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Don't you worry, once I see a CS i'll sort things out regarding teams and such. Chances are either Cedar or Yasmin will be bumped onto another team and there'll be a bit of sorting out. I'll work something out.
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Here's my character, if I can still join. I had a lot of crazy ideas, but I decided to dial it back for this character.
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@Sho Minazuki Unfortunately, I hadn't found it any sooner.
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Hm. Character seems more or less fine, like the weapon and a choice of backup. My only issue is the semblance, it seems to have too much in it.
I mean you've got heightened reflexes and mobility, visual afterimage and projections, that's like three semblances rolled into one.
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@CadenGallic I was trying to keep to the concept of 'the hunt', but I thought I had toned down each aspect enough. Like 3 mini-semblances that add up to make a full one. How would you like me to fix it?
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@Shadow Daedalus Yeah I can see that, it does work as a theme, I just think it needs like a base stem of some sort, some base power that can somehow create the effects of all three. Maybe something akin to, a spirit companion in the form of a wolf? Something he could merge with to gain his added aspects, act as a tracker for hunting people down and be used as an offensive projection?
Just spitballing ideas.
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@CadenGallic That's actually very good. I think I'll use that Idea.

Semblance Name: The Hunt
Semblance: A combination of an enhancement and a summoning semblance. When activated, he summons a ghost-like wolf formed from his aura. This wolf can track a person's aura or a Grimm's darkness, and can attack an enemy using its teeth or claws. It is slightly stronger than a Beowulf, and take slightly more damage before it dissipates. He can also merge with the wolf to sharply improve his senses, reflexes and slightly increase his physical strength to peak but not super-human level. He can sense traces of a person's aura or Grimm's darkness, but not as strongly as the wolf.

Better? or does it need a little more adjustment?
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Yep, that works just fine, go ahead and add him to characters.
Don't intro yourself in yet, i'm working on a way to get the character involved and put on a team.
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@CadenGallic Ok, sure
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I figure I might as well just mention my plans here for you guys to have your say in.
So considering teams have been formed, my idea was to have a member of team SILC drop out, namely Cassidy. So then Cedar from team JACY would be moved to SILC and Venator would be placed in the remnant of team JACY to make up for this, so they'd become team JAVY (Javelin.)
As for plot reasonings, we'll say Venator came to Lustre early and since he had nowhere else to go, did a pre-exam before the others did and has just been absent until now.
How's that for you guys?
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@CadenGallic@Sho Minazuki@Polaris North That works for me. Sorry about making it awkward for you guys
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Well, whatever's your decision is all cool for me. Although how will the transition from Cedar to Venator happen? Sudden announcement?
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Chances are it'll just be something they're told about in their dorm room by a faculty member.
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@CadenGallic I'm not sure if you've covered this, but what types of dust are you using for this RP? I've been things about 'gravity dust' and things like that, so what are the rules on that? Sorry if it's a dumb question, I just don't want to say something that I'll have to change later. I was thinking of Fire, Lightning, Ice, Smoke and Gravity?
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There is actual dust categories. Here take a look.

rwby.wikia.com/wiki/Dust
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@Sho Minazuki Thanks, that helps a good deal. What do you recommend I replace 'smoke' with? I was after a distraction, like a smoke screen. Steam, maybe?
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Steam can actually be achieved by combining fire and water dust. It's an effective way when you want a distraction. Or at least something to block your enemy's eyesight. Though, it may not last depending on how strong the wind blows, or if your opponent blasts it apart with wind.
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It wouldn't be unusual to carry auxiliary equipment like actual smoke bombs, and as said, Steam is pretty close. It would suit your character too, though personally I'd put a maximum use on it, since your character is at the point where you really have to ask yourself... "Is this too much?" The guy is packed full with everything, rifle, sword, dagger/pistol side-arm, a Semblance that not only buffs his own capabilities and allows him to track, but also summons a wolf pack.

I think you should stop there with intrinsic capabilities and consider what extra equipment like smoke bombs and flash bangs you can bring along.
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@Polaris North That's what I was going for, so I checked the list of official dust types and chose steam. :)
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@Sho Minazuki He's not got any extra equipment and I had to nerf his semblance a bit (it can boost him or summon one wolf, but not both). He has his guns and his semblance, but no other equipment. His mask is an aesthetic choice and sort-of hands-free for his scroll but It doesn't have any special gadgets.

The only real tricks are the dust rounds. Do you mean he should have less dust types, or spread them out more? Three on his gun, two as seperate bombs?
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