@Wraithblade6

You're welcome. I will be sure to dump my complaining on you guys.

@Mtntopview That means you can't run away from me now ...

@Savato

That's fucking gross

@Savato

That's fucking gross

no homo

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no homo

That's what they all say ...

A tip to you writers: when one is in significant pain (I.e your character has been injured) they're usually more focused on being in pain than giving an impassioned speech. If they're not, they've got nerves of steel.

@Savato

That's fucking gross

I'll never stop, Nancy.

A tip to you writers: when one is in significant pain (I.e your character has been injured) they're usually more focused on being in pain than giving an impassioned speech. If they're not, they've got nerves of steel.

Nah. Pain is inspirational, and gives a desire to share that inspiration.

*lurk*

Name:Kevin Smith/Vortenx

Appearance: He wears a full body spandex that is green and black.

Age:21

Species:Human/Philosopher stone

Gender:Male

Personality: Cocky, Smart, kind at times but is a bit harsh about the truth.
Bio: His backstory changes as he tells it but the most common thing that comes up is that his parents died when he was young. he lived one the streets before finding out about his powers. After finding out about his powers he became a thief first stealing things for him to live. Until one day he ran into this guy who had a weird symbol on his and and on the ground under him, before either one of them could say a thing, a glowing red light flashed. When Kevin woke up he felt different, he looked forward and saw the same guy. After learning about becoming a philosopher stone the guy disappeared. After that his life story is choppy and no one can figure out the rest.

Abilities: Super speed, Super fast regeneration, Is a human philosopher stone(it has its limits when it runs out of souls he dies, currently has 4,918.) so he can change anything he wants with a touch, Congenital insensitivity to pain, Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems(if he were to lose BOTH gems he loses the power of immortality), smart enough to come up with a game plan that can get him out of any problems in a pinch, can move fast enough to stop anyone from moving but can only use his hands to do it with in a range of about 10 to 20 feet(if he uses his whole body he will teleport through time with out control), has the ability to break the 4th wall cause of the gems. A pouch that is never ending and small(he can just pull what ever he wants out of it), 2 stone like gems that control reality(one in his pouch and the other in his stomach), Any weapon he can think of to pull from the pouch. If his head is under salt water he loses the ability to move, but he can think so he can use the gems to teleport. If caught in an explosion he will freeze up for a bit till he comes to his senses, He will sometimes get too cocky that he forgets he has a lot of his equipment.

Universe of Origin: Arcadia-2, East-Gate City

@Pirouette Shut up fire alarms! Damn I hate em when at school. Always ringing when there is NOT a single fire! And yet sometimes goes off... stupid bells.

Anyways:

@Vortenx Ummmmm... hi there. Just reviewed your character and uh... Idk what to say about your character. Its confusing, mangled everywhere, and... unfairly/disgustingly OP. I mean, sure there are some characters here with abnormal speed and fair regenerative powers, but whats a human philosopher stone? Whats with the soul count? What does he look like? Change anything he wants with a touch? That sounds pretty OP. Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems? What gems??? And salt water as a weakness? What and why is that a thing?

And tons and tons of other confusing and OP powers. Might I mention the history is very... short and... crappy?

So overall, this character is just... crap. Sorry to say it man. You need to redo everything to make him be a proper and fair character.

@Pirouette Shut up fire alarms! Damn I hate em when at school. Always ringing when there is NOT a single fire! And yet sometimes goes off... stupid bells.

Anyways:

@Vortenx Ummmmm...

Oh it was an alarm of some kind...

Anyway, @Lmpkio, please be nicer when reviewing someone's CS. I believe I know what @Vortenx was trying to go for, and while it isn't allowable at present, Lmpkio you should be more constructive in your review.

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Oh it was an alarm of some kind...

Anyway, @Lmpkio, please be nicer when reviewing someone's CS. I believe I know what @Vortenx was trying to go for, and while it isn't allowable at present, Lmpkio you should be more constructive in your review.

And I usually am. This depends on the character that is presented to me. While I do apologize for the rudeness, this character needs major revisions. Better yet, probably be redone all the way. That's basically all I'm saying.

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And I usually am. This depends on the character that is presented to me. While I do apologize for the rudeness, this character needs major revisions. Better yet, probably be redone all the way. That's basically all I'm saying.

I PM'ed my thoughts.

Hmm. Testing a thing

Yay. It works

Yay for rotating signatures!

Anyways:

@Vortenx Ummmmm... hi there. Just reviewed your character and uh... Idk what to say about your character. Its confusing, mangled everywhere, and... unfairly/disgustingly OP. I mean, sure there are some characters here with abnormal speed and fair regenerative powers, but whats a human philosopher stone? Whats with the soul count? What does he look like? Change anything he wants with a touch? That sounds pretty OP. Virtually immortal cause of the power of 2 reality gems? What gems??? And salt water as a weakness? What and why is that a thing?

And tons and tons of other confusing and OP powers. Might I mention the history is very... short and... crappy?

So overall, this character is just... crap. Sorry to say it man. You need to redo everything to make him be a proper and fair character.

You dont watch a lot of anime then do you? My character is a mix of a bunch of different anime characters and other things like comics.

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You dont watch a lot of anime then do you? My character is a mix of a bunch of different anime characters and other things like comics.

Ummmmmm... my rotating sig disagrees.

Thing is, your profile is very jambled up. I suggest you make it neat and make sure to describe how the powers work and then make them fair so they won't be OP or underpowered. For inspiration, check out the characters we have set up in the CS, especially mine.