YoshiSkittlez Member

> I want him cousin to another character, but I don't care whom and I don't wanna mess with anyone's mojo. I'd say work on the beefy parts first, then worry about character association with other characters after everything has been okay'd. Does that make sense? (No sense making ties to other characters when it might be something that doesn't work out.)

> I lolled at King Poo Face, and Morgan Freeman, anyway nighty night Yoshi and everyone else. :) Hey now! These are important questions! Had I not known who these people are, I could rightly assume that is who they are... right? XD

> I'm off to dreamland now i'll get my post up once i'm awake, it's almost 3:30AM here lol. G'night dearie! See ya tomorrow!

What I think Vicier meant by, > You're CS is okay, though there are a few things that I just want to clarify. Was he sent to earth when he was five? Or Three? And who are his parents, ect. > Also, could you please add more information to your "Biography (before earth)" as right now, it doesn't give us much of an idea about the character and the situations that led up to him being on earth. would be to fill in the lesser details with meatier bits. You mentioned a King. King who? King Richard the Lionhearted? King Poo Face? Names are important in Fairy Tale Land. The (nameless) King's brother was Robin's father, great, what was his name and what kind of person was he? Was he the King's royal archer? War leader/general? Did he not live in royalty like his brother did and raised his family by means of his own? You also mentioned that the King sent his son with Robin to Earth... what was this for? Who is his son? Will Scarlett? Morgan Freeman? Why did his son go through? Were you planning on having them meet up later? Were Robin and the King's son close? I know its a lot but it's important information. I could keep going on and on and on about different 'tasty meaty bits' you can put in but as a writer, you should strive to find those points on your own :) it can be fun :) have fun with it :)

What? No! I JUST told you I wasn't talking about you specifically. > I wasn't saying you did lol, only mentioning the difference between creative liberties and terrible creative liberties Not at all bringing up your character or anyone elses.

Again, Ursa, you have lost me.

Examples? Um... look at the accepted characters? o.0 -insert easy button here-

I wasn't saying you did lol, only mentioning the difference between creative liberties and terrible creative liberties

Ursa, we are supposed to take creative liberties with these characters, but nothing batshit insane off the wall wtf moment things strictly for the shock factor etc.

I think Vicier mentioned something about making Belle after Myst decided she wasn't going to... but I'm not sure. I'd have to check my Skype history...