The Patriarch Member

I edited my CS, Morggo can only bond with one of his ancestors' spirits right now, but he will learn more as he gets stronger.

> I'm gonna throw in my own 2 pence into this is stating that to further prevent that soul'spirit skill from getting to OP'd that it should strain the body of his char also as he would be using a forgein soul/spirit and the longer it's used the more strain his body goes through and the srain would weaken his body till he's had enough time to recover, and example would be 1 minute would = maybe 2-5 minutes to recover with repeated use above maybe 3 or 4 times a day would put him into the hospital from the strain put on his body as i think summoning up a soul'spirit from the pure world {The naruto verse heaven/afterlife} would tax their chakra but you also got to take into the shinigami also as i'm sure he/she/it wouldn't take to kindly to such a clan able to summon beings even if only from their past family from it's domain after all it is the GOD OF DEATH so you have to take into limits that the Shinigami would also put onto such a clan such as possible eternal pain in Yami {Shinto version of hell} what are you talking about? the shinigami is a technique, never has it appeared as anything else than a technique. My character's spirit bond technique requires a lot of chakra and if he is not in harmony with the spirit then it becomes hard to control, that means if he gets into an argument with the spirit then the technique will falter and he will be vulnerable.

Adam knew that the super villain would not surrender, most of them never did and like always he would have to show even more force take this kind of criminal. He was surprised to see that Fake Angel could create hard-light constructs in a manner similar to how made his weapons with energy. He didn't have time to really look at the exact detail of the constructs because Fallen Angel launched several of them in his direction. The moment he saw the hard-light constructs, he made his gun disappear and create two energy sabers for one in each hand. Adam then activated his jetboots and they propelled him out of the way of the constructs and he defended a few more thanks to his duel wielding. But suddenly there was an explosion as one of the metahumans fighting against Fake Angel created a powerful explosion which was close enough to knock him to the ground. He was very annoyed and wondered what the hero was thing to use such a dangerous attack. Adam turned his attention back on Fake Angel and he went on the attack, coming at the villain with his wielding energy weapons.

> > Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits. > > You said "spirits of all kinds" in your CS. This would include the ghosts of, say, the Kage. You didn't specify, and it would be a bit ridiculous if you were to use their power in combat. Also, please provide proof as to where exactly spirits are proven as real in the series. The Bijuu are a kind of spirit. Demons are a type of spirit, and many characters have met the spirits of dead acquaintances like how Kakashi met his father when he was dead. Also the fact that there are techniques that can resurrect the dead prove that there are human spirits.

WIP Name: Gary Leeds Alias(optional): Jersey Devil Age: Personality: Appearance:  Backstory: Powers: Weaknesses: Equipment: Other:

> Jonin: Uchiha (Jerin) > > Genin: Nagato (Demon Shinobi), Ranko (Hebigami), Dango (FVGT) > > --------------------- > > Jonin: Aburame (G3njii) > > Genin: Morggo (Patri) (Pending Acceptance), Angelo (Jangel13), Nayto (Renny) > > --------------------- > > Jonin: Nara (Demon Shinobi > > Genin: Genji (G3njii), Akira (Slendy), Raima (Masaki) > > --------------------- > > > WIP > > > > Appearance > > > >  > > > > Name: Morggo Razuiki > > > > Age: 13 > > > > Gender: male > > > > Rank: Genin > > > > Skills: fighting and weaponry > > > > Specialty: taijutsu and ninjutsu > > > > Jutsu: He has learned all of the academy jutsu > > > > Ghost Release: Ghost Palm > > > > effect: Morggo summons large spectral hands that hits his opponents with incredible force. > > > > Rank: C > > > > Ghost Release: Spirit Clone > > > > effect: Morggo creates a spiritual clone of himself that can interact physically or non-physically > > depending on how the technique is performed. He uses this technique for deception as well as surprise attacks. > > > > rank: C > > > > Ghost Release: Spirit Bond > > > > effect: This technique allows Morggo to summon a spirit and bond with it thus allowing him to share its mind and knowledge with his. When he bonded with the spirit, he can draw upon its chakra and use its abilities and skills. This technique takes up a lot of chakra and requires almost perfect unity between the host and spirit to work properly. > > > > Rank: A > > > > > > Equipment: > > he uses [boomerangs](http://www.crystalinks.com/boomerangset.jpg) as his main weapon and the standard ninja tools as his secondary weapons. Using boomerangs is something that is unique to the Razuki clan and by charging the weapon with his chakra he can make it fly farther and faster as well make it sharper. He keeps his boomerangs on sash. > > > > Kekkei Genkai: > > > > Ghost Release: This is the bloodline technique of the Razuki which allows them to manipulate spiritual chakra and see on the spiritual planes. Ghost Release allows the Razuki to summon spirits of all kinds to aid them in battle in several different ways. One of the most common abilities that Ghost release grants to users is the ability known as Ghost Hands which allows the user to move objects with spiritual chakra. > > > > Other Clan Traits: all members of the Razuki clan are mediums that can see and communicate with all kinds of spirits. The clan has a very strong affinity for spiritual types of chakra and very good at letting chakra flow through their bodies. The Razuki are very wise and can be very tenacious. > > > > Personality: Morggo is strange in many ways, he can be very serious at one point and then funny at another. He has very strange senses of humor and sometimes has a knack for talking about dead things and will randomly talk to a ghost out loud while people are watching, which makes him looks even more stranger. H likes to make jokes and is very tenacious which is fitting for his clan, and he is also wise. He and his clan follow a code that their ancestors made centuries ago, it is known as the Wisdom of The Ancestors. > > > > The code encourages the clan to pair their power with wisdom to help them make the proper choices and to not blindly charge into things. For the most part Morggo has learned this code, but he can be a hothead especially when someone is threatening his friends. He is incredible loyal and will never abandon his comrades and he always sticks up for his friends. He dreams of becoming a great ninja so that all can see how great the Razuki clan truly is. > > > > History: {I don't need much. Just a little something. Like a paragraph.} > > > > Other: he loves chocolate milk and if anyone causes his milk to spill then he will go into an intense rage and will try to beat up whoever was responsible for spilling his chocolate milk. His favorite food is chicken fried rice. > > There are a bunch of things that I need to go over with you. > > 1) Chakra is comprised of Physical and Spiritual energy. Essentially all chakra is spiritual. Even Sage Jutsu chakra which is chakra but just adds nature energy. There are other non-canon energy, but not much like Spiritual chakra as you called it. Well... Aside from Dark chakra anyway. So I'd say the best thing is for you to say that your clan's Kekkei Genkai is a dojutsu combined with an affinity to use a special release IE the ghost release. > > 2) I'm pretty sure there are not Ghosts in Naruto. Souls are real. So yeah, you could draw on the soul of someone who has yet to pass on. But no canon characters without permission. Okay Shaman King? >_> > > 3) Maybe instead of those boomerangs use something like [this](http://img2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20141122212537/arrow/images/7/7c/Boomerang.png) since the one I showed you looks like it could be made of the material used to make the [chakra blades](http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_Blades). > > 4) Also maybe revise the spirit clones... They either have physical form or they don't... It can't really be both otherwise it's be two different techniques. Like clone jutsu and shadow clone jutsu. > > 5) Try to finish the edits and the history quickly though so I can accept you lol XD > > > Can I join, even though I barely know about Naruto lol ? > > Sorry, but at this point I won't be accepting others. I think there are enough players as is and I just asked someone to drop after all TT__TT > > I would really like to keep the boomerangs, I just think they're cool and an interesting addition to Naruto. Also spirits do exist in Naruto and Morggo's technique is used to summon his ancestors or non human spirits.

Is the fight happening outside or in a building?

Name: Simon Strange Alias: Candy King Age: 15 Gender: male Skills/Powers: Candy manipulation: Simon has the ability to create and control candy of any kind, he can even change their size and power depending on how much energy he puts into it. He normally uses specific kinds of candy for specific situations, if he needs to restrain an enemy then he will create giant lickerish or gummy worms to ensnare them or have them stuck by large amounts of gooey chewing gum. For offensive attacks he uses hard candy of varying size depending on how he wants to attack. He can fly by creating a giant floating bubble of gum which he can hang on to as he wills it to where he wants to go. Equipment: he has a sword that has blade made of lollipop that he creates using his power. Simon also has a whip made of gummy candy and sharp disks made of hard candy. His weapons' strength is determined by how power he puts into. Personality: Simon is funny and has a carefree personality. He is full of fun and tries to be nice to people he believes deserve it. Simon hates people who hurt the innocent and will take it to the bad guys hard if they begin killing people. He loves candy and was incredibly happy when his powers developed and he could create and manipulate candy. Weakness: vegetables are like his kryptonite, although it doesn't physically weaken him it will temporarily take away his powers if he is close vicinity of for too long. Using his abilities requires energy and if he uses them for too long then he will begin to feel fatigue. History: Simon Strange was born in the Bronx borough of New York and from the day he could, he always loved candy. His parents tried to get him to eat proper food, but it was hard and he always had a secret stash of candy. Eventually he was in school and a lot of kids thought of his antics are being weird and he would sometimes get picked on. But he always tried to keep a positive personality. He fell in love with the movie Willy Wonka and The Chocolate Factory, and had dreams of being a candyman in his own right. His dream came true when his powers manifested and he could create and manipulate candy. He wondered what he would do with his powers and that's when he got the idea to become a superhero. He made his costume and named himself Candy King. He now is fighting crime in the city and trying to keep the innocent safe. Appearance: He is five feet and nine inches tall with bright red hair. His costume is a green long-sleeved shirt and blue pants. He has hard candy plated armor that has on his upper torso. on the chest of his armor is the picture of a red lollipop with the letters 'CK' in the circle. Simon also wears a a red cape with 'CK' on it in golden yellow. CK is the initials for Candy King. Other: "United"

oops, sorry

He was starting to get almost bored standing on the top of a building to make sure there was no sign of criminal activity from metahumans, then the alarm on his gauntlet went off which meant that there was trouble. He pressed on the screen icon to answer the alert. "I have gotten your alert, report?" Adam asked. "Agent Weapon Master, we are receiving information about a conflict going on at the ruins of a brothel, underneath that brothel is an FBI safe-house which has come under attack from battle drones. Your orders are to engage any hostile target that is attacking the safe-house and eliminate them if necessary. Stop them at all costs, command out" the voice coming out of his device said and then the communication ended. On the screen of his gauntlet were GPS directions to the brothel and he was glad to see that it wasn't far from where he was. "Surrender now or I will be forced to use deadly force scum" he said to Fake Angel in a commanding voice. He took deep breath and was ready for action. He began to use his excellent parkour skills to leap from the roof of one building to another showing incredible athleticism and acrobatics. It felt good to try out his agility in a non-artificial environment and he liked the feel of the night air blowing by him as he ran. Not long after he started running the brothel came into view, it was a ruin and even from where he was on top of a building he could almost see and hear a conflict going on from within. He jumped from the building and used his rocket boots to slow his descent and landed smoothly. He created a glowing blue energy saber which was in the shape of pirate sword, and he quickly entered the building. Adam heard the sound of a conflict and he ran towards the sounds. He soon came upon several metahumans fighting as well as the battle drones. Adam recognized a couple and he decided to attack Fake Angel. He created an energy pistol and began firing energy bullets at the metahuman. Unlike real bullets, Adam made these energy bullets non-lethal to see if he could stop this villain without killing him, but they would still pack a powerful punch and send him stumbling back for several feet if they hit.