Yog Sothoth

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I did not look at any of the other posts because I thought we were allowed to conclude our training before we went forward with the chuunin exam arc. Also my post was a response to how Makoto planned to attack our characters

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Aki too was not willing to leave behind Maki even if she did slow them down, they were a team and being a team was the only way to complete this test. even though they weren't allowed to use jutsu, Aki still had his heavily trained senses to aid him in keeping a look for any more surprises. the mist made hard to see and the air made the scents hard to pick up, but there was still the sense of hearing that could still be useful but their master was very stealthy and the chances of hearing his movement was low but still he had to try. he took the lead like Maki had ordered and had his halberd gripped tightly in his hands. he would be sure to keep his weapon at the ready in case of an attack. he was about to give a suggestion to his teammates when he heard a whistling sound of metal coming down from above him and he didn't have to look up to guess what it was.

" watch out for the kunai above you!!!" he shouted to his teammates as he took evasive actions to dodge the sharp projectiles. just then their sensei came out of the line of trees and moved towards them at incredible speeds. he had a weapon in his hand that looked like a type of whip and swung it in Maki's direction. Aki was going to try and intercept the blow but then their sensei went straight for him with a sword made of his own blood, a sign of his skill in Blood Release. the mist made it hard for Aki to see what was happening and this made it so his sensei came upon with great speed and slashed out at with his blood sword. do his hunger and lack of sleep, Aki's reflexes were not as quick as they normally were and he hoped back in time to just avoid getting a deep wound from the sword, but the weapon still managed to cut him. his master wasn't done yet, he did a very fast full spin and slashed out with his blade, aiming it directly at Aki's head. Aki luckily was ready this time and he intercepted the attack with his halberd, he may have been weak but he had enough strength to still hold his own against enemy weapons, he then took a step back once his weapon axe head met his sensei's sword. he hoped that Ren would take this chance to attack his sensei while his back was exposed, but Aki couldn't see enough through the mist to see that their sensei was about shoot a huge current of chlorine gas in their direction. he was too close for Aki to evade and the gas hit with a great amount of force that sent fly back. then he felt the painful sting of the gas against his face exposed skin. he gritted his teeth as he tried to ignore the painful sensation. His sensei would have most definitely followed up with a deadly attack if it wasn't for the Mizukage interrupting their test and stopping Makoto. Even though Aki was annoyed at their training being interrupted, a part of him was glad to possibly be done with the test.

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Can I start posting as Beru?

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Beta said
Sloth and Kal-El need to both get their asses in gear.

So since both you and Yosh were okay with my character, does that mean he's accepted or do I have to wait for Ouro's verdict?

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Kal-El said
No. It's ugly and he looks absolutely young for a 52 year old man. @Gowi, hey...would you mind...linking your canon jutsu? It makes it so much easier to find and read up on.

Also how did he acquire the sharingan? The eldest son had a spiral version of the rinningan

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Ouroboros said
Aizen Shimura - I think Yosh put it well. Simply too much mastery in too many natures and expanding the ability from only destruction like in the canon version to creation as well it. There's simply not enough depth to back up how he has such intricate and powerful abilities, he just seems like a bunch of powerful elements spliced together. Toshiro Gomakashi - He was just now elected to Tsuchikage at 50? Care to make some backstory on the last Tsuchikage and what happened, it would do well considering Iwa will be . Pertaining to , how proficient are we talking? Also I hope you don't plan on using Shunshin in an actual fight. Minemoto Uchiha - Heh, I like him. Hop to it with that history! You might have to cut down a few of those Blaze Release techniques but we'll see what the finished product looks like.Matsuo Bushou is accepted.

What about my Jonin?

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Kal-El said
Obvs haven't finished history but most of the important stuff is in the damn OP. lolz

If he's the eldest son of the Sage of The Six Paths then shouldn't he look like this?

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VitaVitaAR said
@Yog Sothoth: I'll be honest, if the Mage Academy didn't stamp down on it... well... a certain rumor(the thieves' guild) would take a very unwanted interest in their activities.... And Rin and I have a hard time seeing actual magic users forming a street gang. ^^;@Sam: They are in this setting because they are awesome, really.

so can my character still have the type of magic, and i'll just edit his CS to explains why he has the magic?

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i edited my CS and changed the origins of my character's dōjutsu, so is he acceptable?

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VitaVitaAR said
Can you explain what you mean by sorcerer outcasts?

they were once apart of a guild of sorcerers which did not take kindly to them using their magic for stealing and attaining riches so they banished them and made them outcasts which is why they decided to start teaching others who were interested in becoming wealthy and formed the gang. is that enough of a reason for them knowing magic?