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This Interest Check is alive again. I've made several changes, and work is ongoing. Thanks for the support shown :)
Tales from Andora
Tags: Sci-Fi, Sandbox, Aliens, Spaceships, Lightly Moderated, Military, Espionage, Politics
RP Summary
Background
Factions of the Andora System
The Empire
The Confederation of Andora
The Free Stars Alliance
Planets of the Andora System
System Events
System Events are random events, instigated by the GM, and are usually dice rolled to determine what event strikes, and where. These events range from rather benign happenings, to major catastrophes. They will usually happen weekly (every Monday), or more frequently if it is felt that things need spicing up. So far, there is a chance of the following:
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Just a little bump. It'll be the only one, I swear :)
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- Name: Lance "Stilleye" Escott - Age: 20 - Gender: Male - Race: Human - Physical Appearance: Lance isn't a strong build but more of an average. His hair is purple and that's how people know who it is. His eyes, like his hair, are purple and must be connected to some form of mutation. Lance has a suit that is light and flexible but is heat and bullet proof.
- Weapons: Lance's weaponary include:
  • Stormfury Blade
  • Final Achievement
  • Sunshine Thermal Rifle
  • Cosmos Hand Blaster
- Why is he/she in the Andora System? Lance is here for one thing and one thing only. Money. Lance is in this system because there is a lot of bountys to be collected. - Faction Alignment: Bounty hunter - Occupation: Solo - Starting Location: Suza
- Spaceship Callsign: Pheonix (Because no matter how many times its shot at it cant die) - Ship Class and Type: LTBH Maneuver Class 1E5-B - Spaceship Occupation: BattleShip. Although Small this ship is very powerful, mainly used as a transport for Lance he can definitely hold his own. - Size: Length 13 meters Width 4 meter wingspan - Number of Crew: 1 - Number of Non-crew: 0 - Armaments: Plasma Rifle. Nuke Bombs. Longe Range Rifles - Defensive Measures: Shields. Mines. - Top Speed: Fast? Like really Fast - Manoeuvrability: Pretty much perfect. - Cargo: Bombs and Money
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Lance "Stilleye" Escott
Nice entry, unfortunately I don't think the fish are biting with this one. I may take it away and do some more work on it, perhaps release a newer version of it in a few months time if I feel things may turn out differently. Be a shame to waste the work I put into it. Thanks anyway :)
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This formula could work. An open-world freakin' sci-fi RP. I say redo it, see where you could improve or fix things, then roll it out again. You have someone interested right here. If you can somehow make this better, count me in automatically. I love open-world RPs, and I'm in the mood for sci-fi. Edit: I like how creativity and simplicity blend in your RP, Forest. You have three main empires, yet one of them is sort of a 'gateway' to other factions and races, in that they ally them. A good number of planets. Not too many but not too little. Just enough to get people in the grove. Pretty simple story. Easy to digest. You really do have something good here, in my opinion.
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This formula could work. An open-world freakin' sci-fi RP. I say redo it, see where you could improve or fix things, then roll it out again. You have someone interested right here. If you can somehow make this better, count me in automatically. I love open-world RPs, and I'm in the mood for sci-fi. Edit: I like how creativity and simplicity blend in your RP, Forest. You have three main empires, yet one of them is sort of a 'gateway' to other factions and races, in that they ally them. A good number of planets. Not too many but not too little. Just enough to get people in the grove. Pretty simple story. Easy to digest. You really do have something good here, in my opinion.
Many thanks. I thought I did too, when I released it, but it sunk like a led balloon, haha. I'm currently looking at how to improve things. It needs refinement, that much is true. What you see up above was an attention grabber, as opposed to the finished product. That said, it's mostly there, just needs polish and a few bits and pieces to be added. If room clears in my RP schedule, I'll look into getting this done up and try again. Will keep you posted. Thanks again :)
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I'd like to say that I'm interested. It looks pretty good.
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Ah, good. Another interested party. I might have to keep an even closer eye on this. Forest, please don't actually take literal months before you roll out version two.
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I'd be up for this or v2.
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Ah, good. Another interested party. I might have to keep an even closer eye on this. Forest, please don't actually take literal months before you roll out version two.
Already commenced work. Remade the RP Summary, added a Background and did some other tweaks. More tweaks are on the way. Next I'll go and revamp the Entry Sheets, covering the following stuff: - Indvidual Characters - Factions - Fleets - Squadrons/Bands - Ground Formations - Organisations - Other stuff, the more of I think of it. But yeah, my time is currently tied down to other RPs, so whilst this wont take months to fix up, it wont take hours either. I'll keep you all posted.
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Why give up so easily?
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Why give up so easily?
I've renewed my efforts. When I first posted this, it went days without drawing a single comment despite a shameful bump lol. So you know, I thought it wasn't the right time for it, or it sucked. Either way I consigned it to the RP graveyard - until a few people suddenly started showing interest. So yeah, I'm working on polishing it up. That character sheet you used, for example, I did yesterday to replace the older, crude version. However, when I considered this thing dead, I went on to host another RP, and joined another. I usually only man two RPs at any one time, otherwise I risk over stretching myself. So whilst this is receiving my attention, progress is slower than it would be if it were my sole project.
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That's a good idea, Forest. It's better to have a couple of RPs you KNOW you can give your attention to than to have several that make you overwhelmed and progress slower. Take your time.
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That's a good idea, Forest. It's better to have a couple of RPs you KNOW you can give your attention to than to have several that make you overwhelmed and progress slower. Take your time.
I've been busy. Today, we now have: New rules! System Events! Ship Template Organisation Template Squadron Template Army Template --------- Still to do: Fleet Template --------- Then it's just a matter of polish. Lots, and lots of polish.
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Oooh, sci fi. I'll be back
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So.... is the CC sheet finalized yet ?
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I am definitely interested.
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My my. They're coming out of the woodwork!
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So.... is the CC sheet finalized yet ?
You mean the character sheet? Not quite up to date with today's shorthand. If so, then yes. If I change anything on it, it'll only be minor. However, I do need to add a couple things to the Ship, Squadron and Army sheets.
My my. They're coming out of the woodwork!
They certainly are. Hopefully wont be too long. I got to spend a lot of time on it yesterday, but I've got IRL stuff to tend to today so I don't know how much I'll be able to do. Still, things are at least happening :)
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Name: Lance "Stilleye" Escott Age: 20 Gender: Male Ethnicity: None Appearance: Lance isn't a strong build but more of an average. His hair is purple and that's how people know who it is. His eyes, like his hair, are purple and must be connected to some form of mutation. Lance has a suit that is light and flexible but is heat and bullet proof.
Personal Records
System of Birth: Andora Occupation: Bounty Hunter, Mercenary, Gun for hire Felonies: Theft, Assassination, kidnapping, speeding, littering, destroyed an army ship, breaking and entering, being a dick Declared Monthly Income: Monthly means a lot of jobs so around.... 50,000 Marital Status: Deceased Offspring: None Faction Affiliation: None Summary of Life Over Last 6 Months: Lance has done over 100 jobs in the course of 6 months and killed a butt-load of people.
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Apparrel at RP’s Start: Answered in appearance. Weapons at RP’s Start: Lance's weaponary include:
  • Stormfury Blade
  • Final Achievement
  • Sunshine Thermal Rifle
  • Cosmos Hand Blaster
Vehicles at RP’s Start: His ship Starting Planet: Suza Aptitude Test: Your character is walking down a tight alleyway, on a warm Chanterellian night. Suddenly, a street rough steps out into your path and blocks your way. Before you know what’s happening, a palm rests on your shoulder from behind. “Give us your credits, scum,” says a gruff voice behind you. How do you handle this situation? Im going to assume that this is with his armour as he only takes it off in his ship or with "trusted" people. Firstly, sensors on the suit would set off, causing spikes to come out of the shoulder then Lance would turn around and kick him in the gut, causing him to fly a few meteres, he would say something smirk like, "Pick the wrong fella to rob" or "tonight, is not you're night" then he would pull his gun from his side and proceed to fire.
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