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um...@grin? Marielle's clothing...



The only thing that' outfits defending her from is ... Well nothing! I mean... it's so distasteful and spitefully revealing that its... well just... ew... Good luck blocking a sword with two thin straps of cloth!

*Shivers* Going to need some mind bleach... She Nasteh! Just my personal opinion!

Wooo! So cannot wait to kick this off! XD

Going to be a pretty awesome roleplay I hope!
Easy the child would the child of an angel and a Djinn of your choice. Did you have one of the species of Djinn in mind?


My app good now?
SORRY! i was busy with college! Again, sorry for the pessimism, I have a hard time taking critisism at first, ignore my salty kiddyness! XD @themerlinhawk!

So, I need to make her mother a cambrion, who was born between a demon and a cambrion, which made Lux a Chaos Scared

As for gods, im sorry, I thought an item to channel the magic could mean a weapon or something of the sort, and I will have no problems with her having relations with the Air or Storm god/goddess/etc. Could you please private message me on how I could edit my characters bio to relate to this? Or should I just put into the gods section that she has met them, or something?

Also, is her abilities too weak for her Will? Should I add more? Improve upon them? Could use your assistance.

EDIT: Added the part about her mother being a cambrion with a demon and cambrion parent which makes lux Chaos Scared, I also added to the gods section that she has relation to the lady of air, though, it's pretty blank beyond that, I didn't exactly know what to write, if you need me to write more, I will, if you help XD

DOUBLE EDIT: Added some themes to the application in the form of Battle and Normal theme, just for a little bit of fun.
Really quick. SO. A Demon. Is anything born of TWO demon parents. A Cambrion, is anything born of ONE demon parent and something else. Even if the other parent is a Cambrion or a Chaos scarred, the child is a Cambrion if it has ONE demon parent (unless the other parent is an Angel but don't ask). A child is a Chaos scarred if ONE of its parents is a Cambrion OR a Chaos scarred. So you can have Chaos scarred orcs, chaos scarred humans, etc. But you are a Cambrion (its actually a technical race) if you have ONE demonic parent. Same for the other two races like this. Angels, and Devils


Oooh okay.

Guess my apps totaly poinless then, sorry for wasting your time.
@The_written_John Well if their mother is a demon I would think that their mother is a first generation demon, her children would be second generation demons, and Lux's children would be third generation demons (unless their father was a 1st gen) which would make her children chaos scarred.

Although, of course, this is mostly a cosmetic discussion and doesn't really effect the character, I was just mentioning it.

(Edit: I haven't read your full history, so I wouldn't say it was pointless, if the chaos scarred part was important I'm sure there's some adjustment that could be done D: )


Suppose il just have to put lux down to potent will... and race as cabi-whatever Sigh... :[ now i feel less enthusiastic ^^
@The_written_John This RP isn't based on religious canon, a cambion isn't the child of a succubus in Galendar they're just a second generation demon. My character is a cambion, their father is a pure demon and their mother is another cambion.


Well whatever, the races list says second generation, i dont know if lux classifies as second generation... Cuz tecnically you could apply that to all demon born.

Edit: seriously? So i guess my entire app was pointless then? Dammit..
@The_written_John I don't think her Greater Will is represented in her abilities, she doesn't seem much stronger than Abrasax and he has Potent Will.

So you might want to reduce it to Potent, or upgrade the scope of her abilities. Also, if her mother was a "demon" and not a "cambion" then I think she would end up a cambion instead of a chaos scarred.


Nnnooo, id prefer her as chaos scared thank you, her mothr isnt some form of succubi, which is what makes a cambion (succbubi and human), so cambion she is not. And i dont think she classifiess as second generation? Either way, rather keep her as she is.

And if i need to improve or advance her abilities, so be it, i didnt know what was too much, so il add to that in the morning.
What're your thoughts on Lux, guys/gals?
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