of the family.
And I was thinking that part from Milos perspective. In his eyes at that young age he may have felt that his parents didnt want him to be influenced by his grandpa as much as he was.
In truth it could have been several disputes, along from possible not fully approving his daughters husband in the first place, to some money problems. The father then moving with his family for a better job and on the plus side not having to deal with the extremely stubborn man. Leaving their son constructing the story in his head that it was because of him enjoying more the time with his grandfather then with his family. Of course once away they wouldnt go visit the man ever weekend, but actually prolonging the time between the visits, which only strengthened the ideas in their sons head why they moved away.

You also mentioned him having bad influences such as bad friends, would these be other bullies?

More like friends who skipped classes, stayed in the street. Thinking school is useless. Sneaking around buildings in construction phrase, and places children were not allowed at all. Dont see Milos sticking with bullies who would beat anyone up at that time. I can see him get in those years in some fights, rarely but could happen. More on the side of brawling then something seriously.

. In terms of his geographical location, I'm not sure if I missed it or not...did you mention where his grandfather lived and where he lives now?

Well, I just mentioned the region not the exact place. His grandpa would be coming from Serbia. But he would have spent his life in Japan, even now he would still live there. At some times the grandpa would go visit his home country but it wouldnt be all too often at all.
When it comes where in Japan the old man lives, anything beside Tokyo would fit. For example Osaka, etc.

But I did left the option open that if Miro's grandfather died, his last wish would be to be buried in the country he comes from. Serbia, meaning Milos could be there for some time. If the geographic fits the story. If not then Milos could just be in Japan the whole time, just in a different city.

I know he took a break to help his grandfather and he'd like to return now. Would you want him with our group as a new face (someone they know but don't work with) or someone who has been in the group but is returning?

Personally, both way could work for me. But if asked for preferences. I would say that my preference would lay in, the situation that he worked with the group before he took the leave for a year or something, and now would wish to surprise them with his returning.

And how old is the grandfather? Considering he's ill, I assume in the 90s?

Considering the status of healthcare in the roleplay, it would make sense him to be 97 years old.

Anywho, just some feedback. ^^;
No problem I love feedback and pointing out my mistakes so I can improve all around ^^
And thinking even deeper about my character.
Chu spending a lot of time under the humans, too~ He likes bringing the alcohol in tribe.

Chu: when people see something small with glowing eyes between trash cans they think its a cat not my dragon form.
Jeonbae and Chu will probably get along.Or at least have a prolonged conversation of how does a light bulb works.

The good thing I prepared the first IC post. So everything is set to start in a few hours.
Silver Fox said
Hey Key, I added two more characters in my original post. (I like keeping my characters in the same place if possible)Ones a human. So I hope they are okay, I tried coming up with interesting ideas though I admit Asters the better background xD


Like that there was a child dragon added XD

For Myrtle I like the personality and background. I can see some dragons who visit the human city that is close by be noticed by her. Maybe one is fixing the bandanna that hide their dragon features better. Either then confronting or stalking them back to the dragon tribe would be fitting.
Its a promising thing. *nod nod*

@Pathfinder
And Harena is accepted too.
maybe you are more influenced with the american folks? ^^
@tchtkrmkc
*giggles and high-fives* yay I am not the only one who used the metric system XD
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