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Geez, this guy's got a lot of stuff.


AGI: A (A+)


Change to: AGI: B+ (A+)
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Change to: AGI: B+ (A+)


Ah, I see. Done. But what do you get if you have a stat at rank A and a skill that ranks it up?
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Ah, I see. Done. But what do you get if you have a stat at rank A and a skill that ranks it up?


Functionally 60. Remember that technically + is a temporary modifier of double.
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Alright. Is the Servant otherwise fine?
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Sorry I didn't see this app. Here you go, fam~



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Done


MGI: -

LCK: -


You need stats for these. Dashes aren't real stats in this regard.

Battle Continuation (Rank A) - His past battles gained him a skill that allows him to continue fighting on despite his major injuries in battle unless someone were to somehow deal a fatal wound to Ragnar or anything with a side effect such as poison.


Reduce to B

Rank: C (B+ when Charisma and Military Tactics are active)


This isn't how either Charisma or Military tactics works in the first post. Basically it becomes "Functionally higher than C, but still C". It would beat out a C rank noble phantasm in power, but wouldn't help you against a B ranked phantasm if that makes sense.

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Description: Ragnar blows his warhorn and plants the banner on the ground, creating a misty gateway that calls his once great army that invaded the West in the 9th Century. Each and everyone of his Vikings are technically Heroic Spirits under his command and all they think about is following their bannerlord and causing havoc for their faction.[/center][/hider][/quote]

This noble phantasm doesn't function in it's current state. It also seems to alike with a certain Rider's Noble Phantasm in terms of application, so I would like to ask you rework it into something that "doesnt summon servants".
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Alright. Is the Servant otherwise fine?


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I don’t wanna step on any toes here, but isn’t Achilles just a tad OP? Like, this is just me here, but I’d rather square off with Berserk-Herc than Achilles. Dude has a ridiculous number of NPs on top of his eponymous heel.
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I don’t wanna step on any toes here, but isn’t Achilles just a tad OP? Like, this is just me here, but I’d rather square off with Berserk-Herc than Achilles. Dude has a ridiculous number of NPs on top of his eponymous heel.


There are a lot of things you can do against Ach imo. He really isnt infallible. Herc is a lot stronger than him in every sense of the word. Still a strong Servant though.
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High-Speed Divine Words: A
High-Thaumaturgy level Magecraft can be cast at the speed of Single-Action spells.


Change to rank B, unless justification is given for it being at the same rank as Medea.
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Yeah, the whole idea of making a Caster out of a not-so-popular mathematical figure who's only about 250 years old didn't seem to fly with me, especially considering the other submissions on this thread. I needed to kick it up a notch, so I decided to submit for a Lancer slot instead—someone much closer to home, if you get the idea.



(EDIT: Fixed the parameters and skills at the GM's request. The description for Lancer's Noble Phantasm has been completely rewritten to suit her origin story a little better. As of the moment I'm writing this footnote, I am ready to submit this sheet for review.)
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Roger dodger my dude. Adjusted as requested.
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Roger dodger my dude. Adjusted as requested.


Accepted then.

Yeah, the whole idea of making a Caster out of a not-so-popular mathematical figure who's only about 250 years old didn't seem to fly with me, especially considering the other submissions on this thread. I needed to kick it up a notch, so I decided to submit for a Lancer slot instead—someone much closer to home, if you get the idea.



AGI: A


Change to B

Magic Resistance - D+: Under normal circumstances, Lancer only has enough Resistance to cancel Single-Action spells. However her Protection from the Wind skill boosts this rank to A when a Wind-Elemental spell targets her.


Should just be D. No point in including the + if you already have the skill "protection from the wind"

Noble Phantasm:

Bane of the Storm God ~ Atlatl

Rank: A
Type: Anti-Fortress
Range: 2-50
Maximum number of targets: 100

Description: A blessed version of a primitive spear-thrower. The spear inserted into the weapon's chamber is charged with a very large amount of Mana and released at supersonic speeds with enough force to pierce through stone without slowing. If the attack manages to strike its intended target, the projectile will immediately detonate, releasing all the charged Mana at once in a large explosion. If the attack were to miss, however, the projectile will continue it's path, slowing down gradually until its Mana eventually runs out and the spear is consumed in the process. Lancer can alter the time it takes to charge the attack to modulate the strength of the projectile, but she cannot risk adding too much time to the charging process, lest she place herself at risk of depleting the entirety of her mana supply.

Since Lancer's MGI is ranked D, she cannot store enough Mana to use this Noble Phantasm more than once in succession. Also, depending on how much mana is stored into the attack, she might suffer a temporary penalty to her parameters immediately after the attack is launched.


Could you better explain the relation to the legend of Agueybana? Other than that, considering the mechanics behind the phantasm, it seems more or less a C or D ranked phantasm, since it is just a surrogate for individual mana, rather than an attack at that rank, if that makes sense.
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I mean you may choose your pairs as you desire~.

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His bones are armor that repel blows and can even repel magic like a mystery, although it would only help to truly repel E rank spells, and defend with any significance against D rank spells. There is defense against C rank and higher spells, but it is at a point that is not exceptional.

Change this to something more along the lines of "Functional E magic resist" and I would be alright with it. Other than that it is a really well made app; I made something similar to it a long time ago~.

Considering the fact that a normal anti-magic amulet is described as providing the same level of magic resistance as EMIYA, D rank, something that's kind of reaching into a mystery of monsters as a defense I feel like is justified in having as being a bit better than an amulet.

It is however not really much of a big deal, and if you insist I'll change it.

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Considering the fact that a normal anti-magic amulet is described as providing the same level of magic resistance as EMIYA, D rank, something that's kind of reaching into a mystery of monsters as a defense I feel like is justified in having as being a bit better than an amulet.

It is however not really much of a big deal, and if you insist I'll change it.


I would be down to allow for a D rank, but the way it was described wasn't really the "destruction of fantasy", but rather a "threshold", which kinda isn't how it works was my primary concern.
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Something along the lines of a D rank sounds fine by me.
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Something along the lines of a D rank sounds fine by me.


Neat. Other than that I accept.
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I don’t wanna step on any toes here, but isn’t Achilles just a tad OP? Like, this is just me here, but I’d rather square off with Berserk-Herc than Achilles. Dude has a ridiculous number of NPs on top of his eponymous heel.


Higashide is bad at making things mechanically. His Chariot is bad, and his defense is not very good either.

Otherwise he's a high tier servant because he's Achilles, but he's definitely not as good as Hercules.
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Dude I was literally just putting the finishing touches on my own Koschei app this morning xD

It’s okay though because I had the better idea to use Baba Yaga while I was at work today. Claiming that other Caster spot now, just in case someone ninjas me again.
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@Turboshitter Yo I wanna see your koschei app. I wanna know what I missed when I was making mine :^)
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