VarionusNW

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Lowkey and Kaben, I would like to address your characters. Lowkey, your CS is not finished, please correct the stuff about the gun (AKA, remove it), and write the emotional bond in. Kaben, your weapon is to OP, I mean, lemme just copy and paste this here:

The spear has two functions, depending on how it is used.The first, close quarter attack that strikes a fatal blow that always pierces the opponent's heart and ruins their body from within with its thousand iron thorns. The second function, is activated when thrown. Emily leaps into the air and pours her energy into the throw, launching the spear at the intended target,. Unlike the first function, it will not always hit the opponents heart, but instead seemingly split itself into multiple spearheads and bombard a wide area for massive destruction. However, once thrown, Emily will barely be able to stand since all her energy has gone into the throw.

I am not a fan of "Hey my weapon can instantly kill anything, but it makes me weak afterword" especially the "Always pierces the opponent's heart and ruins their body from within with its thousand iron thorns" That is OP as fuck. You don't even list a downside, but that's not the problem, the problem is that your character doesn't even need any skill/training to attack with this thing, because it always hits the heart, and then murders them with stuff. It's like you don't even want to try. I am not going to mention the second function, since it is equally OP (or maybe even more so)

Remember: I said not to make it so your character is a 1 man(or woman) army, but half of a team that works well (or not so well) together.

"Or not so well" does not mean that 1 of them undermines the other (which your character clearly does), so please edit your character's weapon to make it not OP.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Stern, yea, Bricklayer is a bit OP, it's a hammer that allows you to use what is essentially earth magic.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Okay your CS is quite good

I was going to address some problems, but once I looked at it better, the CS is not bad, I mean, I said I didn't like the "I already have magicz" history, but here it might work, the point at which she leaves home would obviously leave an opportunity for a partner. Yea, that seems pretty good.

Let's write a story

I like this, but you've already got 4 people. do you happen to have room for one more?

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Cool story bros.

Hey, Parser, Just looked at your character, the closest thing to sleep spells is illusionary magic, which is technically storm magic, since it would probably mess with the brain in some way.

Rance your character is pretty good ATM, so get yourself a friend.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

I am not saying you can't quote, I am saying that you, Lowkey, posted 3 times on this page, each time, it was a quote and 1-4 words. Quoting something and saying "That!" is a kind of useless.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Lowkey, would you mind not cluttering the already cluttered OOC by quoting every single post.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

What.. I didn't say nothin.

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Stern is now my Co-GM. Well Trial Co-GM at best.
There is now an edit for the CS's, and a ton of new shit under the "Stuff you should know" hider. GO READ IT. IT IS THREE HOURS OF MY LIFE, WASTED.

I will make a list of accepted and denied chars once everyone switches over to the new char sheet. Sorry about that guys, I didn't plan to go super crazy with this RP, I didn't expect it to have so much interest. THIS IS MY MOST POPULAR RP YET!

School for Mages and Knights (pair RP) Drama! Fighting! and other stuff!

Alright, I have read through the CS's and received your cries. I was going to edit the CS yesterday, but I never got time to, so thank you for complaining about it (I am being sarcastic here) I will also be detailing the magic system (as it is obvious I need to) as well as put some limiting factors on the artifacts/familiars. Oh, Familiars are going to be optional now. I think I put them in to compensate for the knight getting a weapon, obviously that didn't work.

Note: Please, don't design your character as a walking tank with a weapon that can obliterate foes without even needing a partner to cast spells.