Zane620

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Axel said
You wasn't gonna say shiz XD You were waiting for Expllo's response just like I was XD

No I actually went and read his skills and I know Kurisa wanted the one that was like Gestuga Tenshou to be a 2 post cool down just so he didnt wait one post and do it again then wait and do it again. and his last one confuses me a bit, like it last the entire battle? it is just weaker?

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Expllo said
I don't give a flippity fruit snack motherfucker, and I'm deducing now o3o

I was gonan say something but you got dis XD

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Axel said
Except for one little aspect...Most of it looks good but I have mixed feelings on that Hado(Even in the weaker form) getting accepted. Especially since the instructor probably wouldn't know or even think about teaching it to a low ranked Shinigami for fear of killing him.

Oh yeah XD Yeah dude I know you like that hado, but you need to be the required rank to learn it, and I doubt their is a smaller verzion of any Hados XD

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Expllo said
Fuck you Zane, I'm looking at it. Get your ass on Skype and maybe you'd know that <.< little shit >.>

School laptop, I cant do that young one XD

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DeathstrokeSW said
I edited the CS, and would like if you could take a look, and provide feedback.

Looks much better to me, but all our gms are currently offline so, you will have to wait a bit until one of them checks it.

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Expllo said
"Breaking orders? So there's someone giving orders? That could probably explain that Hollow attack," Ayashi said as she walked into the black portal thingy of death and justice alongside Yu and entered the Soul Society. She helped hold him up as they walked, "So I imagine no telling Shinji about your.....You know....Outrage?" she asked as she made sure the necklace around Yu was still on and tight. She walked into the Squad one barracks and headed towards the Captain's office, kicking away the people who got in their way.

"Yeah, that Red haired guy was disobeying someones orders, most likely the one who brought all the Hollows." Yu said as she helped him stand as they walk, then mentioned his little Hollow outrage which made him nod. "Yeah..... I still don't know how he would react to hearing that, he did have me bring back a man who had the same thing and bring him to Squad Twelve." Yu replied as they made their way into the Squad one's barracks heading towards the Captains office where Ayashi was kicking people away which rose a low chuckle from him as they arrived at the Captains office where Yu knocked on the door.

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Expllo said
Upon searching Ayashi had found the necklace and kept it tight in her hand, looking back up she noticed Yu falling and two arrancars leaving. She didn't even notice him, she felt stupid for not paying attention. Shunpo'ing over to Yu on the ground, she knelt beside him and helped him up quickly putting the necklace back on him once he was up. "Are you ok?" Ayashi asked before scanning him....Well, atleast he'd survive, "I should have been faster so I could have helped you," she mumbled as she grabbed his hand, "Let's just go alright? Before anymore show up, we have to report this...."

As he laid there he saw Aya out of the corner of his eye with her kneeling beside him lifting his body off which caused a little groan to escape, it might have been the Hollow side of him getting knocked around, but he could still feel the pain from every hit that his body received, mostly his gut. He could hear her mumbling which made him shake his head. "No, I don't doubt you but as it stand those guys are way above us as it currently stands." Yu said grabbing her hand and pulling himself up he nodded at her. "Yeah, that would be wise.... It did seem like one was breaking orders though." Yu said as he himself opened up the portal and walked through it holding his gut.

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As the man dodged Yu's Punch he looked down just as he got punched in the stomach which caused Yu to gasp for air but was then given a left hook followed by an uppercut sending Yu into the air only to have the mans heel slam into Yu's gut sending him back to the ground where the man followed him by slamming into his gut again causing Yu to cough up blood. The man then grabbed him by the neck and lifted him into the air Yus arms were dangling by his side as he glared at the man speaking to him. "Bite me." Was all Yu said as the man was about to punch him before another Arrancar showed up stopping the man. Saying he was breaking orders, before he cracked Yu's mask which shattered into pieces and his eyes reverting back to normal as he was thrown to the ground, he could only lay there as he watched the two of them leave. Yu was back to his senses yet for how long he didn't know, he didn't even know where his necklace was. He then noticed Ayashi wasn't around, so she must have been hiding which was smart of her too do.

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Axel said
Hey, I'm trying to play gm vigilante here XD

FINE GAWD

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DeathstrokeSW said
I'm sorry, but I felt as if I wasn't being heard.

All i can do to suggest advice, is look at some of the cs's in the approved page we have so you can get a better understanding of what we want.