Valiance

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whizzball1 said
It's... Not... Working... *her eyes light up, and she adds harmonised order to the mix. Finally, with their combined power, the universe rights itself, and Ruby falls to her knees exhaustedly* We... We did it.

Awesome! Ha!

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Legend said
No, Supernovas is just as valid.Although I think that pre-RPG it wouldn't be, but post-ifunny it is. At least to me.

Supernovae sounds cooler though, so supernovae.

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Legend said
Ridge, Ruby. Support.*Giant sparks fly out of my hands and start to add to the dimensional structural integrity*

*Sets a solid stance and helps out, digging my feet into the ground*
I'm here for ya.

souleaterfan320 said
*patiently in the shadows* harlock watches*heh. that guy with the red energy is a funny one.*pays attention* huh, this guy seems powerful.

*From next to you*
Darn right. On both accounts.

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Legend said
No, not at all. And a hundred supernovas?

*Supernovae. But yeah, not that powerful in the grand scheme of things.

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Legend said
Wait, you're a fan of first person too?

It depends. It's just that third person doesn't work with Percy Jackson at all.

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Legend said
Boooo! Weak!! Step it up, Riggidy.

More than what you're doing, Tach!

whizzball1 said
*he's a Celestia-sized alicorn, about as tall as Techi* Do you see me as some kind of giant? There must be some problem with your vision. Let me fix that. *her eyes suddenly become extremely blurry, and she has bad depth perception*-Svár- Ooh, that's a new feeling. Let me add that to my list. Would you like to try? *applies the feeling not to the illusion, but to the source: Ridge*

*The illusion seem unfazed, and he pulls out a red ball of energy and shoves it up your nostril, and the energy instantly travels into your skull then detonates with the force of a hundred supernovae*

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whizzball1 said
Both of you.*starts chuckling*

*When he starts chuckling, he instantly feels as though his uvula just got hit by fifty trains at full speed*

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Legend said
Mmmmaaaaayyyybe. The plot is weak, the character development is slow, the situational imagery isn't locked in, and worst of all, it's in third person.

I agree with all that except the plot thing. The plot is decent, but I'm not saying it couldn't be better.

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whizzball1 said
*the one on Svár's back falls through him and then halfway into the ground, and Ridge's face is suddenly at the end of the field, quite far away* *has a strong British accent* Really, now. Is that the best you've got? I expected more, truly. I guess I was wrong.-Ruby- *while he's speaking* Attack, now. I've already got the spell ready.

*The face launched across the field is literally only a translucent face, and the one lauched through the ground disappears almost instantly. The face floats back up to him*
Look mom! No hands!

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Legend said
It kinda sucks. The second series is still inferior.

It's alright. Better than no more Percy Jackson at all.