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Nah, I think a relatively recent incident would be better. The Sauru'u would probably serve better, since I was thinking of it being about 200 or so years ago, which fits with the emergence of the Sauru'u. Though perhaps even 15 is too recent; we could go 50 or so years ago.

And also, quick question. {Would anyone object to actual dialogue from Rimworlders being in braces like this instead of parentheses? Just as kind of differentiate them on account of their language being pretty much unrepeatable by most species (and vice versa). I may have forgotten to mention it, but their voices kind of sound like the piping of a woodwind instrument.}
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Alright, how bout something along the lines of this. 5 years ago, the Commonwealth sent a fleet task group to one of the Rimworlds with the intent of convincing or coercing it to join the Commonwealth. However, they severely misunderstood The Rim as a whole, and when a sizeable Rim fleet showed up a few days later, the Commonwealth forces backed down.

Something like that. Timeline is also flexible.


Well it wouldn't do much good when it comes to providing a reason why the Rim would become centralized, since I imagined that happening longer ago than that. But I can just have an invasion by the Sauru'u provide impetuous for that. I do like your idea though; it sets up some possible conflict and distrust between our nations. Plus I find it amusing that a more centralized state would pop in and so badly misunderstand how the governance of the Rim worked that they assumed trying to convince some Rimworlds to defect wouldn't provoke a sizable military response. Though 5 years seems a tad recent; maybe 10 or 15?
Hmmm, well to be honest they'd both work. So why not both? The Rimworlders would despise the idea of joining an organization like the Commonwealth (even without realizing the drawbacks of them not being citizens they'd hate for how controlling it is) and the Sauru'u, well, being invaded isn't exactly something anyone desires.

How old are the Sauru'u, though? Just to get out a rough timeline; since the conflicts between the Sauru'u and Commonwealth with the Rim don't necessarily need to be around the same time.
Sweet. So does anyone want to have any kind of shared history? I was planning on there being a war or invasion or something like that in the past that lead to their relatively centralized (by Rimworlder standards) government they have now.
@TheSovereignGrave Post it up here first, and then myself or Duck will give it a review.


Alright, here it is.

I've been looking at this RP for a while, but I didn't want to say anything until I had an NS done. Well, I do (at least mostly; just have to finish the History section) and I was wondering if I should post it here in the OOC first to be looked at or just stick it in the Character page.
Sorry I haven't been online much or gotten a post up yet. This past week has just been kind of bad for RPing, between having stuff I needed to do and feeling sick almost all week. But I'm feeling better, so I'll get a post up as soon as I can. Probably not tomorrow, since I'll probably be working, but after that I'll be great.
Yeah, I'm gonna be kind of busy this weekend as well. I had my birthday this week, and we're celebrating it this weekend.
EDIT: Nevermind, there is no thing.
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