The Patriarch Member

Simon gave a smile and he blew another massive bubble of gum and quickly floated up into the air. He made the giant bubble fly towards the bank at a fairly quick rate. Simon was wondering how the civilians were in this whole mess, he hoped that none of them were killed. Once the bank came into sight, he made the bubble descend towards the ground and touched down making the bubble disappear. Simon heard the robber gives a shout. "OH SHIT! WE GOT A MASK HERE!" one of them shouted loudly and Simon smiled. "The Candy King is here bitches! And I brought sweets for everyone!" he called out and he made several python sized gummy worms smash through the windows and wrap around the robbers guns and ripped them out of their hands to protect the civilians from being hurt. He then created a dozen jawbreakers and had them fire off at the criminals as incredibly fast moving projectiles.

> > I'm going to point out flaws in your criticism. First of all he's B rank, not A rank and secondly, the other character's powers are way above my character's reflexes. Also about the supercomputer, I'll change it around, but I'm going to make it like a smartphone since that technology is very common today. Also what's wrong with him being smart? Him being smart makes perfect sense with his backstory. I'm not trying to start an argument but I have to almost completely disagree with your criticisms > > Those are just guidelines so people have a basic understanding of the character's ranking. It *does* not mean that just because you have a character who only uses elemental powers they instantly become a B-rank. If your character could just, for example, use energy to create powers then I would regard that as a B-Rank but the fact that he can change these energy constructs to other elements that drags it up to an A-rank. > > The intelligence I don't particularly mind but I'm currently basing this off our intelligent characters (mainly Ruby and Cedric) who aren't the best in terms of combat but make up for it with intelligence. I'll let that one slip but I have problems with the above powers. Okay I edited his CS so he doesn't have the ability to change the temperature of the construct.

> > Damn this thing does still exist. > > > > Hey guys, I'm not sure I recognize any of your usernames but I thought I'd pop in and say hello in case there were people here I knew. I was part of a gifted RP hosted on the MC forums, but had to leave when I wasn't ready to migrate sites. > > > > So anyone I know still here? How are you all :)? > > Huh? Did Stephen take this from the MC forums to here? The more you know! Feel free to hop in if you want to! > > > Can I have a link to the CS? I would like to see the character's power > > [enter link description here](http://www.roleplayerguild.com/topics/58944/posts/ooc?page=60#post-2304727) > > It's not just that - first of all, he's an A rank, secondly in his equipment it says he has a gauntlet with a supercomputer! Technology isn't that far ahead, unfortunately! Also, the fact that he can add elemental powers to an already powerful character is causing him to slip over the OP line. Fix that and possibly make it less implied that he's super-intelligent and it should be ok! I'm going to point out flaws in your criticism. First of all he's B rank, not A rank and secondly, the other character's powers are way above my character's reflexes. Also about the supercomputer, I'll change it around, but I'm going to make it like a smartphone since that technology is very common today. Also what's wrong with him being smart? Him being smart makes perfect sense with his backstory. I'm not trying to start an argument but I have to almost completely disagree with your criticisms

Simon fell a good distance towards the ground and he would have been seriously injured had he not created a giant gummy bear which cushioned his fall. He made the gummy bear disappear and Simon got up off of the ground. "Ever heard of a distraction? No one knows about our team, for all the know I'm just acting on my own and wouldn't just take off out of fear, and watch the insults, don't be chocolate ass cream" he said rolling his eyes and two jawbreakers appeared above his head and began rolling. "So can we get going? I want some action" he said.

> By the way, Patriarch, upon looking at your CS I'm going to request you to take the enhanced reflexes off if as we have a Meta with that power alone (QuietThinker). Everything else is alright but make sure not to keep your character in order! Can I have a link to the CS? I would like to see the character's power

is Bishop okay to use?

> > > What I mean is, he was put through semi-formal military training as a child. > > > > i did that so I could give a good explanation for is great amount of skills, it takes years to learn martial arts in an incredible way as well as train your body to be basically perfect as well as having a great intellect. > > > > did any of you catch the Pulp Fiction magazine reference with Adam? > > Nope. And, yeah, I get ya. It still makes him an ex-child soldier, though. actually he's not an ex child soldier, he didn't start doing government missions until he was eighteen, so he basically went to a much tougher and secret military school for most of his childhood.

Simon chuckled when he heard that Josh had forgotten his things, looks like I'm not the only one who gets on our leaders' nerves, and he gave a wink in Josh's direction. When he heard that they were going to enter the bank from the roof, Simon eyes went wide with excitement, this would mean that he could show off his ability to fly. He made a stick of gum appear in his hand and put it in his mouth and began chewing it. After about a moment he then blew out a massive bubble that was several times bigger than he was and once it became big enough he took the gun out of his mouth and he held onto the giant bubble like a balloon. It then began to lift him up into the air like a hot air balloon. "I told you guys I could fly!" he said called down to them as he slowly began to rise into the air. He could pick up the pace but he didn't want to lose his teammates and made sure to not fly too high or too fast.

> What I mean is, he was put through semi-formal military training as a child. i did that so I could give a good explanation for is great amount of skills, it takes years to learn martial arts in an incredible way as well as train your body to be basically perfect as well as having a great intellect. did any of you catch the Pulp Fiction magazine reference with Adam?

it sucks that there are no hiders