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Allison's Originals Inside ( Ignore Post Count )

These ones interest me.
Teacher x Student
Gang Leader x Rival Gang Member
Demon x Angel

Bleach: A New Dawn

-shakes head- Thats the lazy expllo we know, gives us the excuse he spent alll his time these past few days on a girl XD

Bleach: A New Dawn

Yeah but you are just lazy Expllo XD

Bleach: A New Dawn

Phobos said
Nah we stopped playing monopoly, that shit can ruin marriages xD we just skip that part now

Wowwww

Bleach: A New Dawn

Waiting for an answer, Aya received a different answer than she was expecting when Lucy headbutted her, causing her head to reel back a bit, before moving back to where she looked Lucy dead in the eyes again, which was then that she received and uppercut, but this Time as it connected, Aya grabbed her wrist, and grinned. "Maybe you need another hint. When i'm like this, attacks like that don't really faze me. Hence why i said, you better get serious. Before you wind up dead!" Aya said tightening her grip a bit, before swinging her left arm forward at the girls face.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Phobos said
Same here, been busy with work/school/rl shit, but good to see you back ^.^

Irl shit being not getting laid over Monopoly and having some angry as shit sex

Bleach: A New Dawn

Aya found herself crashing into the ground after going through this portal thing, and when the dust cleared she looked around to see no building in sight, besides Lucy, Aya cracked her neck and shunpoed over to her, and looked her dead in the eye. "So want to bring my son back, and we can forget about this, or." Aya said reeling back her left arm. "Do you want me to continue, until I force you to bring him back?"

Bleach: A New Dawn

Damn right ya will

Bleach: A New Dawn

pointless just for fun

Somewhere in Soul Society in a building somewhere sat seven people sitting at a table bickering among each other. "God dammit Gengyo! I know it was you that smashed a hole in my wall! Who else would leave a gaping wide circle in someone else's room!" A white haired male said slamming his fist on the table as he glared at the giant man known as Gengyo. "Oh shut up, I prefer my mops to not talk to me. Besides, you really want to get lippy with me Kite? I can make the top ten turn into top nine right now you know." Gengyo said standing up towering way above the white haired male, as they both drew their weapons, until a gray haired female who was sitting down spoke up. "You both act like children, we are meant to be professional you know. Man you guys are lucky that Sieg isn't here right now." The girl said, which he then felt someone bop her on the head which made her get ready to swing at them, until she saw it was a red haired male followed by the twins. "Shush Sonja, you will ruin my entertainment." The male said sitting down in a chair and smiling at the two males arguing. "Now please continue gentlemen." He said which made both kite and Gengyo sit down grumbling, until the table set on fire. "Little bitches! Did i say sit the fuck down? No I said continue! So if I don't hear some damn arguing, I will set Matsunami on fire!" Sieg said which made a women with blond hair jump in shock. "What did I do?!" Matsunami shouted, which made Sieg shrug. "i don't know, usually when i threaten to set you on fire, they listen. Maybe it's cause of your breast or something." Sieg said, and awaited for shouting, so when he didn't hear anything he flipped the table, which landed on another red headed male. "See! I told you, I would hurt Tiz if you guys didn't argue!" Sieg said which made kite speak up. "Didn't you say Matsu-" Sieg then interrupted Kite saying. "Yes Kite, I know! Poor Tiz had to suffer cause Sonja wouldn't dance!" Hearing this everyone just remained silent, as Sieg lifted the table off Tiz. "Tiz, the ground is no place for sleeping." Sieg said throwing the table to the side and started to shake Tiz, until a brown haired male entered the room, looked at the events that unfolded and sighed. "Sieg is drunk again I see. You guys should hide the Alcohol better." The man said walking back out of the room, while Sieg was still shaking Tiz.

Bleach: A New Dawn

Well the backstory is okay, but I believe we dont want any canon character being mentioned, and we know who this Black spikey hair guy and pink haired child is XD. And having close to Zaraki's spiritual energy is pushing it a bit, this is the man that has been a Captain and fought many people with Bankai's, and beat them with sealed state. Other than that everything looks fine to me.