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I'm happy to add when whatever you guys want. I just want to make sure that you guys have freedom to do what you do.

I'll get back to you after work about that @memetrash101.
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Well shit I thought I read something completely different. Have it homie.
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@AcerRo The plot Rawk came up with? Just checking but, yeah, I'll get a post up soon if that's what you meant.
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Ok folks, I have Vin's post up, so let's move it a long.

BTW: Let's assume it's morning and the sun is just about rising.

I think it's safe to say we can do a bit of exploring and "Free RP" and at some point @memetrash101's character comes running down to us asking for help and if we have any additional medical supplies, etc. We find out he's mending a wounded kid in the community, and blah blah blah...whatever else he wants to write into his post :)

I think it's pretty well open as to how we want to interpret Noble's Holler, but keep in mind that it's mostly black families who don't take too kindly to strangers, especially white strangers.

What we will need to drill down on is posting order so we don't railroad someone else's posts. Any ideas on that would be appreciated.

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Yes what Rawk said is fine.

I second everything @Rawk said.
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Hello there, I've been working with AcerRo for a while now to make this character sheet. These two buckhead characters (the other CS will be coming up when it's completed) She's the mentee for a gang leader in one of the city districts; when they were both invited to the Gala they received powers and decided to evac the city whilst their gang crumbled around them.

The GM has raised his points but I'd also like to see your opinions on this character before I change anything.

EDIT: I thought I'd add a bit more, something from the PM conversation:

"To give a summary though - Abigail Harlow is the assistant/student for a (as of yet nameless) leader of a crime syndicate. She's a bit of a glass cannon; She's a smooth-talking, stealthy, agile, and sharp-witted girl who's pretty much crap at everything else. Basically, if she gets cornered or pushed into combat there's a high chance she'll get her ass handed to her on a silver platter. Terrible aim with a gun, little to no survival skills (well, she can look after herself but she's used to dishwashers, tumble dryers, bringing everything to the dry cleaners, she probably has maids etc etc.)

All of her traits are engineered towards getting her out of trouble, so if there's no other option but to be IN trouble then you know Abigail's not going to last long. Because of this, I think she takes every precaution to keep herself covered - she's probably disguised, taken on a fake identity, constantly doubting everyone's motives and keeping an eye on both her funds and how traceable her spending would be (even if she is using cash). On top of that, since her power (as of yet undecided) erases her memories, she probably keeps a logbook of everything she does/needs to know since the incident that gave her the superpower."

I just didn't feel my CS accurately described it, I've tried to balance it out as much as possible but her abilities are very, very one-sided.
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@Rawk Hey, you think I should get my post up now? Maybe just Joseph arriving in Nobles and talking to the family, them telling him about a group of people that came in that might have medical supplies? That sound good?
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Overall, well done :) I think like mostly everyone's powers they have a the potential for being OP'd, but so far we've managed to keep them reasonable, and I suspect it wouldn't be a problem with your character's telepathy. The note writing is a nice touch too. Reminds me of an old movie called Memento.

Considering her gang-relations and notoriety, why not have her working as a "gopher" for one of the families in Noble's? Maybe she had affiliations with them in the past and in order for her to escape the city, she sought them out and in exchange for their hospitality, was volunteered to help them in whatever manner they needed. Unless, of course, you already had something planned out with @AcerRo...

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Sure bro, that'll work since you aren't interacting directly with the existing characters yet, so you can insert any NPCs you see fit and that would make sense in the community.
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It's less the power and more the skills we're worried about. Abi's a city girl, and AcerRo believes that being sneaky in general can't work in a new setting, which I agree (to an extent), but it seems he wants to remove it entirely or lessen it quite severely. However, I believe that she can still be sneaky, and be very good at being sneaky, but she needs to practice. I'd like to hear all your opinions on this.

I think it's also important to mention that stealth is one of Abigail's leading skills...it plays a very large part when it comes to her character.
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Heya! I'm a friend of Stitches, my character being linked with hers. I just wanted to point out that i'm fairly new to forum roleplay, and completly open to any criticism to help improve my CS. I hope it's decent enough, and look forward to RPing with you all!

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The post is up @Rawk tell me if there's any errors or plot problems, please.
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The content is fine, but please do me and my OCD a favor and separate the dialogue between characters so it's a bit easier to digest. Walls of text hurt my ass :/
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@Rawk I'll get right on it boss!
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@Rawk I've spaced it out a little.
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Nice work @Biscuits, I like where you're going with the character. I somehow imagine (a younger) Paul Sorvino filling that role.

So is Brook able to shapeshift into any animal, or animals that are closer to his size/weight?

Is this an at-will power, something that happens as a defense mechanism, or randomly? I know for my character (Vincent), his has been almost exclusively defensive, but as the story progresses, he may or may not learn how to freely trigger it. But that remains to be seen.

So are both you and @Stitches character travelling together?

In any case, @AcerRo will let you know his thoughts since he is the final say.
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I haven't really had a chance to look through the entire character sheets for our two newest recruits (still working) but I like what I've seen so far.
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So are both you and @Stitches character travelling together?


Yep, these two are practically inseparable. Thank you very much for your kind words - I'm in a PM with AcerRo presently, working with him to perfect my character sheet. I would've included Biscuits' into the PM, but it turns out you can't add people to PMs in this website? It's been a long time since I've used RPerguild.

I hope they come through the application process so you can all...be suspicious of them? I don't know. On the plus side, if we do get accepted, you get a free truck!
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@Stitches Holy shit. Props on your CS. I like what I see, especially your power's cost, I love me some originality. Looking forward to having you be a part of the RP.
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Thank you. I particularly like how your character is both doctor AND ambulance with his super speed. God knows we'll need a healer!
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Thank you. I particularly like how your character is both doctor AND ambulance with his super speed. God knows we'll need a healer!


I believe that's already @Xandrya's role...Whether she likes it or not.
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