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SaraRPs said
It was very disrespectful I believe for you just to completely disregard my characters actions and literally push her to the side and keep going.


what are you talking about? I said in my post that her gripped cooled down his hand and he simply made it hotter and if you don't realize, oil is very slippery so is ice, so he slipped out of his grasp.
Gisk said
That actually doesn't necessarily follow, logically. I was under the impression that his power the secretion of a flammable oil. While I can see your brilliant association of "oil" and "fire" they aren't actually the same thing, so you're giving your character two powers.Dude.... pot calling kettle black. You are, far and away, the absolute worst offender for an OP character in this RP. One of the worst I've ever seen. Your character's power isn't necessarily OP in and of itself, it's just that every time anyone says anything about how they might fight your character you seem to think that you always have a solution, even if you have to make up new powers or remove weaknesses. You can't just say "Yeah, I guess your character could get one over on mine, let's hope they never fight!" You always have to be "Um, no, actually, Jack's power makes him better because of X." You're refusing to accept that Jack's power doesn't win every time. Not once has anyone said something about a hypothetical fight, and you just left it or conceded that your character would come off worse. Every time you had to argue about how Jake would win. If your character's like that... well he's an asshole, but what the fuck ever, but you don't need to do it here in OOC as well.


do you understand the concepts of trash talking? When someone makes a threat to spear Jack he's going to make a threat of his own, I don't think I should sabotage his character for the sake of letting punk style characters get away with bad mouthing other characters. Also I would expect the heroes to not get into a serious fight with each other since we are on the same team, when Jack makes a claim that doesn't instantly mean it will happen that way. Also I edited some of his powers and toned them down.
where is everyone?
Famotill said
Okay, so I'm just going to post some of the limitations I presented to Yog, and see if they make sense to him and everyone else, so we can work this out before it even becomes a problem:">This is one power that I think could be upgraded later, but you say that Jack can melt metal. This is of course certainly possible, but metal is a huge heat conductor. When it absorbs heat it immediately disperses the heat throughout. This would mean that Jack would have to apply his heat to small areas holding it there so as the area may reach it's ignition temperature. This along with surface area and exposure to air is why pots on a stove don't burn when you're cooking. A pot alone can handle at least over temperatures of 375 degrees Fahrenheit (190 Celsius) as this is the lowest average temperature of a stove on high. In order for Jack to even soften steel, a metal used commonly in architecture, he'd be using temperatures of around 1000 degrees Fahrenheit (538 Celsius), and to melt it would be a whopping 2,500 degrees Fahrenheit. I think that for now, Jack's flames should be at a much lower range, 450 would be your best bet as around this point their would be combustion from the oil he uses. While this wouldn't allow him to melt down metal with ease, it would allow for growth and potential, and would end realistically without people getting injured. >Another thing you mention is Jack's ability to poison others if the oil gets in their bloodstream. You didn't really specify how this poison works, so I did a bit of research. Typically, yes oils are pretty hazardous, and can even cause death in the most severe cases, which would probably mean that Jack is intentionally trying to actively poison people, a deed that could also harm his teammates. However, it's much more common for oil to cause digestive problems like diarrhea or other issues like irritation, nausea, and vomiting. Also, I'm not sure how the oil get's into the body, unless actively ingested. Does it perform osmosis, or do you just mean the burning of the oil getting into the lungs? With either case, it'd be a risk to allies and civilians I propose that this move be for the most part cut. Sure if someone eats the oil, then the effects would make sense but inhaling the oil would only do meaningful damage if the exposure time was over a long period, and even then simply removing oneself from the polluted area would result in improved lung functions. > He definitely needs more weaknesses. For one, while water definitely does make oil fires roar, it does eventually sizzle them out, so a huge weakness for Jack has to be water. Ice is a bit different, as it can be melted into a non-manipulative state if the user can't also control water. Smothering Jack's flames would also be a means of stopping his fire, without oxygen Jack's powers simply cannot work, because combustion requires it. Of course like all other members of the team, Jack's powers would be restrained by anti-titan gear which temporarily deactivates the titan gene. Overall I think adding these in would balance out the character, as having fire powers already makes him one of the strongest on the team.


I hope this applies to other people as well because Linn controlling ice can become extremely powerful, seriously just research iceman from the x-men and you'll see what I'm saying, the same can go for Nathan as well, a lot of our characters have the potential to be incredible strong.
I am still working on my CS but I elaborated more on his powers, I hope they are acceptable
Eyeris said
You are adding that he can now 'shoot fire and create flames'. Is this without the oil? Range? Just curious


yeah, if he can create burning oil, why wouldn't he be able to create fire as well, it would make sense
Jack smiled and gave a praise, "Thank God, I won't have to deal with having to watch my back for betrayal."

He listed to Ambrose mention that the buildings around Queens Jack chuckled, "I thought Yankees were perfect with constructing buildings."

Even though he was disappointed with not being able to melt through walls, he was still glad to not be in the same group as Linn and Cora. Press would have his work cut out for him to keep Cora in line. When she mentioned her being able to easily sneak into the place and slighted their costumes, "Hay there's no need to insult our choices of dress, yours' isn't too good looking ether. And Ambrose gave the orders so I suggest we follow them and work together."

More slighting, no wonder this team was on its way to disaster, Too many egos in this group.
@Famotill, I added a bit to Jack's powers so if you can add that in the cs bin then that would be great
"I think you don't know how I burn through walls, my arms will act like insanely hot blowtorch and will cleanly cut a hot through the wall, there will be no harm to the civilians, and if I burn my way through in the right place then she would not be alerted to our entrance. Also can you not use my real name while we are in the field of duty, it's Fire Stream" Jack replied to Press.

He could see his plan working, after all if they entered the criminal's hiding place the main way then there would a good chance that she would be alerted to them and then there would be a good chance that she might get away. He hoped that the plane would take off soon before even more trouble happened and delayed their mission. Jack adjusted his cowboy hat and got comfortable in his seat as he waited for them to be off.
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