VarionusNW

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sorry, i have been distracted by...things...

I have a premise, but need some help developing a plot

I would like to expand on your Idea, El_Tigre. Lets say the RP takes place in a city (I will refer to this city as city X) City X happens to be a sort of hub for paladins, containing a large number of them, while the shades are spread thin. Over time, though, the shades began to group up, eventually forming a sort of reincarnating gang within City X, which is a problem for Paladins.

So the bulk of the RP would be the shabbily structured gang of shades against the tight-knit community of paladins within City X. Of course, the goal of the shades is to rid themselves of the paladins, so they can live their eternities of crime and chaos in "Peace"

also, it would be cool if we could play as the reincarnated forms of real criminals. (OBVIOUS THING IS OBVIOUS)

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my cards (will have char 1 soon)

I AM TIERED

Nimble Minnow
Level 2
Water
Fish/effect
ATK 200| DEF 100
If this card is in your graveyard, you can shuffle it into the deck and special summon 2 level 3 or lower "Nimble" monsters from your hand or graveyard, shuffle them into the deck during the end phase.

Nimble jelly
Level 3
Water
Fish/tuner/effect
ATK 400| DEF 100
This card can be treated a level 2 monster for synchro or XYZ summons.
When this card is sent from the deck or field to the graveyard, you can discard 1 card to target 1 fish-type monster in your graveyard, special summon both this card and the targeted monster from your graveyard. You can only use this effect of "nimble jelly" once per turn. you can only synchro summon using "nimble jelly" as a synchro material monster once per turn.

Nimble swordfish
Rank 2
water
Fish/XYZ/Effect
1000/100
2 or more (Max. 5) level 2 fish-type monsters
This card gains 500 attack for each XYZ Material attached to it. If this card would be destroyed by battle or by card effect, you can detach 1 XYZ material from this card instead.

Nimble Boxfish
Rank 2
water
fish/XYZ/effect
400/100
2 or more (max. 5) level 2 fish-type monsters
If this card battles an opponent's monster, you can detach 1 XYZ material at the start of the damage step, destroy the opponents monster. This card gains 500 attack each time an XYZ material is detached from this card.

Nimble Stark fish (might just use shark)
level 5
water
fish/synchro/effect
2000/100
1 fish-type tuner + 1 or more non-tuner monsters.
This card gains 200 attack each time a fish-type monster is sent to your graveyard.

Hard Reset
normal spell
Pay 1000 life points, and choose 1 card type (spell, trap, or monster) and shuffle all cards in both players graveyards, of the chosen type, into the decks.

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ok i can allow you to keep both effects of diebefly with some changes. Reduce the attack reduction to X100, and limit the times it can get the effect off. If it is just "Sent to the graveyard" that means your guaranteed to get the effect off whenever you put it on the field. Most cards go by when they are destroyed, but since your playing Lswarms it might be best to have it be "when this card is tributed for the summon of an Lswarm monster" which would probably make the most sense.

I will have to put up my character sheets later tonight and set up the IC.

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I am on a tablet right now, but once my brother stops playing majoras mask I will start up an IC

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Krein... I love you and all, but your cards.. too much... too much.. OP

Termite. You know why. that is two turns of useless backrow and it is a -1 card zone. that is mass disadvantage.

the 2nd abyss effect is pretty OP. somehow limit it to once or something.

influence and diebefly also seem pretty OP.

I am half asleep right now, and a bit annoyed by the constant crazy cards from you, so no huge explanations, or edits to cards.

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alright, krein your good, but i am banning Exciton. My own character sheet will be up in the first post later, and after that I will sit in a corner and cry for no reason.

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ok those custom cards. HOLY FUCKING GOD WTF THATS OP. my brain hurts of the OP-ness (say that [not a] word out loud a few times)

Abyss of infestation: 500 atk gain? with an extra bit of archetype synergy, oh and a recycle effect, in exchange for your "Normal draw during your draw phase" (correct phrasing)

all of the steelswarms you have use effects that benefit from the extra synergy (even if it is just more targets for tributing)
this makes the rest of it a bit crazy to me. I have never played Lswarms, but with any deck giving all of your monsters a plus 500 atk and the ability to get them back from your grave. Unless you can show me a legit reason this isn't OP, put some sort of cost/ lower the benefit.

Goliath....holy fuck that's OP you have to tribute 3 monsters to summon it? no big deal, your deck is basically built to get this thing out, with the cluster and whatnot.
Imagine this thing. if you have that field spell, you get a board wipe, otherwise it is a once per turn Harpies feather duster/Raigeki. The attack is outrageous, no matter how you look at it. the best 3 level (4 or lower) XYZ monsters have at most 3950 atk (normal monster) the other, 2800 with a reasonable effect that is not OP, given its cost and stats.

Goliath needs not just an effect change, but a stat reduction.

Goliath but more fair

Level 10

This card must first me normal summoned by tributing 3 "steelswarm" monsters you control. If you control a face up "Abyss of infestation" this cards normal summon cannot be negated. If this card is normal summoned while "Abyss of infestation" is on the field, you can pay 1000 life points, destroy all other cards on the field. You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn this card is summoned.
Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 card in your hand, then activate the following effect that corresponds to the card-type of the removed from play card.

Spell: Destroy all face-up spell and trap cards on the field.
Trap: Destroy all set spell and trap cards on the field.
Monster: Destroy all face-up monsters on the field, except this card.

This card cannot attack the turn this effect of " Goliath, the first steelswarm" is activated. You can only control 1 "Goliath, the first steelswarm"
2900/0

again, i dont play lswarms, so i dont know if that would even work, but given the other cards, this should be fine, atleast stat-wise.

I was going to complain about clusters effect (defense is kind of high) but i see with the obvious intention for tributing it is kind of needed. though i do think it needs some sort of a small cost.

And done. That took me forever to write up...

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I think it is fine.

Sword Art Online

Who hasn't heard of it. The anime got over-hyped, in reality it is sub-par in the line of VR Game animes, but the concept is nice. SAO focused so much on fighting that they didn't look at stuff like government/order, like Log Horizon and other great animes.